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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW!!!

Looks like you are on the go! Keep posting!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow VAasha your on fire !!!👏👏👏

Really loving this .I just hope that the creatives pass by your post ..And do this😉

Very very good Vaasha ..Im sure almost everyone on the forum feels the same way as you ..We all want RAdika to ingnore and be rude to abhay😉

Thank you Vaasha ..Please continue soon😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOOOOW!!!! do continue your update because everyone in this forum expects these kind of dialogues from radhika...But what to do stupid writers they don't know how to write...

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WOW! Great JOB! :) keep posting! ;) Thanks for the pm also. =] And thanks for the post!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was awesome Vasha! Lets see what happens next
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: hotie

I like your thoughts hope it goes this way, I want radhika to be strong.

wow!
very very nice!
but will Radika do this?😕
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I really like this. I can't wait for the next part!
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Love your fan fiction do continue...it would have been nice to see that scene....,maybe in the future, The truth is Radhika has all the cards in her hands but she doesnt know it yet.
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Wow great work and keep posting. 😉
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THIRD PART

Dev didn't answer.

"your silence says everything" radhika said smiling

Dev looked at her hurt. Mr wanted to say something but didn't know what to say.

"radhika stay out of mine and de'.i mean ...abhay's personal life," kanika said rudely.

Everyone looked at kanika. Dev looked at her angrily

"excuse me kanikaji, what did you just say, dev?" radhika asked.

Dev was listening attentively.

"nah..nahii. I said dev because you kept saying dev and it stuck in my head," kanika managed to say.

"acha, usually a hasband's name remains in a wife's head,"

"radhika, why don't you be quite? And stop this drama!" kanika yelled

"KANIKA!" dev yelled. Everyone looked at him. Radhika turned to face kanika.

"kanikaji, get one thing straight, I was speaking to abhay not you," she turned to face dev ,"abhay babu, I won't bother you again, but if you ever get back your memory, remember that your real wife Radhika Dev Raj Purohit and your real family was and still is waiting for you," a tear ran town her cheek.

With a very serious expression, she took his suitcase in one hand and held his next hand and escorted towards the door. Everyone watched on. Dev was looking at radhika. But before she reached the door she tripped and the payal she was wearing scraped her. She let out a slight moan. Dev saw blood on the floor, but radhika kept on walking. Everyone was watching.

"radhikaji," dev called, but radhika didn't stop. He called again but she didn't stop. He got fustrated.

"radhika!" he called and pulled her towards him. The suitcase fell down and radhika crushed on him. her hands were on his chest. He looked at her lovingly. Radhika met his gaze and then looked away and stepped away from him. Mr and kanika didn't know what to say. Everyone else was watching radev.

"kya hua?" radhika asked sternly

"you're bleeding," he said concerning.

"so!" she replied rudely.

"so'what do you mean so," he knelt down to see how bad an injury it was. She stepped back.

"radhika, let me check to see how bad it is," he said concerly, as he stood up.

"kyun?" she asked with a rude tone again, walking away so that his back would face hers. but inside she smiled knowing that he cared, know that he's dev and he's showing it. But she kept a serious expression.

"because the cut could be deep," he said concernly.

"what do you care?" she asked her voice getting louder and angrier.

"I just do," he said with his voice getting louder.

"abhay just forget it," kanika said coming closer and holding his shoulder. Dev didn't like that so his moved away from her and went and stood in front of radhika. Kanika eyes opened wider, so did mr's. everyone else was smiling.

Radhika looked at dev angrily.

"no, why don't you just forget it!" radhika said louder ,"I said that I won't bother you again!" she screamed.

"no I won't just forget it!" he screamed back.

"kyun? Hum aapke hain kaun?" she sceamed ,"you said that I share no relation to you, so what do you care! And why do you have to see about my injury? Huh? Dadima can, maaji can, like I said, just forget it," she screamed, "anyways,thanks for the concern," she said calming down. Dev looked down and saw more blood.

"radhika please,"

"what did you call me?" she asked seriously ,"as far as I know only mere pati, babhi, behin aur brother In law calls me by my name"(I don't know if I left out anyone, If I did please forgive me)

Dev thought about what he was saying ,"I'm sorry but please let me,"

she thought for a while ,"fine," she added roughly.

He led her towards the sofa and made her sit. He was not looking at him. Mr and kanika were stunned.

Dev looked at her for a while and felt hurt cause she wasn't looking at him, he looked down and slightly raised her sari skirt to see the cut. Then he saw the payal. he looked at it shocked.

Hi, I updted,

Please comment and critcize

Edited by sugarandspice - 15 years ago

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