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JP22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#341

Bhagavan ka shukriya hein Prabha di

Aakhir Karamati coat ki chhuutti kar di

Bus ahi hein duva us rab se

Bus dedo jaldi se chhutakara Aahat specialist se

Karamati Coat shahid ho gaya(pointed by arrow)

Edited by jiya1 - 14 years ago

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JP22

@JP22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#342

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#343

very nice. weeks journey.👏. few lines were just more than awesome.

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#344

Lovely poem......great description of the entire experience till date!!!
Loved the line which said..DON team ki "cool" snaps saamne rakhke unhe maarne ka plan bana raha tha!😆😆😆

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#345

Thanks sunny for lovely commets..shagz and chinnu thanks for liking?

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twinklesmiles

@-Twinkles-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#346

Jiya di ... must appreciate ur work and love for CID ... 👏👏👏👏

I really love the way you use ur style and talent in building up ur poems... 😳 each of your creations are tooo awesome..😊😊

I specially loved Sr. Inspector. Ahiheet and aapka Daya... there are toooo.... emotional 😭😭😭 ..

Edited by twinkle.smiles - 14 years ago

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Monika

@monika21

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: jiya1
Bhagavan ka shukriya hein Prabha di

Aakhir Karamati coat ki chhuutti kar di

Bus ahi hein duva us rab se

Bus dedo jaldi se chhutakara Aahat specialist se

Karamati Coat shahid ho gaya(pointed by arrow) 😆 😆

😆 😆 😆 i was thinking about visrom... she must be happy as doesn't like coats.. 😊

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prabha.

@prabha.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#348

Well she is not too happy, she strongly believes the coat with be back after surgery and makeover.

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Monika

@monika21

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#349

very nice jiya...

very touchy... & true...

"Kaisa hoga Trio ke bina ab gujara hamara

soney waalo kyo chhin rahein ho hamare jineka aap sahara

yahi sochkar hum sab rone lage

CID ke pyare pal yaad karane lage"

"Abhijeet aur Daya tapori ban kar gundo ko dhund rahein the

Taopri ke avatar mein kya mast dikh rahe the" .....😳 😳 😳

too good dear... 👏 👏 👏

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Monika

@monika21

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: prabha.
Well she is not too happy, she strongly believes the coat with be back after surgery and makeover.

hahahaha.. well said prabha make over will must be included different colors also..😆 😆 😆 sorry.. again quoting your msg.. but with quoting.. maza nahi aata.

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