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yeh neche dhabe (jo Faiza ne meri liye banaya) mein hai na 😳 😉 ......woh paar lijiye......woh meri pehli shayari hai 😳......yeh shayri shuru hoti hai aise 'Kash Humare Paas Bhi....'



jab aur likhon gi toh suna doon gi........lekin hum ache shayar nahin hai 😳 😉 😳 ......

aur sach sach bataye ga ke yeh kaisi shayari hai......... 😳

haan sumra ji ....humne apka ye neche likha sher klabka padhliya.....bahut badhiya....ap likhte rahen aur ek lajawab shayara bane ye dua hai humari... 😛😛

aur ab batayiye ye humari shayri[kavita]kaisi hai??? 😳

~ chalte jana hai ~

baadal jab chhate hain,bundein barsatein hain,man mein bechhaini kar..dil ko tarsaate hain..
aakash ka soonapan man mein to chhata hai,thandi hawa ka jhonka fir kyun mujhe chhu jata hai..
maine seekha hai ek jhonkhe se hi khush hojana..
kyunki mujhe to bas hai chalte jana! ! !

neele gagan mein gum ye dil..panchhi jaise udta ye dil..
dhundhta hai jaane kise..kaun hai aakhir iski manzil !
maine seekha hai bin Manzil bhi safar mein muskurana..
kyunki mujhe to bas hai chalte jana ! ! !

Manzil ka naa koi thikana..is gagan mein bas chalte jaana..
andhere aakash mein..sooni kaaynaat mein..
zindagi ki barsaat mein..nahin mera koi Aashiyaana..
mere Jeevan ka bas yahi fasaana...
kyunki mujhe to bas hai chalte hiii jaana.............

LEKHAK- friend_125 urf nikita agrawal...😳

Acha toh yeh Sahyri tumne likhi hain... mujhe jayda toh pata nahin shayri ka lekin itna jarur kahuge ki tumne likhi bhaut hi achi hain... sach main keh rahi hoon... acha likha hain...

apni aur bhi shayris sunwana mujhe jab bhi likho...

Originally posted by: princezna

Acha toh yeh Sahyri tumne likhi hain... mujhe jayda toh pata nahin shayri ka lekin itna jarur kahuge ki tumne likhi bhaut hi achi hain... sach main keh rahi hoon... acha likha hain...

apni aur bhi shayris sunwana mujhe jab bhi likho...

dhanyawad rajni ji😛...jee han main likhti hi rehti hun....aur jaroor sunaungi apko apni shayriyan..mujhe likhne ka shauk hai...par ajkal waqt ki kami ke chalte jara likh nahi parahi hun.

Haila Nikki............woh kitni achi thi.....humein bhi bohut zyada nahin pata kavita ke baare mein....lekin thora bohut pata hi hai............aur woh bohut achi hai jo apne likha hai 😊

shukriya sumra 😳 😛
jald hi tumhe ek aur sunaungi...umeed karti hun pasand ayegi tumhe 😳 😆

Originally posted by: friend_125

dhanyawad rajni ji😛...jee han main likhti hi rehti hun....aur jaroor sunaungi apko apni shayriyan..mujhe likhne ka shauk hai...par ajkal waqt ki kami ke chalte jara likh nahi parahi hun.

Nikita ji aap naraz mat hona... dekhe hamne yeh baat Sumra ki shayri ki liye likhi thi... tab tak hamne sirf Sumraki shayri hi padhi thi aapki nahin.... lekin abhi aapki kavita bhi padhi hain.... bhaut hi jayda achi likhi hain aapne.... bhaut acha likhte ho aap bhi.......👏

Sumra tumne bhi bahut acha likha hain.... 👏👏..asie hi aur acha likha karon...

Shukriya Rajni ji. 😳

Humne ek aur shayri likhi hui hai joh Sher-O-Shayri waali jaaga mein. Woh meri dusri shayri hai. 😳


Aur bohut bohut shukriya 😛 ....aapko pasand aayi 😳 .........iss baat kille bohut shukriya....mere liye bohut myne rakhta hai. 😳

@Nikki: Ji zaroor hume pasand aaye gi.😊

Ismain shukriya kasia..ab tumne achi likhi hain toh achi hi bolugi na main...

asie hi aur acha acha likho aur hame sunao... 😊

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=972140

udhar meri ek shayri hai joh sher-o-shayari waali jaaga mein hai...............woh par-kar batayein zara ke kaise hai woh😳..............sach sach😳