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Posted: 15 years ago
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Some hindi poetry (from Jaishankar Prasad's Kamayani)
Dev to Radhika while gazing in her eyes:
Radhika, tum keval shraddha ho
vishwas rajat nag pag tal ke
piyush shrot si baah karo
jeevan ke sunder samtal pe
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Another Hindi peom by Sumitranandan Pant (Anguitha)
Dev describing Radhika to Dadi after seeing her in Rasleela. I have tried to really have a rough transaltion in English, but it is difficult and doesn't do justice to the words.
veh kaisi thi
ab na bata paunga
veh vaisi thi
pratham pranay ki ankhon se usko dekha
youvan uday, pranay ki thi voh pratham sunhali rekha
Swapano ka saundarya, kalpana ka madhuray
hriday mein bhar, aai thi voh
How was she?
Will not be able to describe
she was like that
I saw her with the eyes of first love
In her prime of youth, she was love's first sunray
She came, her heart filled with
beauty of her dreams and sweatness of her imagination
Edited by why3 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun_singh

Misti lovely as always...The poem was apt for dev and radhika.. Sweetest Jodi ever on tv..



Thanks sun_singh. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: gardes

Perfect. Radhika's tearful pleas for what she seeks and the pecking order in which she seeks!



😊😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajsri

Wow Misti ... what beautiful adaptations

👏 👏 I think someone had mentioned in another thread ... you should put all your poems in one thread so people can come in and read them
👏



Thanks Rajsri.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sigrid

misti, here we go again dear. Excellent.👍🏼
Radhika is a lucky one. all fingers in ghee. 😆 😆



Thanks Sigrid 😊

Radhika is lucky regarding Dev, but not regarding other things...........its like there is always light at the end of a long tunnel.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: chalhov

😊 Lovely Misti keep it up



Thank you chalov 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: bee5

Mishti,

That was a very good adaptation.👍🏼

But you know in both the versions of the peoms, I felt Radhika is at advantage. You know like the love is not at equal level (From just the 2 lines of her version). But later, it was ok ... But, it is not the Rad that is right now. She hasn't reached yet where you have put her in her version of the peom. She def needs to get there....

Lovely peoms .. both ...👏



Bee...Thanks.

Writing about Dev was not a problem, did that in 10 minutes, but hit a wall while writing about Radhika.........I cannot connect with this Radhika but could connect with the older Radhika or what I think Radhika should be..........so was in abit of quandry regarding what to write.........at the went for what I think Radhika should be and also the old Radhika.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wah Wah misti lovely job as always👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: misti73



Bee...Thanks.

Writing about Dev was not a problem, did that in 10 minutes, but hit a wall while writing about Radhika.........I cannot connect with this Radhika but could connect with the older Radhika or what I think Radhika should be..........so was in abit of quandry regarding what to write.........at the went for what I think Radhika should be and also the old Radhika.

Thanks for confirming what I thought.😃

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