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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok I have written this in 10 minutes so plot can go hay way but still tried.
case kissa admakhor Admi ka

I will give plot as given below---

a girl is targeted Adamkhor is caught, CID team finds out he killed so many people but who don't know whom. Salunke (or say forensic doctors) tell that all were among age of 70 or above. CID team find it wiered why one set of people targeted by Adamkhor who is just interested in eating human being.

They find something fishy and believes that some other person also involved but how and why don't know. CID team waits at that Quila for any person who arrives as he don't no CID team caught Adamkhor, he do arrives with body but commits suicide so that not caught by CID.

Now CID team have two bodies of one 70 above person and other that person who commit sucide. Salunke tells that some experiment has been carried out on the old aged person body. Now CID realizes that some illegal activity or research going on somewhere, they give Ad of old age person from his family they came to know from where he went missing. from the person(who commit sucide) they find out that he was working as wardboy in *** hospital.

Since wardboy hasn't reached to his boss that means boss might have realized CID is behind. So CID team reaches hospital but in disguise making any one patient ( anyone it could be I would say Salunke he can make guesses about surgoens very easily in his own style can talk). They have to find that pesron who is behind this that is from hospital but alert.

ask me I would love to change title also i think it doesn't suit plot properly.
Edited by sunnyp1414 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: chinnu_manikyam

gumnam bacha to start with....
What you think?



Ok lets start here
KISSA GUMNAM BACHE KA - By CIDians
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Prabha Your idea is great. I hope maximum number of members will participate. But it also requires much time. I will join if I get some extra time.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Prabha m bit confused what are we exactly supposed to do in the above mentioned thread, I mean are we supposed to enhance the original story individually or what sorry m lil confused
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Its new for me too @Sneha, but the basic idea is to re-write the same story the way we would have liked to watch it. Like all of us hated the stupid poison in the sandal, it was unrealistic and silly that a lady will not realize that something wet is touching her foot for 3 months. We also wanted to know what happened to the Baby in the end. When we re-write the story we will answer our unanswered questions and try to create the same story without loopholes.
Edited by prabha. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvrajjj


& what school he'd be going to? 😆

I am glad you are having a good laugh
We felt that when the case title says "Kissa Gumnaan Bache Ka", one small dialog would have been enough. His parents are no more, aunts are criminals and he is the varis of the property for which so much tamasha happened. One dialog of where the kid was taken in the end is all we would have liked to see.
Edited by prabha. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You are welcome to find the REAL loopholes. Please enlighten us. I am sure we can learn a lot and go beyond cribbing as you put it.

Edited by prabha. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvrajjj

what i've noticed in this forum is majority of members think a story is vague coz the trio was absent for major part of the episode or door was rammed by Sachin & not Daya.

Well that is not really true. I agree we get disappointed when our favorite characters go missing and see others doing what we have seen them do all the while. This is a matter of personal choice and I don't think it is mock worthy. When we talk about Favorites, a little bit of being bias, a bit of being irrational does come along. Somewhere that is what Fans are all about. It is true we like to have the old team as much as possible and find it difficult to accept new entries but that is just our choice. When plots became weak, the team and its members became our focus. Now plots are bad and team is lost too. But just because Trio is together and the plot is rubbish we have not really gone gaga over a stupid story. In those circustances we disucsed scenes more than cases. Now we hardly get anything that we like at the end of the case - team, scenes or story.

You are free to disagree with us. Come up with something that would interest members than just mocking at us. I am sure you too will have some valid points which could change the way we think. But only mocking is unfair.

Edited by prabha. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Arre when did I take it personally. I am speaking for majority. This a nice open discussion between people who think differently and its pefectly fine, else why are forums for.

Edited by prabha. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvrajjj

what i've noticed in this forum is majority of members think a story is vague coz the trio was absent for major part of the episode or door was rammed by Sachin & not Daya.

See, the Daya we know is much much more than a door breaker and slapper. He is a wonderful performer with a big screen presence. We have no problems with Sachin breaking doors, as long as we see Daya playing an active role in the investigation, rather than folding his hands and standing behind table in the bureau with hardly 2-3 dialogues.
Edited by visrom - 15 years ago

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