The Scene that was to be-Dev reciting kavita

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sia

@sia_lovely

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

OMG!!!!!!!!! Its just unbelievable!!!!!!! Such a beautiful scene and it was EDITED OUT!!!!!!!! 😡 😡 To show BARKHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!ARRGH!!!!! 😡

Thanks for Sharing this...🤗 This was absolutely mindblowingly beautiful...just superb... just awesome!!!! The scene for which we were waiting with bated breaths 😍was written and really executed😳...that too so well!...was enacted but then got edited!!!! 😡 How can they!?

Why did they edit out these sweet moments...probably to adjust that stupid scene where Barkha finds out abt Rohan! 😡 But that scene could have been easily adjusted to monday. This scene looks just perfect and RaDev stick to their characters. I mean...acc. to friday's epi, Dev was suddenly shown shy. Well, he wasn't shy, as it came across on the screen because of the shoddy editing...but rather was just a little hesitant...Acc. to this above scene, Dev wasn't shy but was comfortable with her. But the editing made such huge difference.

I agree with Misti, screenplay never lies. We can easily make out when something has been edited out at the last minute. Herein we can see, Dev and Radhika had so many dialogues and scenes but everything got edited at the last minute.

The same thing happened on MahaEpisode as well. Suddenly there was a line from Rohan... "Rads itna dari huwi hai ke use sahi aur galat samaj main nahi aa raha...uski baatein na sune..." something on that line...and i was left wondering why Rohan said so, when Rads' didn't utter a word! That made me think, had Rads said something and it was edited? Yes, came out to be the answer when in the next episode, Barkha's edited scene was shown!

We keep blaming the creative dept. for dishing out weird scenes at us...now looking at this i wonder, if the fault really lies in the creative dept? Mr. Sharma has executed such a lovely and beautiful scene...but it cannot be his fault if the scene got chopped at the editing table that too so shoddily, giving the viewers' an all together different perspective!

Now I am wondering, why would they chop off such important scenes? RaDev romance is one of the USP's of the show. There is nothing wrong in including Barkha...because it is important to give every character space and time. Fine. But on the expense of the show's USP? That's not fine.

By doing this, they are letting the efforts of the cast and crew go waste. Such beautiful scenes are written and enacted, but we audience never get to see that on screen! Many scenes do get chopped ultimately in the table, because the show has a limited time of 20 mins...but imp. scenes must always be retained!

I don't know why...but my suspicions keep increasing towards the editing dept. Does the editor have anything personal against this show or the makers? Just as director/actor/writer is an crucial aspect of any show...editor too is. Can't the makers hire a good editor with some sense!

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Niharika

@Nihariikaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Radhika ur post really made me cry...

I am not just saying, i swear it...i was crying!!!

I thought maybe u have written the scene, but as i continued was shocked and realized that it was the edited scene of the orginal script, and as i read tears were in my eyes even before i read the kavitha!!

maybe it was because of the sadness that we didnt get to see such a beautiful scene. so injustice.
I feel so bad for Avinash and Rubina...

Once i wrote that maybe the writers are not putting their heart and soul in RaDev's characters, But i am very sorry i said that, i take my words back, now i know that the real culprits lies in the editing...

But feel so sad that they didnt telecast such a beautiful scene...shame on them.
Just cant believe and stunned to the inner politics going on inside.

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laxmi_avinafan

@laxmi_avinafan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Nice post Riya with memorable RaDev moment...yes that scene felt incomplete . so it is great to see you are in touch with one of the creators , it is really appreciable you are sharing with all of us...so you had already asked them why they have not shown that scene without editing or not coz that scene is very beautiful and magical too how they could did badly with such a beautiful scene...even with reading i can feel that scene in front of me

and Dev said :

Ab to bas pal pal gin kar us pal kaa intzaar hai...

Jab mehdi lage haath mere haath dharogi...

Jab laal surkh ghunghat mein sharmaayega chehraa...

Jab aalte se range paaon mere aangan mein rakhogi...

Jab mujhe neend se..

wow if we had seen on CB to baat hi aur hoti bot we missed that so badly without Kavita that scene is really incomplete but nice if they cut the whole scene instead of incomplete scene...

Dev looks up and stops. Sees that RADHIKA's eyes are all welled up. DEV says:
Ayeee... hansne se manaa kiya tha.. rone ko nahi kahaa tha...

Radhika just shakes her head gesturing that it is nothing. She holds the paper with both her hands and kisses it. Cam charges on DEV who is happy to see her happy.

so please tell them how we had missed such a beautiful scene becoz of their mistakes very badly... we can't see that scene again in CB and again thanks for nice kavita with Radev...

Edited by laxmi_avinafan - 14 years ago

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Anu Kapoor

@anukapoor

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Radhika5: Thanks for the beautiful post. Cannot understand, why they are delibrately editing scenes which are so touching and full of emotions...As pointed out by Misti - screen play never lies, as was quite evident during the ME and the scene showed next day. Many thanks to you for sharing this. It would be very nice, if we get hold of this scene somehow...

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sia

@sia_lovely

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: NiHa24
Radhika ur post really made me cry...

I am not just saying, i swear it...i was crying!!!

I thought maybe u have written the scene, but as i continued was shocked and realized that it was the edited scene of the orginal script, and as i read tears were in my eyes even before i read the kavitha!!

maybe it was because of the sadness that we didnt get to see such a beautiful scene. so injustice.
I feel so bad for Avinash and Rubina...

Once i wrote that maybe the writers are not putting their heart and soul in RaDev's characters, But i am very sorry i said that, i take my words back, now i know that the real culprits lies in the editing...

But feel so sad that they didnt telecast such a beautiful scene...shame on them.
Just cant believe and stunned to the inner politics going on inside.

Exactly!! The writers' of this show are doing a fabulous work, if this scene is to be taken as an example! But the scenes get chopped shoddily at the editing level! Wonder if DJ's cannot see thru this?

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vineetha anil

@vinianil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Thanks radhika5 for the beautiful post while reading i could imagine Radhika and Dev in their world .. After watching this episode i was so disappointed as couldn't get to see that Radhika was reading the poem...

It is a beautiful poem instead of this scene what we got to see ...It would have been nice if they had shown this scene as you worte...

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Tazzi

@Tazzi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Thanks Radhika5 for completing the scene...It would have been a pleasure to see...but what can we do...but...posts like this one...fills in the missing gaps.

I am not a poet...I can't even spell poetry...this is one of my favorite song...

Kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayaal aata hai
Kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayaal aata hai
Ki jaise tujhko banaya gaya hai mere liye
Ki jaise tujhko banaya gaya hai mere liye
Tu abse pehle sitaaron mein bas rahi thi kahin
Tu abse pehle sitaaron mein bas rahi thi kahin
Tujhe zameen pe bulaya gaya hai mere liye
Tujhe zameen pe bulaya gaya hai mere liye

Kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayaal aata hai
Ki ye badan ye nigaahein meri amaanat hain
Ki ye badan ye nigaahein meri amaanat hain
Ye gesuon ki ghani chhaon hain meri khatir
Ye honth aur ye baahein meri amaanat hain
Ye honth aur ye baahein meri amaanat hain

Kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayaal aata hai
Ki jaise bajti hain shehnaaiyaan si raahon mein
Ki jaise bajti hain shehnaaiyaan si raahon mein
Suhaag raat hain ghoonghat utha raha hoon main
Suhaag raat hain ghoonghat utha raha hoon main
Simat rahi hai tu sharma ke apni baahon mein
Simat rahi hai tu sharma ke apni baahon mein

Kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayaal aata hai
Ki jaise tu mujhe chaahegi umr bhar yoohin
Uthegi meri taraf pyaar ki nazar yoohin
Main jaanta hoon ki tu geir hai magar yoohin
Main jaanta hoon ki tu geir hai magar yoohin

Kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayaal aata hai
Kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayaal aata hai
Thanks again...

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Radha

@radha_bilahari

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Thanks Radhika,🤗 It was really nice of you to seek the permission of the writer of this scene to share the most wonderful moment of Dev-Radhika. I was extremely disappointed that we were not granted this scene because for me it was one of my very first wishes that Dev should recite a kavitha to Radhika especially when we became aware of his other attributes asa flutist and sculptor.

All of us were disappointed and what could have been easily the talk of the week-end became otherwise.

Dev feeling shy because he writes a poem for the first time and does not want Radhika to laugh at him and Radhika blushing because of the love that she is getting from her beloved would have been beautifully rendered by both Avinash and Rubina. Now it is left to our imagination. We also know the precise reason why this scene was edited and hopefully will not happen in future.

Thanks once again for sharing this scene on apersonal note with me.

🤗

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v3gradev09

@v3gradev09

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Awww, such a cute scene they edited..thank you !

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Radha

@radha_bilahari

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: NiHa24
Radhika ur post really made me cry...

I am not just saying, i swear it...i was crying!!!

I thought maybe u have written the scene, but as i continued was shocked and realized that it was the edited scene of the orginal script, and as i read tears were in my eyes even before i read the kavitha!!

maybe it was because of the sadness that we didnt get to see such a beautiful scene. so injustice.
I feel so bad for Avinash and Rubina...

Once i wrote that maybe the writers are not putting their heart and soul in RaDev's characters, But i am very sorry i said that, i take my words back, now i know that the real culprits lies in the editing...

But feel so sad that they didnt telecast such a beautiful scene...shame on them.
Just cant believe and stunned to the inner politics going on inside.

Niha,

My reactions were as good asyours. I was also in tears when I read this script a couple of days back. I was also equally angry that we were left deprived because we were craving for this.

Hats off to Radhika who took it upon herself to get the writer's permission to share with all the members of the IF who are so much in love with Avina and who were looking forward to this scene in anticipation.

Writer's do have in mind what the audience would love to see, but comes out in the end they have no idea. It is someone who has to take the initiative to bring it to their notice and that is what Radhika has done. Hopefully we will get to see more unedited Radev scenes.

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