what do you think? part 7 page 10 - Page 3

I really liked this part! I love seeing Dev's concern for Radhika! Finally Dev sees the payal! Can't wait for your next update!

Originally posted by: *Maleena*

I really like this. I can't wait for the next part!

I like it, I wonder what he will do when he sees the payal!

God please update soon!

Very interesting😆😃 keep it up.

WOW!!! This is interesting Please update soon!

Nice update Vaasha ..👏

OMG, this part was so good dear! Please keep going, i am dying to see Rads ignoring Dev but like i wouldnt be able to see that in the episodes but i am atleast getting to read...😃

Great work!

I can't wait to see what happens. I love it, give him the cold shoulder and see how it hurts and pain him to know she will leave him. I love it......cant wait

Very interesting update. 😃
Keep it up.

Part 4

The camera dramatically zooms to the payal then to dev's face. Dev looks at radhika shockingly. His face expression looks like he was remembering something. Suddenly we see a white light and then in black and white video showing radev's engagement and radev's conversation, then we see where he took the photo of her and she feel, and then she ran and the payal fell off and he got it, and then where he gave it back to her. Then the camera zooms out. We see dev's shocked expression and his hand is filled of blood, radhika's blood.

"what radhika was saying is………is tr... true," he thought to himself.

He looked at her, with tears in his eyes. He hated himself for how he treated her. Then he decided what he'd do. He took care of cut and stood up. Radhika looked at him and then stood.

"thanks," she said coldly and turned away from him.

"no problem. Radhikaji," he called

"kya hai?"

"where is your other payal?" he asked innocently. Radhika looked at him shocked.

"I don't know, it's…….lost. I don't know, maybe my dev has it,"

"why would you say that?"

"why are you so interested in knowing about it? Why do you care?" she added rudely.

"I just want to know," he said sternly.

"fine. I lost it once and he had it," she told him the entire story ,"and whenever he missed me, he'd think about the payal, okay know you know dev and my story and like I said before I'm not going to let someone take dev's place and rights, so please get out," she said.

"I'm not going to let someone take dev's place and rights, get out" those were the words ringing in his head and it pinched his heart so bad.

"radhika..don't be so hard on damaandbabu," mr said.

"if she can't stay in a house with abhay, why doesn't she go." Kanika suggested.

"KANIKA!" dev yelled

"no, abhay, you said you'll stay here for a while, to save the rajpurohit title, and you always keep your promises, so if she can't bear the fact of adhay in the same house as her, I suggest she leave the house for a while. Dev looked at her angrily and everyone else surprisingly.

"this girl will ruin my plans!" mr thought

Kanika snatched radhika's hand. Radhika closed her eyes.

"Kanha, if you are with me, please help me. If what I'm doing is right, please help me," radhika asked.

"radhika, I will always help you because what you are doing is right," Kanha replied and then disappeared.

Radhika opened her eyes, fearlessly. Kanika was pulling radhika but radhika wasn't moving. She looked at an angry radhika fearfully. Everyone inclusing dev was watching on shocked. Radhika looked her left hand being held by kanika's right hand and looked at kanika seriously. Kanika got frightened. Radhika tightly gripped kanika hand and release it from her hand and held kanika's hand angrily and raised it. She looked at with all anger.

"you want to throw me out of this house? Who are you to take that decision?" she asked fearlessly. No answer from kanika. The angrier radhika got, the tighter she gripped kanika's hands.

"I asked you something," she said as she gripped kanika's hand tighter ,"and what did you say before? To stop this drama?"

"i…i.i.i.i.i..ii.i." kanika said.

"if anyone should be thrown out of this house, it should be you!"

Kanika eyes almost popped out.

"radhikaji what are you saying?" kanika asked

"I know exactly what I am saying. You came into this house and disrespected my family and I and I kept my mouth shut for to long. And I am not going to stand here and take that any more." Radhika said angrily. She pulled kanika towards the door and threw her out of the house.kanika looked at radhika shocked and radhika at kanika angrily. then radhika closed the door and turned to she her family shocked, but very very happy.

"finally, she's gone," birju said happily.

"haan birju bahia, now, only three more person needs to leave this house," radhika said. Everyone looked at her. Mr was getting worried.

"choti bahu," vishali called.

"haan maaji"

"only two, maataraji and rajan babu, dev doesn't have to go," vishali said with her eyes getting a bit teary. She away from her son for five years and the pain was too much. And it pained her more everytime he said that he was abhay.

"maaji," she said approaching her ,"maaji, I my heart, I know he's dev, but he said he's abhay. Maaji there's a saying that love is like a bird, you need to let it free and if it comes back to you it's yours, if it doesn't, it was never yours. Maaji, we need to let abhay babu go. If he's really dev, he will come back if he's abhay, he won't," radhika said as tears rolled down her cheeks.

Vishali hugged radhika as she cried. Dev himself wanted to cry but didn't.

"choti bahu," dadima called," radhika released vishali and approached dadima.

Dadi placed her hand on radhika's head with a smile.

"choti bahu is right. If he's dev, he'll come back." Dev looked at dadima, with teardrops glistening in his eyes. Radhika looked at dev. She approached him.

"abhay babu, thank you for everything, but, it's time you to go back to you're so called family. One thing, remember what I said, when you're ready, you real family and your real wife are waiting for you," she said all this, looking into his eyes.

A teardrop rolled down her cheek. Dev saw it and raised his hand to wipe it. When radhika saw his hand approaching her cheek, she held his hand to stop him. That pained him so much. Then she put his hand down and pulled escorted him towards the door.

"you forgot to say that you met me in vindervan," he said lovingly when they were a few inches from the door.

Radhika stopped and looked at him shocked

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