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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Pulling back to 1st page so that other can participate.

Edited by jiya1 - 14 years ago

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Kajol Srivastava

@princess.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

SCENE NO 7

Daya sir:- arre freddy yeh tumne apna kya haal bana rakha hai?

Vivek:- sir lagta, hai freddy sir ki wife ne unki khub dhulayi ki hai''.shayad isliye yeh aise hi aa gaye.

Acp sir(when saw freddy):- freddy tum aise bueuro mein aaye ho. Tum ek cid officer ho .....na ki ek kachra uthane wale truck ke driver.

Abhijeet sir:- driver?? Yeh to kachra uthane wala hi lag raha hai.

(Acp sir seeing abhi sir. Abhi sir pointing finger of his mouth.)

Freddy sir:- sab mujhe hi suna rahe hai''kisi ne yeh nahi puchha ki meri ye halat hui kaise?

(Acp sir seeing freddy in anger mood)

(Daya sir trying to change the environment)

Daya sir:- freddy yeh hua kaise?

Freddy sir:- vo sir, vo main sadak par jaa raha tha aur'''..

Then suddenly everyone started laughing

Edited by princess. - 14 years ago

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twinklesmiles

@-Twinkles-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

SCENE - 8

Daya - kya agle scene main hum sab criminal ke ghar qualis se ja rahe hey... per qualis tho AC Series ki blast main shayeed hua na..?? tho phir woh wapas kaisse...??

Vivek (to himself) - hmm... jab hum saare officers blast se bach nikal sakte, tho humara qualis kyu nahin..??

Freddy - Abhijeet Sir aap kya soch rahe hai..??

Abhijeet to Freddy - yaar Freddy , us qualis blast ke baad, mujhe laga ki hume nayi gaddi dhi jayegi.. SCOPRPIO ya TAVERA NEO LT... per sab kuch ulta ho gaya..humare saath saath qualis bhi wapis agayye..

ACP in an angry tone - tum sabko qualis ki paddi hai... jabse naye officers ayye hua he.. qualis main jagah ki kammi se mujhe bhi apne seat share karna pad rah ha.. ye phir, mujhe qualis scene se nikala jata hai..

(seeing ACP Sir anger , Abhijeet Sir turns his head in the opposited direction )

Freddy - Sir, mere wife bhi jana chati hai ki hum sab wapis ayye tho ayye kaise.. woh aur bhi pareshan hogi , qualis ko wapis dekhkar

(Freddy, suddenly take a back noticing ACP Sir's angry eyes)

(Daya interrupts to change the topic)

Daya - pata nahin Abhijeet, agli baar humse humare fans ki mulakat hogi tho kya hoga..?? bechare , kitney confused hai hume blast ke baad seeda Paris main dekhar..?? aur ab agle episode se yeh qualis bhi laut ayyegi

Abhijeet - itina pareshan ho mat Daya, jab humse humare fans milenge, tho pehle yeh request karenge ki hum dono episodes ki beech main se gayab na ho..

ACP calms down from his anger after listening to this ...

Edited by twinklelovesCID - 14 years ago

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: twinklelovesCID

Abhijeet - itina pareshan ho mat Daya, jab humse humare fans milenge, tho pehle yeh request karenge ki hum dono episodes ki beech main se gayab na ho..

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

@twinkle nice one !!!! I loved the last 2-3 lines !!!

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

SCENE NO 9

Daya: KYA!!! Mujhe ACP sir ko thappad maarna hoga???? Nahin, yeh mujhse nahin hoga!!!!

Vivek: Sir....aap dariye mat...yeh sirf promo ke liye hai. Episode mein aisa scene nahin hoga.

ACP: Promo ke liye main apne junior se thappad nahin khaaonga. Daya, tum Freddie ko maro.

Freddie: Nahin sir...main Daya sir se maar nahin khaaonga. Meri wife promo dekhkar royegi.

Daya: Abhijeet, tum maar khaane ke liye tayyar ho jaao.

Abhijeet(in his mind): Daya doosri taraf dekh raha hai...main yahan se gaayab ho jaata hoon.

Edited by visrom - 14 years ago

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: visrom

Abhijeet(in his mind): Daya doosri taraf dekh raha hai...main yahan se gaayab ho jaata hoon.

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somu_05

@somu_05

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Great Job.....Super Funny Viz....!!! [:p]

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Only 9 entries so far....waiting for more entries. C'mon everyone. 👏

To all participants - please add the scene number at the top of your posts.

Edited by visrom - 14 years ago

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

@visrom !!! Loved your scene !!!! Superb !!

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