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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#351

Thanks monika ,ravi,twinkal and visrom for liking and appriciating my work.

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DJ_Apurva

@DJ_Apurva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: jiya1

Vaise es episode mein nahi tha kuch khaas

Gass leakage ke scene mein hamari band ho gayi thi saas

Bachane ke chakkar mein Abhi sir ka karamati coat bhi shahid ho gaya

hamare dil par se bahut bada bhaar hat gaya

Really Becoz of gas leakage My heart begin to beat more faster. I thought wat will happen to Abhijeet Sir n Tasha Ma'm. Loved ur line abt the coat. Really it destroyed..😆

Jiya di as I told earlier I'm fan of ur creations. This one is gr8. Lovely N well written + described.👏👏👏

-Apurva

Edited by DJ_Apurva - 14 years ago

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#353

Lovely poem Jiya di !!! I really loved each and every stanza of it !!

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sayhi2su

@sayhi2su

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#354

nice poem jia di.

👏👏👏

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sneh.

@sneh.

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#355

Hey sorry for late reply. Lovely update in a poetic form, Jiya you are the queen of ideas yaar. Jiyo Jiya

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#356

@Apurva thaks ..nice to hear i have fan...thaks bdy

@Sneha aapake ashirwad ke liye thanks ....thaks again for liking my poem

bhavana and shay thaks for lking and appriciating my peom.

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sneh.

@sneh.

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#357

Jiya main kaun hoti hoon aapko Aashirwad dene wale yeh toh bas humare dil ki dua hain jo keyboard ke dware nikal gayi 😉

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m_kal2011

@m_kal2011

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#358

Sorry for late response, Jiya.
Your poem is really nice, as usual.
Great work. 👏 👏

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jatt48

@jatt48

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#359

salam,,,jiya very nice poem,,wonderfull work,,mere favorite lines

Dono banake gaye wo gundo ke Customber

chha gaye the wo dono hum sab par

usa din episode dekhakar hame bahut maza aaya

wa Fireworks waalo aapane kya episode banaya

Pehela episode dekhake hum bahut khush huve the

dusara episode dekhane ke liye bahut excite the

Hamare es excitement pe jald hi pani pad gaya

Jab credit pe NItica aur Salil ka naam aa gaya

agar jiya app ki ejazat hoto ham kuch kahain,,,IF par bohot see aesse topics nazar araha hain jin main ye kaha jaraha ha CID katam ho raha ha,,,CID katam hojae ga soch kar dil gabrata ha kia karon,,,,,please istarah ki batain na karo,,,CID ko main hamasha dekhna chahti hon or mera khial ha ham sab,,,,

ABHIJEET KALIA DIL GAA RAHA HA,,,,,,,,,😍😍😍

TERE BAGAR JAHAN MAIN KOE KAMI SEE THE

BATAK RAHI THE JAVANI ANDARE RAHON MAIN

SUKUN DILKO MILA AKA TERE BAHON MAIN

MAIN AIK KOHE HOE MOJJ HON TU SAHIL HA

JAHAN BHE JAON YE LAGTA HA TERE MAHFIL HA

TU ISS TARAH SEE MERE ZINDAGI MAIN SHAMIL HA

TERE JAMAL SEE ROSHAN HA KAENAT MERE

MERE TALASH TERE DILKASHI RAHA BAKI

KHUDA KARA KA YE DEWANAGI RAHA BAKI

TERE WAFA HI MERE HAR KHUSHI KA HASIL HA

JAHAN BHE JAON YE LAGTA HA TERE MAHFIL HA

TU ISS TARAH SEE MERE ZINDAGI MAIN SHAMIL HA

😭😭😭😳😳

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#360

Thanks m_Kal,nycsweetie and beena for appriciationg my poems.been o have made lovely poem on abhijeet.👏 CID katam nahi ho raha hein...don't worry.

Edited by jiya1 - 14 years ago

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