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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: ekta-avinafan

That was just amazing :)

and radev talk ...what to say yaar that was just too sweet too too sweet ...that i am scaring for diabities 😳



they didn't even talk much...you already got diabetes..what will happen when i'll give my next part..😆😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: avina_radev48



they didn't even talk much...you already got diabetes..what will happen when i'll give my next part..😆😉


Their one gesture is enough to make me head over heals...and when dev calls her 'luv' OMG 🤗 🤗 I can imagine dev of CB1 there and once that image came in mind you know how hard it is to concentrate on work ...
Anyways are you giving update now ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
thx a lot yes dev saved his wife from that cruel uncle of hers cant wait for the rest please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: ekta-avinafan


Their one gesture is enough to make me head over heals...and when dev calls her 'luv' OMG 🤗 🤗 I can imagine dev of CB1 there and once that image came in mind you know how hard it is to concentrate on work ...
Anyways are you giving update now ??


oh i thought you were just teasing me for giving a so little convo between radev..hehe..wouldn't be updating now maybe day after tomorrow...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: avina_radev48


oh i thought you were just teasing me for giving a so little convo between radev..hehe..wouldn't be updating now maybe day after tomorrow...

no no .Truly speaking ,I didn't realize even that it was short .Bcoz it depends on how much you get engross in that moment and As i said above - dev calling her 'luv' is just enough😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Awesome so Dev let the great une know his fate hope he rots in jail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Part 10

When he entered the room, he saw her facing her back, he silently walked towards her.

"luv…"

She jerked and looked at him then turned away. He frowned at her sudden change of mood, she was talking nice, what happened now, he thought.

"What happen, luv???" he asked not knowing what happened to her. He heard a giggle turned laughter; he looked sideways only to find Arjun smiling at him.

"Can't you see or you're too dense to notice that she's mad at you…" Arjun said.

"you're mad at me, luv??" he asked while facing her.

"yes.." She said.

"Oh, what can I do so my dear wife won't be mad at me??" he asked lovingly.

"I know angel, give him a punishment…" Arjun peeped in.

Dev glared at him and said "I asked her not you…"

"well she liked my suggestion, right angel???" Arjun said while looking at Radhika who smilingly nodded.

"Really, luv?? You want to punish me???" he asked sadly and innocently. Radhika's smile faded, she didn't meant to hurt him, she just tried to play with him.

"No..luv, I would never want to punish you..i wasn't even mad at you, only Arjun asked…" Before she could complete her sentence, she saw Arjun bolting from the door.

"why did he ran off??" Radhika asked confusedly.

"he ran so he could save his life..nobody tries to mess with your dear husband.."

She grinned and said "he's afraid of you…"

He held her from her waist and yanked her closer.

"you aren't???" he asked in a husky tone.

"I…I..can fight so I'm not…" she hardly said those words as his fingers softly caressing her cheek kept losing her concentration. She can see his face coming closer, removing the distance between them. She gasped and closed her eyes as his rough lips took her lower lip. As much as they missed each other, they missed the taste of each other. He played first with her lips, giving just soft nibbles then retrieving his lips. It annoyed her, she pulled him closer by brushing her fingers on his hair not giving him a chance to retrieve his lips. He smiled at her longing and tightens his hold, lifting her up from the ground as he couldn't hold himself. He kissed her lips passionately after releasing her lips.

"if I didn't came here for some other reason, I would've made love with you.." He said while putting her back on the ground but still holding her loosely. She held him for support, still engrossed in the world of pleasure.

"Come here, we will talk for now…and will continue this at night…" he said and made her sit on the bed.

He knelt down on the floor and said "luv, I'm so sorry.. I know you aren't mad at me but still I will apologize from you..I was a big jerk to leave you, I was wrong to think that if you stayed with me, you will be dishonored and humiliated because you see I'm a theif, I told you that before and you are a respectable girl, our match isn't good enough, people won't like it" he took her hands in his "but now I came here to say that I don't care what people think or they'll say I know from my heart that I love you, I truly do.. now the decision is up to you, would you like to live with me in my—no, in our house instead of here??"

"Yes.." she said abruptly.

"you don't need to rush your decision!! I know you love me too but you can think about it again before you regret.."

She cupped his face and said "my decision would be the same as it is now.."

"you're certain???"

"never been this certain before.."

"Oh, thank you luv..I'm so happy, I know you would say like that but still I thought I should ask.."

"I'm so glad you asked.."

"there's more, luv..since I'm not stealing anymore.."

"you gave up???"

"yeah, luv..that was the whole point..i agreed to abduct you so I could start an honest living as I don't like stealing..i already got the payment and used in opening a little business of mine, it would take some time to progress, there would be times when we can experience shortage of money, though I'll do my best so it won't happen but still I should warn you about this, you can use your money wherever you want but I'll pay for your clothing and food and everything which husband pays, don't ever hesitate to ask money, you agree with that??"

She wrapped her arms around his neck and said "I will agree with everything except leaving me.."

"I would never think of leaving you, not even in your dreams!!" he said while hugging her tight.

She rested her head on his chest; both closed their eyes contented with each other.

***

"Where is Raj??" Dev asked while coming down, his hands intertwined with Radhika who was following him.

"So you really patch up..he left already, he said he has a wife waiting home, a worried one, so he left..i think I should also get a wife..i'm the only bachelor now.."

"it's the most happiest thing ever happened in my life, having a perfect wife..right, luv??" Dev said while looking at her. She blushed at his remark.

"well, are we staying here??"

"we?? It should be us..me and my wife..is there any reason for to stay here??"

"bloody hell, don't take revenge from me, pal…you shouldn't be holding your dear wife's hand if I didn't made you understand…you were too pigheaded to even think about it…"

"lost your patience, pal?? Okey, we would be staying here till the release of her will, for three days..till then enjoy the luxury before proceeding to our homes…"

"couldn't you extend a bit..let's say a week or two…"

"not very likely..just three days..now, where is this bloody uncle of hers, I'm hungry…"

"I will cook.." Radhika said.

"no, luv..you are included in cherishing the luxury..you won't be doing any work here only in our house..okey??" She nodded.

"you should see his face, the punch you have given a while ago disoriented his nose..we went to aid it.."

"he's lucky it was just his nose…I could've done more, if my dear wife wasn't watching…don't want her to witness such violence, it could be detrimental to her health..I'll just check on that old bones, he surely cook for his beloved niece.."

***

"I don't know how to cook.." her uncle protested.

"I'll be willing to teach you, old bones!!!" Dev said.

"I still can't my ribs are hurting from the kick you gave me.."

"you will get more if you didn't start now…" dev ordered.

He grudgingly cooked the food with Dev's supervision. He stood really close to him from the start till the end of his cooking. Whenever he makes mistake, he becomes the target of his punches which were though low but still not too dense. They ate dinner, it was delicious, of course it had to, when he didn't want any punches to hurt him. He got very small amount of food, only to fill his belly but not cherish it. Radhika didn't even comment or said anything against her husband, why would she when he himself tortured her like this. His body got sore with all the punches and kicks he ruthlessly received. The moment he got the permission to sleep, he fell right away on the bed cursing his sudden change of fate.

***

The night went splendid for the newly united couple. She got what she anticipated, he made love with her. There was a difference between last time and now, his every touch spoke of his love. He gently took the taste of every part in her body, slowly he brought her into the pleasurable world she loved to go. She has found the perfect haven in his arms, wrapped in his arms. She can listen to the rhythm of his heartbeat as she placed her head on his bare chest.

"Luv.."

"hmmm.."

She looked up and said "you shouldn't be such harsh with my uncle..i couldn't even look at his face.."

"I know you would be saying that, actually I was expecting..i just want him to experience things you have experienced..it will be three days, he will not die..i'm just playing light with him, you don't know yet what your husband is capable of.."

"but still it's my uncle..i just can't see anyone being hurt like that.."

"okey, luv..i would just lessen my punching and kicking..you're happy.."

She smiled and said "I'm always happy with you.."

"your happiness is mine.." he said and wrapped her more in his arms.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am the first today..kya kare aap ke SS ka intezaar karte rehte hai..
it s lovely❤️Update..enjoy it a lot..waiting for next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Was an amazing update. Loved RaDev interaction & Arjun's teasing. Was waiting for an update since so many days. Please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was awesome :))
🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
luv u radev :))😃😃
Edited by ekta-avinafan - 12 years ago

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