FEEDBACK FROM A READER
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My Analyses for each story... Authors, please dont mind whatever am going to say!!! Though I have guessed some writers, very specially undoubtedly one of them, I am still not sure of the identity... Irrespectively am going to treat everyone equally!!
Story 1- Very unusual plot! The writing is good! The idea is fresh. It was awkward reading dialogues in hindi, but nevertheless the writer has written with confidence. And I have an idea who wrote it 😛 Kudos! And keep it up!👏
Story 2- Loved it! Very simple and straightforward! Language is crystal clear and the culprit is slightly unexpected. And the way she was framed- wow, fantastic! And I seem to know who wrote this too!! 👏 All the best for the future stories!😃
Story 3- Very nicely short and crisp!! The writer hasnt wasted any time with unnecessary scenes. Everyone in this story is professional!! 👏 Writer of this story, This is really a nice story with a very cool fantastic twist! You keep it up!👏😛
Story 4- Very good and stylish and professionally handled story. No unnecessary scene, though the dinner scene is a bit tarika-centric. U cud have given some other conversation! Abhi-Daya dont always talk abt tarika! But the rest of the story was really really good and unexpected. Salunkhe's way of analysing the photo was really great!👏😊
Story 5- Really fantastic, fast paced, active, no-nonsense and realistic! The only thing is it took some time to read because of the coloured fonts. It made my eyes strained. But I enjoyed reading it!👏😛
Story 6- 😊 As usual, very unusual ending! Very much like the old CID era! Twist after twist and d culprit actually a culprit. Really well written!👏 Reminded me of the Asha-Sudhakar era!
Story 7- The writer I have seemed to guess... And it was fun to read it!! Really clear and fast and realistic! Nothing to criticise actually! Really well-written! Keep it up!😊👏
Story 8- A little confusing nevertheless good handling of the plot. Well managed trick to bring up a bit of Abhi's past, but then it shifted a bit from the plot. It became Abhi-centric at the end, with him (Again!) in the hospital. Still too emotional scenes were not there and that was gud. Anyway. Good writing😊👏
Story 9- Guessed the writer again and its quite wow! Really touching! And Acp shone through out and Abhi had full trust in wat he was doing! Daya and others were also very gud! Professionally handled story with a twist! really gud!😃👏
Story 10- No comment. quite okay and a little long and abrupt! But a gud reading! Hindi too simplistic! Culprit was expected! But nevertheless very nice attempt. But more confidence is needed to write such stories! And have guessed who the writer is... There are some bits of unrealistic loose ends too. But very nice and refreshing to read too!😛👏
Story 11- Ending was fantastic and realistic! Very funny scenes in parts of the stories- I liked that! Especially in the disguise discussion and the disguise scenes! Abhi sir and his disguise- well utilized! Very gud work!👏 Really keep it up!😊
Story 12- Unusual and full of suspense👏. Several subplots merged together in a gud attempt! Slightly confusing and a bit away from the central plot, but nevertheless really gud job! Wonderfully written!😃
Story 13- A very well written story. But confusing at parts... Ending was a twist 👏and that was unusual! Very gud job! Kudos! And I feel I know who the writer is!😛
Each story is well-written and each writer has really tried! Very difficult to rate! Keep it up!
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