FF: Ek Rasta, Alag RahiPt.78Pg. 90 03/01 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update and pls pm me next time
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice ,waiting for radev first meet and acc to story ,its not good one ,right? can't wait for it.
i like punjabi dialogues of radh especially that vehle ki makhiyan maran...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NICE ONE,SO MR HERO IS HOME,WAITING FOR THEIR FIRST MEETING,DONT MAKE US LONG DO COME BACK SOON,👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks u guys for ur comment..
before u read the update i want to tell you that there are some words which are not much harsh and abusive as i think its normal for me coz in every community it has been used...if anyone get offended do tell me..im a punjabi and i use them in my daily language actually more than that...as well my character Radhika...now here's wat u've been waiting..enjoy the update...😊

Part 4

He entered his bathroom and found it a bit different, like it had been used by someone else, who could it be? He thought. He took a bath and changed in a white kurta then went down.

"Dev, khana lag gaya hai'niche aa jao" Padma shouted (Dev, dinner is ready'come down)

"Haan aa raha hu abhi'"Dev said while coming downstairs(Yes, im coming)

"Birju, nahi aaya aab tak?"(Birju's not here till now?)

"Main yahi hu dev Bhaiya"Birju said excitedly(im here). Dev came closer and hugged him tight.

"oh, Birju I missed u so much'"

"Main bhi"(Me too)

Dev released him and whispered "oye hoye, tu bada jawan aur handsome ho gaya hai, koi ladki bhi maarti hai yah nahi?"(you've became handsome..do girls had a crush on you or no?)

"Kya meri insult kar rahe hai'aap ek ki baat kar rahe, mujhme toh lakhon ladkiyan maarti hai " birju said casually. (why are you insulting me'ur talking about one, almost many girls have crush on me.)Dev's jaw dropped at birju's answer then they both laughed. Dev slightly punched birju on his arm.

"Kya batien kar rahe ho, mujhe bhi toh batao? " vivek asked inquisitively(wat are u talking about? Tell me also.)

"kuch nahi bhaiya, main iska haal puch raha tha.." Dev said(Nothing, I was just asking about his health)

"Mmm..acha, chalo khana kha lo" Vivek said(okey, lets eat dinner)

All three of them went to dining table and sat on their respective seats.

"Arr, waah aaj sab mere pasand ka bana hai" Dev said(wow, everything is my fav dish)

"Kyu nahi banti, iss ghar ka beta jo aya hai, itne saalon ke baad" Dadi said (of course, our son has came after so many years)

"Dev, tum office kab join kar rhe ho?" Harinath asked.(wen are u joining office?)

"Abhi toh main ek hafte chute lunga phir main office join karunga.."(ill have a one week vacation then ill join)

"dev bhaiya, main aapko vrindavan ki sabhi jaga dikhaunga, aapko bahut pasand aayengi" Birju said(ill show u all the places in vrindavan, ull like it all)

"haan, tu hi toh ek tour guide bach gaya hai duniya mein jise sabhi jagah bakhubi pata hai" Dev replied(sure, u are the only left tour guide who knows the places very well)

Everyone laughed then asked Dev about his life in America and had a pleasant time together as a complete family. After the dinner, everyone went to their rooms while dev went to dadi's room.

Dev hugged Daima from behind and said "Hey sexy, how ru?" but Daima released his arms and moved forward then said "I'm angry with you"

Dev frowned and faced Daima but Daima looked away with a cute sad face. Suddenly dev remembered something then smiled and said "Mujhe pata hai ki main apni darling ki muskaan kaise wapas lau"(I know how I will bring back my darling's smile). Then he took a small plastic from his pocket and gave it to Daima. Daima took the plastic and smiled.

"Muje pata tha ki mera Dev kabhi nahi bhulega meri chocolates" Daima said cheerfully. (I knew it that my Dev would never forget my chocolates.) she ate the chocolates like a child, enjoying each bite of it. Dev smiled at Daima's actions.

"Acha, ab tumne kya socha hai?"Daima said (so, what have u thought?)

"Maine kya socha hai? Sabko bata toh diya'" (About what? Ive told everyone)

"arre, main shaadi ki baat kar rhi hu.."(im talking about marraige)

"Kya daima, abhi aaya hu'abhi se hi shuru ho gye hai aap..kaam shuru bhi nahi kiya aap shaddi ki baat kar rhe hai.." Dev said in irritated tone. (wat daima..ive just arrived and u have started now'I hvent start working and ur talking about marraige)

"main toh waise hi puch rahi thi, maine bhi abhi ladki nahi dhudi, agar tere dimaag mein hai toh bata dena'" Daima said casually (I was just asking..i hvent found a girl yet..if there's someone do tell me)

"okey, bata dunga..aab main jaa raha hu..neend bahut aa rahi hai'gud nyt and have a sweet nightmares" Dev said jokingly(okey, ill tell now im going coz im sleepy..)

"Okey gud nyt "Daima said and kissed his forehead then he went out straight to his room.

"Pagal hai yeh ladka'maine toh sawaal isliye pucha tha taki main dekh lu ki teri zindagi mein koi aur ladki toh nahi warna Radhika se hi shaadi krwa dungi'phir radhika hmesha ke liye hamare ghar mein rahegi" Daima said to herself and smiled at the thought then she went to sleep.

***

"Oho, dur fite muh(?) is munde Ishaan da'saari duniya badal jaugi par eh nai'kini waar keh chuki yah ki jad main floor saaf kita hunda tah ganda nah kariya kare..par sunda kitho yah..shararti munda" Radhika said with angry tone.(whole world will change but not Ishaan'ive told him thousand times to not mess the floor when its clean..but he'll never listen'naughty boy).

At the same time Dev heard Radhika and got angry at her comment, how could she say those things to my family member'he wanted to slap her but she was facing her back. He replied "yeh maine kiya hai"(I did it). She didn't respond, by this, Dev got angrier that he faced her. Radhika jerked and looked at the boy in track suit who was very handsome but she found him scowling at her which made Radhika confused. "eh tan ida dekhn diya jida main tandoori chicken hundi yah teh eh bhuka jeev" she said in her mind. (he's looking at me like im tandoori chicken and he's hungry man)Dev said again "yeh maine kiya hai". Radhika took off her earphones and said "Kya?".

"yeh floor maine ganda kiya hai.."Dev said and pointed at the floor.(I created the mess on floor)

"Oh. Apne kiya hai mujhe laga ishaan ne kiya hai isliye.."(It was you I thought it was ishaan that's why'). He cut her sentence in between and replied "isiliye tum ishaan ko bura bhala keh rahi thi.."(that's why ur saying bad things about Ishaan)

"Kya matlab?"Radhika said confusingly.(wat do you mean?)

"tumhari himmat kaise hui ishaan ke bare mein bura kehne ki, tum apni aukad mein raho warna naukri se nikal dunga'phir mat aana jholi fela kar, mujhse maafi maangne" Dev said in firm voice. (how dare you said something bad about ishaan? Stay where you are or else ill fire u..then don't ever come to me for apology)His words made Radhika very angry that she wanted to kill him. Nobody ever behaved with her like that but this boy has just crossed his limits.

"Tum kaun hote ho mujhe nikalne wale? Aur agar tumne mujhe nikal bhi diya nah main yaha se jaane nahi waali, kaminey.." Radhika said furiously. (who are you to fire me? If ever u fired mein I wont go..)

"oh ab tum mujhe gaaliyan nikal rahi ho..ek toh galti karti ho upar se mujhe sunati ho.."(Now ur abusing me, first you do mistake then start abusing me)

"Hai raaba..jhoothe'eh tah ohi gal hoi..uto chor kotwal nu bhonke'naale main kehri galti kiti, eve mere upar chadi jaande yah..galti tusi kiti floor ganda karke maafi tuhanu maangni chaidi balki menu sunan daye yah" Radhika blasted.(oh my god..liar'the idiom can be the accused theif yells at police instead'wat wrong I hve done? Ur telling me..it was ur fault..u messed the floor u must apologize instead of blaming..)

"arre, yeh kya hor raha? Kyun ghar ko chidiya ghar banaya hai?" Birju said.(whats happening? Why had u made the house a zoo?)

"yeh kaun ulu hai?" Radhika asked(who is this foolish/owl?)

"main tumhe ulu diktha hu?" Dev said (Do I look like foolish?)

"nai ulu bhi thoda acha lagta hai aap toh chor lagte hai" Radhika replied (No foolish is more decent but u look like a theif). Birju laughed but stopped when he saw Dev's fierce look.

"Dekho tum dono ladoon mat, mujhe batao kya hua hai? " Birju asked

"Dekhiya naah bhaiya, inhone pehle floor gandi ki..mujhe laga ishan ne ki hai kyunki woh kabhi kabhi karta hai, toh mujhe gussa aa gaya maine ishhan ko bura keh diya'lekin mera haq banta hai kyunki who bhi mera chota bhai hai' sorry mangne ke bajaye mujhe suna rahe hai'" Radhika said fumingly.(look, first he created mess on floor..i thought it was ishaan and I said something wrong..but I have right to say him such things coz he's my younger brother..instead of apologizing, hes blaming me..)

"main tumse maafi mangu!!forget it'" Dev said (ill apologize from u!!forget it..)

"haan, mujhe bhi aapki maafi nahi chahiye, waise bhi main aapni zubaan gandi kyu kar rhi hu? Bhadh mein jaao aap aur aapki maafi, I don't care, goodbye, saara mood kharab kar dita.." radhika said and went away while murmuring. (I don't need ur apology, BTW why making my mouth dirty? To hell with u and ur apology, I don't care, goodbye, uve ruined my mood.)


enjoy the update...thanks again...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update.Dev & Radhika are at logger heads from the first meeting itself.Waiting for the next part & thnx for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice update did radhika know dev some time ago ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
waiting for more interactions of them ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Looking forward for the next one.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx guys for ur lovely updates...i hope u had liked it...here's the nxt update...its not in eng translation coz didnt have tym to do so..

Part 5

"Kaun hai yeh ladki? Aur yeh kaisa bolti hai?" Dev said angrily

"Yeh Radhika hai Punjab se aayi hai, jab woh gusse mein hoti hai tab kai baar gusse mein aa akar Punjabi bolti hai " Birju said smilingly.

"acha toh phir yeh yaha kya kar rahi hai?"

"Radhika mujhe 4 mahine pehle mili thi, bahut buri halat mein thi, toh main isse hospital le gaya…waha par pata chala ki iski yaadasht kho chuki hai, isliye humne Radhika ko aapne ghar rakh liya.."

"Acha?toh iska naam aur yeh kaha se aayi hai, woh kaise pata chala?"

"Woh radhika ke gale mein locket hai usme uska naam likha hai..aur uski adaton se saaf pata chalta hai ki woh Punjabi hai, bahut hi pyari aura chi ladki hai.."

"Achi??kaha se achi??dekha nahi kaise lad rhi thi"

"jee, woh bahut achi hai, sabka bahut khayal rakhti hai, dono gharon ki jaan hai radhika, uske bina toh ghar suna suna lagta hai. "

"Dono gharon???" Dev asked confusingly

"Shastri jee aur humara ghar, woh hafte mein do din waha rehti hai vishaka ke liye.."

"oh, tabhi woh kal raat nahi mili mujhe.."

"Haanji, aur waise bhi woh bina waje kisise jagda nahi karti.."

"Oh toh tumhara matlab hai ki main karta hoon?"

"yeh toh nahi pata…" Birju said and smirked then escaped because he knew that Dev would argue more..

"Haan main hi bura hoon, who toh devi hai.."Dev said irritatingly and went to his room.

***

"Pata nai kitho kitho log aa jande yah mera dimaag khan..marjaana.." Radhika said furiously. On her way she passed by Daima.

"Kya hua Radhika, itni gusse mein kyu ho? Aur kab aayi tum?" Daima asked

"Daima jo aapke ghar mein mehmaan shaitan hai nah, unhe kuch samjaiye ki baat kaise karate hai.."Radhika said in angry tone

"Kya?kya hua? Dev kuch kaha tumse?"

"Kuch kaha??unhone toh itna kuch keh diya ki mera toh dil karta hai ki main...grrr"

"Radhika…shaant ho jao..dev ne galti se kuch keh diya hoga..par who bhut acha hai.."

"Bas, yahi toh problem hai, woh apni galti mane toh hi woh ache banne.."

"Par hua kya?yeh bhi toh batao?"

"woh aapko Birju bhaiya bata denge main aati hu.." Radhika said and went to her room.

***

Dev come into his room furiously and begin unpacking his suitcase, putting his clothes in cupboard. He took his towel and clothes then went to take a shower. He locked the door of his side but forgot to lock the other side door which leads to Radhika's room. He stepped onto the shower area and closed the curtains. He turned on the shower and felt the cold water soothing his frustration and making him cool and fresh. After a while, he turned off the shower and start wearing his clothes. As soon as he opened the curtains, he heard a scream and found a girl with her hands covering her face.

"Hai Rabba, babaji main tah roz path kardi yah tusi mainu bhoot dikhayi jaande yah.."Radhika said frighteningly.

"Main koi bhoot nahi hu.."Dev said. Radhika looked in between the gap of her fingers and gave a relief sigh. She looked at Dev, he was looking very handsome with his black tee and jeans and water dripping from his hair, she admired him at first but when she realized her actions, she looked away.

"aap bhoot se kam thodi nah hai..aap toh shaitan hai"

"Tum yaha kya kar rhi ho? Tumhe pata nahi main naha raha tha?"

"naha rahe the? Bathroom mein lock lagate hai lock krne ke liye aise nahi display krne ke liye..mujhe toh koi awaz bhi sunai nahi di…aur waise bhi main abhi abhi yaha aayi hu, aur waise bhi aap mere bathroom mein kyu naha rhe the aapka aapna nahi hai? "

"Excuse me..yeh mera bathroom hai..aur mene lock lagaya tha..pata nahi tumne kaise khol liya.."

"acha main kaise andar aa gayi, mere paas jadu hai kya jo main aise hi aa gyi…khud lock nahi karte mujhe suna rhe hai..oh main toh bhool hi gyi thi who toh aapki adaat hai dusro ko blame karna.."

"oh, meri adaat nahi who tumhari aadat hai dusro ko blame karna, jaise abhi niche kiya tha.."

"meri jo galti thi maine maan li thi aur sorry bhi maangne wali thi, aap nahi maante ki aap bhi galat the.."

"haan mujhe galiyan nikal kar..maine kuch nahi kiya, maine who kiya jo mujhe sahi laga.."

"haanji, aap toh hamesha sahi rehte hai…mr. perfect..itni ego mein nah sadh jayenge ek din.."

"haan mujhme ego hai…tumhe koi problem hai..ab niklo mere bathroom se.."

"hey Mr. dev, yeh mera bhi bathroom hai, abhi tak aapko yeh nahi pata chala ki bathroom connected hai, yeh mera kamra hai " Radhika said pointing at her room.

"I don't care, mujhe tumhare saath bathroom share nahi karna.."

"Kitni der se main iss kamre mein reh rahi hu…agar aapko koi problem hai toh kamra badal lijiye lekin main nahi apna kamra badlungi…badi mushkil naal balcony mili yah eve hathan toh gava lava.."

"main nahi aapna karma badalunga nahi tumhare saath apna bathroom share karunga…main abhi dadi se baat karta hu…" Dev said and went out

"eve bathroom nahi share karunga…main vi dekhdi yah mainu kaun rokda yah…"Radhika said

"Par agar onane sachi mana liya main tah gayi naal mera kamra..main huni thale jaandi yah" Radhika said worriedly and went downstairs.

here's a short update hope u like it...enjoy...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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SO THEY R AT FIRE,WITH EVERY MEETING,N NOW SOMEONE NEED 2 COME N SOLVE THEIR PROBLEMS,NICE 1 THANKS ,WAITING FOR MORE.


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