Finally finished reading all the stories a while ago.
First, I'd like to tip my hat to everyone for the wonderful work they have done. Had a great time reading all of them and it was really good to see the great plotting and sweet moments between our characters. All of them are so good, each seems better than the other! Posting my views on every story now -
Story 1 - Very well and coherently written, the narration was very good. Great work of showing ACP's faith in his team and Abhi-Daya's excellent techniques, thrilling investigation work and the final confrontation was very good. 😃
Story 2 - The planning and method of kidnapping was well done indeed, but I had a little problem reading it because the writing style and narration were a little confusing and took a bit of time to properly understand. But that's a minor issue, I really liked the overall story, good work! 😊
Story 3 - Amazing story, the twist at the end was very unexpected and cleverly written. Also a clever method of portraying the newcomers in a proper way and keeping them away for the majority of the story 😆 The Abhi-Daya moments were great too. Great work! 😃
Story 4 - Easily one of the best, yaar padh ke mazaa aa gaya. The writing style and narration is really good, the suspense and thrill were very well built up. What a well-developed red herring of having the suspicion revolve around ACP sir and giving him a chance to demonstrate his skill at dodging interrogation.
This the way the episode "ACP Pradyuman Giraftaar" should've been done. Great plot and ending too. Kudos to the writer! 👍🏼 👏
Story 5 - Well written, good suspense buildup, a little long though.
Story 6 - Well written, very nice idea of bringing in the back-story of ACP sir into it. The story was well planned and plot was well developed, good job revolving the suspense around ACP and great moments between the team. 😊
Story 7 - The plot was good and appropriate, I liked the narration which was clear and easy to read. The method of kidnapping could've been a little detailed, though, but I liked it a lot overall. 😊
Story 8 - The plot was very well developed and tension aptly built regarding how CID will manage to live up to their reputation. The ugly side of politics is shown well and we feel glad about who the culprit turns out to be. Good moments between the team again, great work. 😊
Story 9 - Again, one of the best - kya gazab ki plotting ki yaar! Great job of showing ACP as a potential suspect and his desperation, great investigation by the team, great plot of catching the culprits. Tension and suspense was very well built and the climax was nerve-wracking and very well written, I actually cringed when the lights turned off! The narration was apt and well done too. Again, kudos to the writer! 👏👏😃
Story 10 - The plot was very well-made again, and the ending was very good, great moments between the team. The suspense was built well and investigative procedure involving sniffer dogs was very good and authentic. I found it a little unrealistic that a group of people managed to abduct the guy in that manner without alerting such a tight security, but it's plausible and works well with the story, so no problems. Great work by the writer! 😃👍🏼
Story 11 - The motive and method of kidnapping was unique and well-written, great investigation by our team again and I loved the disguise scene! Great moments between the team again. Great work! 😊 😃
I find it extremely hard to rank these compararively, because each is so good. I'll do my best though and submit the ratings shortly. Great work everyone, again, I had a great time reading these great stories and for me you're all true winners! And excellent work by @visrom organising this great contest. 😃
Edited by DemonStar - 15 years ago
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