Jiya's Poems Station-1..GOOD BYE ALL OF U - Page 24

Ok after saying you jiya to go to sleep and take rest I myself went for sleep. After reading about your friends situation I can just say you are great.

as far as poem of Boys obsession is concerned kuch jyada nahi hogaya.. It was very well nice written but _______ phir bhi.

Originally posted by: jiya1

thank you zerr for liking my poem..i hope u enjoyed it😃

I enjoy all your poems Jiya. Thanks for writing 👍🏼

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

Ok after saying you jiya to go to sleep and take rest I myself went for sleep. After reading about your friends situation I can just say you are great.

as far as poem of Boys obsession is concerned kuch jyada nahi hogaya.. It was very well nice written but _______ phir bhi.

he sunny thank you..aur meine jab ladakiyon ke dram ke baare mein likha tab enjoy kar rahe the...aur ladakon ki baat bataye...to kuch jyada hi likha...this is not fair😉😛

you wrote about girls from girls point of view but you wrote about boys also from girls point of view. seems to me. Ladkiyon ke nazariye se ladke kyun CID dekte hai.

Read your second creation today about Freddy. as usual actually.
One thing words kam pad rahe hai. writing same words again. excellent written.

rhyming of this line

BIwi wo apani darata hein wo

couldn't get rhyme or say tuning with adjacent lines. I think spelling mistake somewhere. I am very bad at poems

Again fantastic job..... ab bolne mein bhi sharam aati hai!!!!😆😆😆👏👏⭐️

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

you wrote about girls from girls point of view but you wrote about boys also from girls point of view. seems to me. Ladkiyon ke nazariye se ladke kyun CID dekte hai.

Read your second creation today about Freddy. as usual actually.
One thing words kam pad rahe hai. writing same words again. excellent written.

rhyming of this line

BIwi wo apani darata hein wo

couldn't get rhyme or say tuning with adjacent lines. I think spelling mistake somewhere. I am very bad at poems

yes

Originally posted by: Shagnika

Again fantastic job..... ab bolne mein bhi sharam aati hai!!!!😆😆😆👏👏⭐️

hey shaggy thank you but sharm aane ki ka baat hein...mein to aaap sab ke liye hi poem banati hun...hey friends agar aap ko koi request hein to bataye jaise prabha di ne muze kal kaha tha aasha ke baare mein likho...mein wo jarr puri karane ki koshish karungi😃

Originally posted by: Shagnika

😆 😆This ones a funny one!!! Sorry but mujhe ise padte rym sirf ek ladka hi yaad aa raha tha!! Jiya di can u guess??? 😉

and sorry boys, but it sounded quite right! Sunny jeet bhinder!!!!

Kaun??? 😲
about creations jiya di ab ton kehne ki bhi nahi jaroorat ..fantastic work again
👏

Originally posted by: zerry123

I enjoy all your poems Jiya. Thanks for writing 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Shagnika

😆 😆This ones a funny one!!! Sorry but mujhe ise padte rym sirf ek ladka hi yaad aa raha tha!! Jiya di can u guess??? 😉

and sorry boys, but it sounded quite right! Sunny jeet bhinder!!!!

[I] Kaun??? 😲