The GAME Begins.Updated part 2 on page1..By Apurva

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DJ_Apurva

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Posted: 14 years ago

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DJ_Apurva

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Guys this Is my First Story. hope u all like it..My first sentimental n emotional story filled with suspense n action.. I know there is many grammatical n spelling error Sorry for that. n ur suggestions r welcomed with a sweet smile.

Actually I thought all r writing story only abt Trio so i shud amke a storry different from it. that's why I highlighted Insp. Pia More but I'll also highlight our trio But not now..

I'll update my Story soon Actually i'm having xams (I hate it. y xams happen in students life. 😡 Agar mera bus chale toh xams per ban lag jayega.)Wish me Best of luck guys..last time Kiya k best of luck se accha marks aaya. this time u all guys.. kam se kam fail toh nahi houngi..

n Frnds I like feedbacks plz after reading story give feedbacks...😊

-Apurva

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BeastInCarnage

@BeastInCarnage

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice story buddy. Keep it up.

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bhavit

@bhavit

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Posted: 14 years ago

Very well written. You deserve a 👏

Waiting for the next part eagerly

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sayhi2su

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice story apurva,

👏👏👏

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sunny

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Posted: 14 years ago

I can only say anything after I read full story.

congrats on your first story (completet it soon).

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aadri-

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Posted: 14 years ago

well written.........good work Apurva 👏

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JP22

@JP22

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Posted: 14 years ago

Apurva u have written good story...Need some improvement...I know it;s your first attempt but u have writeen better thatn those so called professional writers who are working for FW rite now.I have opened new thread for all who's wants writewrite detective stories...also add some forensic background articals..how to enhanced story,enhanced charectors villain.You will find all guidence regarding this.I hope all of you are go through those articals and consider those points and improve your writing.