Story 2: CID in Danger

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Posted: 15 years ago

Your title suits the present situation. CID in danger.

Why are you in rush while write story. Take your time. Just elaborate it. Mazza aye.

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

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Posted: 15 years ago

Where is scene 3 and 4. I missed it or some where

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Originally posted by: sunnyp1414
Where is scene 3 and 4. I missed it or some where

Oh no! Made a mistake while typing. Fixed.

Edited by cheenti - 15 years ago

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sneh.

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Posted: 15 years ago

the plot is good but I think You should elaborate it

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Bhavanab

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey plot innovative or achcha hai you should have written it more and elaborate the situations with more of dialogues anyways all the best for ur next story 👍🏼

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Originally posted by: didobhav
hey plot innovative or achcha hai you should have written it more and elaborate the situations with more of dialogues anyways all the best for ur next story 👍🏼

Thanks.
I am just a beginner in writing detective stories.