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Posted: 13 years ago
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My dear, my soul, my life,
I have hurt you over my limit,
my mind is now numb,
from the thoughts of you.

You made me who I am,
and I dared to break you down,
a mistake that I have realized,
please forgive me

the valleys, deserts, and rivers,
nothing can compare to you.
this moon lies pale in comparison,
these sweet words fall short.

So please,
recognize my plea to you,
rid your mind of the bad times,
remember the good we had together.

my intention was not lose you,
but now after what I did,
my world seems empty,
please forgive me.

I mocked your sacrifices,
I ignored your cry for help,
I couldn't see the pain in your eyes,
please forgive me.

Now my pain is unbearable,
I would scan the horizons for you.
Although I stifled your opinions,
please forgive me.

I keep on walking,
but every footstep reminds me of you.
I miss your talks, your smile,
return them to me.

I have one wish,
to re-connect with you,
I let a gem slip from my hands,
please forgive me

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[Dev to Radhika]
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one and a correctly written poem.

Rads is the inner strength of Dev and once she is gone, he will be shattered. Correct words and aptly written. Thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful poem thanks Shankar. Love every word
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very beautiful poem shankar ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautifully written, Shankar. Thanks a lot for sharing with us.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice poem
very true words for dev after knowing rads death.

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