STORY CONTEST - 1 : CRY FOR HELP [Contest Closed] - Page 9

My Comments on the stories:-

STORY 1 :-Very nice attempt,sweetly portrayed Abhi Sir's Character and completely in sinc with the plot.Just one suggestion,emotional part thoda zyada ho gaya.Anyways Gr8 work keep it up,hope to read many more stories from you 👏 👏

STORY 2 :- nice attempt but just wished agar aur thoda fast-paced hotha,your hardwork was clearly visible waiting to read your next story soon 👏 👏

STORY 3:- good one the part that the husband was faking his death was different and innovative,but one suggestion thoda jaldi khatam ho gaya wished it was longer thoda aur padne ka mazaa aatha anyways all the best for your next one 👏 👏

STORY 4 :-Very nice attempt,I don't have any suggestions to give keep it up 👏 👏

STORY 5:- good work but just i doubt if she already knew ACP then why didn't she ask his help before only why wait for so long ?? liked that every scene was connected to the other but thode zyaada scenes hone ke wajah se i lost track in between but story wise great work 👏 👏
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STORY 6:- Very exciting and an innovative end,the climax was the showstealer,and i was expecting such one from the writer because i kind of know who it is 😉 👏 👏

STORY 7 :-NICE one,I liked it quite a bit simple and,KEEP IT UP 👏 👏

STORY 8 :- I liked it but found it a little confusing,but investigation wise a good one,hoping to read more from you soon 👏 👏

STORY 9:-Good work,interesting and caught my attention well I started reading randomly and yours was the first one so all the best for your future stories just one request don't write that you r a non-med student earlier that changes the point of view for a second you could have mentioned it at the end of the story,anyways keep it up 👏 👏

STORY 10:-good attempt just wished the no.of characters were a little less maybe because the names used are very common i got a little confused,but otherwise a liked it all the best for your future stories 👏 👏

STORY 11:-Nice one,i liked it,disguise part was good,Keep it up 👏 👏

STORY 12:- In one word INTERESTING,liked the way the two stories got connected and the way Abhi sir was potrayed and his uneasiness while he lied to Daya,Freddy i wish we could see you doing such things and what i liked the most no forensic scene and no Abhi-Taarika flirting.Keep it up hoping to read more from you 👏 👏

STORY 13:-Gr8 attempt,i liked it and the last message given by ACP sir was so true and relevant,ALL THE BEST 👏 👏
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At the end I would say great attempt by everyone,We people are far better than the present story writers what say ?? 😉 .I wrote my comments from the angle of a normal reader.Hoping to read many more stories like these,All the writers give apat on your back and clap for yourself you are worth it 👏 👏

posted my feedback on page 9 of this post.

Hi participants, non-participants....Prabha....what's the status of this????

I've sent in my scores what about the others ?

i was just wondering, if the ratings given by X for his own story is not accepted, then that would mean that if 4 people vote, out of them 4 stories would have only three ratings each
I hope you guys understood what I'm trying to say..I mean it would be unfair on those people who have sent their rankings. this problem can be overcome only if all the participants, as well as members send their rankings.
Guys we cant force you, and I know it is very difficult to read all stories in such a short period of time, but please, do try to send your rankings at the earliest.

so wen is d deadline? wen will we know d result? and after d contest will we know who d writer of each story is?

Guys you need to look at the first post of this thread, the deadline is very clearly mentioned there. Winning story will be declared the same day. I had promised that I will keep the writers anonymous till the winning story is declared. After that I will leave it to the writers to reveal themselves.

Friends keep writing something or the other in this thread to keep it in the first page there are many new people who have joined in this forum and page 1 discussion is active so we can't let this thread going peeche and peeche otherwise the new people will not even get to know ki aisa ek competition hua hai and send in their rating.

Everyone writers or readers do send in your ratings

@prabha: My ratings have not been added 😲