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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

Hi All,

Thanks for your response to the first 'Write a scene' contest. We'll try to have one contest per week from Tuesday-Monday.

The usual deadlines every week will be as follows.

Last date for posting entries - Saturday

Voting - Sunday and Monday.

Results - Monday evening.

Here are this week's pictures.

All the best!!!

Edit : Kindly do not quote others' posts as it causes confusion.

Edited by visrom - 15 years ago

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

SCENE 1

Daya:I don't know anything sir.😲😲😲 I don't know any of them. I am a decent young gentle man,😳 or you ask Abhijit.... god promise, i dont even know that today is february 14th😲

Vivek: 😆bravo Daya sir!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, even i dont have this much applications today. you are terrific. anyway happy valentine's day to you.😉

ACP: how dare these girls do this to my officer?😡 Abhijit, have you get some cards or love letters like this?
Abhijit: eh???😳 me???😳😳😳 no sir, I.......I didnt get anything.😍
Fredy: once upon a time me too was like this. I am tired of applications and decided to marry then.

ACP: salunkhe, detect finger prints from all these letters and cards, search the seal and go to post office. I dont leave this girls like that.

Edited by chinnu_manikyam - 15 years ago

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Hardik Kansagara

@hrkansagara

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

Scene Number 2

Daya : Arre Maine To Ab Bandh Bolti Kholna Chhod Piano Bajana Suru Kar diya Haina Phir Ab Bhi Kyun CID Ke Ratings Jaa Rahi Hai. Ab Tak To Wapas Aa jana Chahiya Tha.

Vivek : Ha Sir Ab Toh Muje Bhi Lagta Hai Ki Wapas Aapko Bolti Kholna Suru Kar Dena chahiye.

ACP : Haan Ab Aaya Ud Pahad Ke Niche Meri Gadbad Signature Main Dosh Dhoodh Ne Waale Shrimaan Sr. Inspector Daya Ab Bolo Ab Kya Ho Gaya
Fredricks : Sir Kahi Daya Sir Ki Body Main HD Ki Aatma To Nahi Aa Gayi Na
Daya : Freddy Main Soch Raha Hoon Tumhari Baat Main Dum To Hai. Kya Kehte Ho Dr. Tarika Ke Paas Bhej De Kya??

- Hardik Kansagra

Edited by kans_007 - 15 years ago

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somu_05

@somu_05

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

SCENE NO 3

Daya : Oh God....Boss ab yeh konsa Naya Officer aa gaya... Pata nahi ab isko kaise jhelenge...!

Vivek : haha sir... Jhelenge sir.. jaise ab tak jhelte aaye hai....Main toh soch raha hoon...Bechaare freddy sir ko ek aur Joker mil gaya jisey unhe "Sir" Bulana Padega...!

Daya : Yeh kis angle se CID officer lagta hai..? 😕 (tilts his head and tries to find out the angle..😛)

ACP : HAHA...chalo Sab jao....Naye officer ka welcome karo...main yahin khade hoke dekhta hoon..!

Abhijit : Welcome karo..? Main toh yahan Hoon hi nahi....Kyun freddy..?

Freddy : Sir...Aise CID officers ko laane se toh better hai Meri "Wife" Ko hi CID officer bana do....! usko ma'am bolne mein Takleef bhi nahi hogi...! 😆

Edited by somu_05 - 15 years ago

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prabha.

@prabha.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

somu_05 Lovely 😆 😆 😆 Freddie's line is too good.

Edited by prabha. - 15 years ago

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twinklesmiles

@-Twinkles-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

SCENE - 4

Daya - looking at his new piano which was presented by FW after returning from Paris

Daya - 😲yeh kaise hua..?? ab main kya karonga..?? [looking at his piano which has been divided into 100... parts ]

Vivek (to himself) - chalo achcha hua... ab Daya Sir kaam ke baad piano classes nahin ja payenge😉

ACP to Dr. Salunke - Salunke , kuch pata chala... kiske finger prints hai un tukkudo pe..

Dr. Salunke - Yaar.. ab tak ittna hi malum pada ki ye 1 ya 2 insaano ka nahin balki bahaut sare logi ki finger prints hain in tokkudo per..?? [and continues with his work]

Abhijeet to ACP - Sir, mujhe lagta hai ki yeh Daya ki kissi dushmaan ka kaam hoga ..??

Freddy - per Sir, kaun hoga jisse Daya Sir ki piano se dushmani ho sakti hai.. 😕

Abhijeet - main bhi yeh soch raha hu Freddy..??

Dr.Salunke - Pata chal gayye kinke finger prints hai yeh ..

Abhijeet - kaun Dr. sahaab, kya woh koyi criminal tho nahin jisse Daya ne sazza dilwaye ho..??

Dr.Salunke - nahin Abhijeet , yeh dushmanno ka kaam nahi, balki Daya ke dostoo ka kaam hai.. I mean Daya ke fans ka kaam hai..

woh criminals nahin, balki 13 saals se CIDians bane rahey hai

TRIO and Freddy - Vivek shocked to listen this..

Abhijeet - Sir, mujhe lagte hai.. ki CIDians , Daya ki piano se kush nahi hai..🤔

Daya - mujhe pata tha.. ki yeh piano dialogue .. baar baar repeat karne se mere fans naraz ho jayenge...😒

ACP - ha Daya , ab yeh baat FW ko kaun samjayenge ..😡

Vivek - Sir, ab piano nahin hai tho Daya Sir classes nahin jayenge aur tub piano na hone ki wajah se FW yeh dialogue Daya Sir se nahi bolwayenge..😉

Freddy - per Sir, 🤪 agar FW kissi viloin, flute ya guitar ki dialogue banayye tho..??

TRIO - Freddy..!! 😡

Edited by twinklelovesCID - 15 years ago

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Aparaajita Mehra

@aparakshitij

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

SCENE no. 5

Daya:Yeh higher authorities ne kya kar dia?....Sachin ko aaye huye saal bhar bhi nahi hua,itni jaldi use promotion dekar SI bana diya?😲

Vivek:Sachin sir,aur SI!?!Ek thappad toh theek se maar nahi sakte,SI kya banenge ye?Higher authorities shayad bhool gaye hai ki April mahina abhi door hai,abhi se humein fool banane chale hain!Sachin sir,SI!Its the joke for the day!😆

Freddy:Sir,maine yeh soch liya hai ki main DIG sir se complain karunga!Itne saalon me mujhe toh promote nahi kya,yeh Sachin sir ko achanak se promotion kaise mil gaya?

Abhijeet:Maine agar yeh keh diya ki Sachin abhi bhi bachcha hai,toh ACP sir aur bhadak jayenge,main chup hi rehta hoon.

ACP:Aj tum kaunsa bomb phodne wale ho,Salunkhe?Subhe se ek ke bad ek shocking khabren mil rahi hai humein,tum kyun peeche rahoge?😡Kya pata,shayad Tum bhi ek shock de do humein aur keh do ki tumhara bhi transfer ho gaya hai aur ab se lab me sirf Sonali aur Tarika rahenge!🤢

Daya:Yeh Sachin kahin kal se mujhe yeh na keh de ki Daya tum mujhe aj se Sir kaho!Agar aisa ho gaya toh main toh kahin ka nahi rahunga....Maine hi galati ki,isse kuch zyada hi apnapan aur chhoot de di...ab yeh mera?Mera senior ban gaya hai!😡

Edited by aparakshitij - 15 years ago

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

Dr.Salunkhe called everyone in morning at 4:30 a.m. Please come everybody immediatly at Forensic lab I got some important clue which will help to catch the real culprit.Every body rushed to Forensic lab .

Abhijeet: Daya ye tune ya kiya?(Every body in the lab strated laughing)

Daya:Are boss kya kiya aisa meine sab mere tarf dekhake has kyo rahe ho?

Vivek:Sir Aap hadbadi mein eak pair mein Brown juta aur dusare Paire mein Black juta Pehenake aaye hein...Lagata hein apaki Nid puri nahi huvi.😆

Daya:Thik kehe rahe ho meri nid puri nahi huvi ye Salunkhe saab hein na bevakta phone karate hein aur hamari nind puri nahi hoti.Aur Abhijeet tum kyo has rahe ho raat der tak phone pe tum se baat kar raha tha mein to meri aisi halat ke liye tum bhi jimmedar ho.

Dr.Salukhe:Daya meine aap ke kaam ke liye bulaya tha...muze koi shauk nahi hein subah subah aap ko jagane ka .

Fredy:Abhijeet sir Aise to kayi baar hum bevakta Kam ke liye nikalate hein...AAj Daya sir se e galati ho gayi kyoki wo jald se jald us sabut ko dekhana chahate the ye aparadhi bahot khatarnak hein.Esaliye wo time west nahi karana chate the.

(ACP Enters and saw Daya start laughing)

ACP:Daya ye Kiase ho gaya eak pair mein eak justa dusare pair mein dusra juta...Etani jaldi hein kis baat ki thi.😆 Ya Tumhari Nid nahi puri Huvi.

(Staring at Abhijeet ,Vivek and Fredy..Abhijeet remain slient and slitly smiled and puting fingure on his mouth.)

Kyo Abhijeet...Lagta hein na Daya ki nid puri nahi huvi.

Daya:Sir aap bhi ename shamil ho gaye ...Ye sab pehele se hi sab hus rahe the ab aap bhi meri khichayi kar rahe hein.

(Everybody started laughing loudly)

Ab bus bhi kariye ho gayi muzase galati...agali bar mein ghar se nikalanese pehel apane dono pair check karunga ki meine barabar jute pehene hein ya nahi.

Edited by jiya1 - 15 years ago

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prabha.

@prabha.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

@ jiya1 Hey Jiya you seem to have accidentally quoted Somu's post but it looks like a duplicate entry.

@Viz If find this appropriate, please add a rule that no one should quote scenes, this may cause confusion. If you like the scene please hit the like button or post a note using @username.

Edited by prabha. - 15 years ago

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#10

Prabha di IF giving problem I wanted to hit Like button and accidently quoted that post.M exteriml sorr..Then I edited and post my scene there..but browser giving problem..actuall my "Like button: not working.😕 Even faceing problem while editing post.