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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dakshumhatre

Nice update & sad becoz soon it will finish

thanks,...
I can't help it, I had a long journey with this story 😭😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: charmee_sammy

awesome updt..

loved it..
cont soon..

Thaks charmee...
I am happy that u are still connected to radev and CB 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update.👏 👏 👏 Loved all scenes...😊 GR8 presentation of all characters.👍🏼 Last scene was superb... please,try to do continue soon... Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Joseph_A

Fabulous update.👏 👏 👏 Loved all scenes...😊 GR8 presentation of all characters.👍🏼 Last scene was superb... please,try to do continue soon... Thanks for the PM.

Thank u so much joseph...
I always love this forum and Radev,...
they are very special and this ff too veyr special for me, because my first ff ever written
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 48 - Smirky Dev, Confused Radhika

Radhika came to party along with kushi. Radhika was wearng a white colour top and the same color full skirt, she left her hair loose and free...
Kushi was wearing a red color full gown... Radhika looked at Kushi and kept her a kaala tikka behind the ear, getting the same from Kushi. Kushi knows it well, that Radhika had no interest in attending the party except for sake of Dev. She prayed to Devi maiyya that every thing should be solved between them this night it self
As they reached the party place, Radhika's eyes automatically looked for Dev , and she found him sitting at a side all alone... Radhika can say that he was in bad condition, she felt herself very bad for him, she wanted to go to him and hug him, leaving every thing and ignoring every one... but she can't at the present situation.. She shouldn't too... She asked kushi to carry on with the party and she went near the table where Dev sat...
Dev looked up as he felt some one standing beside him and he saw the person whom he doesn't wanna see at that present moment...

Radhika looked at Dev's red eyes which are swollen... gosh he was crying, Radhika sat beside him and took his arm into her... "Kya hua de"

Dev: Kya tum mujhe chodne ki wajah yahi ki, mera shadi ho chuka hain

Radhika: When did u get to know this

Dev: Radhika, it doesn't matter when did i know this dammit, the thing that matters is why u came away from me,

Radhika:How can I stay with a married person Dev?

Dev: Yes I am married , but I am ur husband Radhika, I am married to u. and that is the only marriage in which I believe.

Radhika: Lekin, tera shadi kisi aur se ho chuka hain dev..

Dev: I don't care it dammit, vus ladki ke ghar waalon se main baat karungi, lekin main vus shadi ko accept nahi karunga..

Radhika: Lekin Kanha toh Radha ka kabhi nahi ban sakta na, vo toh rukmini ka hi pati hain

Dev: Haan lekin is Dev ke liye Radha aur Rukmini donom tum hi hain...

Radhika felt tears in her eyes... she motioned dev that they need to go out some where.. Dev finally accepting left out with radhika and they stopped by a lake side.. Radhika looked at dev and said "Dev, tum mujh se pyar karte ho na"

Dev: U know the answer Radhika

Radhika: I wish to listen it from u Dev

Dev: I love u the most,,

Radhika: Toh, jo kuch bhi main chahti hun vo tum karoge na

Dev:Haan,.

Radhika;Promise me

Dev :promise radhu

Radhika: Dev, papa ne tere liye jo kuch bhi karte hain, bahut soch samajh kar karte hain... vo tumse bahut pyar karte hain, lekin vo apni dharam se hi vutna hi pyar karte hain, vus ka dil mat dukhao Dev... He wish to see u as a RajPurohith,he had many dreams associated with u, please never break them Dev... Please papa ka baat sunao aur vus ladki ko apnaao. Kanha tere zindagi ein usi ladki ka naam lika tha

Dev looked at Radhika , at the present moment, he wanted to tell her how much angry he was on her for telling him like dat... but he can't, he opened his mouth to say some thing when Radhika interrupted saying "Dev u promised me"

Dev:Radhika, agar tere liye tum mere zindagi ko chahti ho, main kushi kushi de deta, lekin, tum tujhe mere zindagi se door karne ke liye bol rahe ho

Radhika:How will I go away from u Dev, I will be always there with u , as ur best friend

Dev:Toh tum mujhse y bol rahe ki, main vus ladki se shadi karne ke baad bhi, tum mujhse normally baat karoge

Radhika:Hmm

Dev:Toh kal tum bhi mere saath India aa rahe ho, aur Purohith pooja ki saare preparations mein participate kar rahe ho, kyun ki, vusi din mera shadi hogi

Radhika:lekin, i had many important works here dev

Dev thinking that he too should play along with Radhika said "Toh apne dost se , tera kaam jyaada hain kya:"

Radhika : Dev please...

Dev listening nothing took her phone and called Maan from her phone...

Maan was in work , when he got a call from Radhika's cell "Hello, chutki"

Dev:Bhai, main dev bol raha hoon

Maan:Dev, Radhika ke phone tere paas, matlab tum donom ka patch up ho gaya...

Dev:Kuch aisa hi tha bhai, acha mere best friend mere saath India aana chahti hain, janmashtami ke liye, lekin vo ye bol rahi thi ki, yaha bahut saari kaam hain.

maan: Radhika ko phone do Dev

Dev:Thik hain bhai

Saying that he handover phone to Radhika and he can feel the glares of Radhika on him, but he just want his Radhika back, and for that he can do any thing...

Radhika spoke with maan and then offed her phone and looked at Dev furiously "Aap samajhti kya hain apne aapko"

Dev: U only said that u are my best friend thats it, and u will stay as my friend for life long... If u can't attend my marriage, then how cum i believe u to be nice to me after some other girl enters my life..

Radhika turned around unable to face him... But he felt a strong hand on her shoulder which made her turn back to him, she saw his eyes all red with tears in it...
He asked her "Kyun Radhika, I am ready to leave my family"

Radhika:But I am not ready to leave my family Dev... Aur mere family toh Purohiths aur Sharmas donom hain..

Dev: Tum mere saath India aa rahe ho/

Radhika looked at Dev, she know she was killing herself from inside by doing this, but she has to do this "Will u marry her, if i came there and participate in all rituals normally"

Dev: I need to see u smiling all the time, as Normal Radhika.. even one tear shouldn't come from ur eyes..

Radhika looked at Dev and thought in her mind "Kyun itna saza de rahe ho Dev"

Dev as if reading her thoughts... " Saza tum mujhe de rahe ho Radhika... Zindagi bar ki sazaa"

Radhika:Thik hain, main aavungi , aur bilkul normally participate karungi saarein rituals par..

Dev smirked and said "Lets see"

Radhika looked at Dev and turning off her head "Shall we leave, i need to manage some things and pack my clothes.."

Dev:Sure radhu..

Radhika not uttering a word sat in Dev's car, and they came back to the venue party, there Radhika looked at Kushi speaking with some one... She went straight to kushi , and Dev too followed her, and Radhika was about to ask him who are u, when Dev exclaimed "ASR"

Radhika looked at Dev puzzled not knowing whose this ASR, and she looked at Kushi, she wasn't comfortable, thats what Radhika can say "Kushi, tum thik toh ho na"

Kushi:No I am not fine, when this Lord Governor is around me, how will I be fine?

Dev:Lord governor? Arnav tujhe ye naya naam kab se mila ??

Arnav was about to say some thing when Kushi jumped in and asked Dev:Hey tum Isko jaanti ho

Dev looked at Radhika who also have a questioning look on her face...

Dev:Haan, he's my college mate and a good friend..

Kushi looked at them both confused "How come u both are friends"

Arnav feeling irritated "Oh... common Kushi kumari gupta.. Itna surprise hone ki jaroorat nahi hain, any way will u come wid me or not"

Radhika:Why should she come with u>

Arnav:Who the hell are u?

Dev: Arnav, wo Radhika hain... Radhika sharma...

Arnav gave a acknowledged look to her but any way ignored her and try to sort out with Kushi... Radhika doesn't like his arrogance but he saw a bit of pain in his eyes , she thought she had to interfere in it ... "Excuse me Mr.Raizada.. Can I know ur problem please"

Arnav:Its the matter between me and Kushi kumari gupta, why should I speak to u.

Radhika was back to her tiger mode, ' Its because Miss.Kushi Kumari Gupta, is working for me as my Personel secretary, at Global Infrastructure... And I can't let go off my employee who was my responsibility.. I am trying to be peace ful to u, please tell me the reason.. Kushi is my best friend, she will listen to me, I can convince her"

Kushi:Main sunungi nahi, is baat par kisi ko kuch kehne par bhi main sun ne wali nahin hoon...

Radhika looked at Dev, Dev smiled and said "Kushi, i got a restaurant near by where there are nice jilebi and pakhodas available"

Kushi forgetting every thing "Dev, please chalo na.."

Dev smiled and took her along with him, in the mean while he signalled Radhika to completed her talk..

Radhika:Mr.Raizada, sorry if I am rude to u. But u didn't listen to me, and left me no option

Arnav:Its okay Miss . Sharma.. Kushi is my fiance..

Radhika:What

Arnav:Yes, she's my fiance... and she left the marriage just because she fears for me

Radhika;Are u forcing her for the marriage

Arnav:What the... nope.. I amn't forcing her, she was my lover for past one year... and we both got engaged too... but after the day of engagement doesn't know why, she ran away from me and came..

Radhika:She met me, she was in a hurry that day, she just wanted some shelter, she was my best friend in my childhood so obviously I took her along with me, and when ever I asked her about the reason for her departure, she says she had som problems with her boss.

Arnav:Yes, I am her boss.. but I never troubled her after our confession for love.

Radhika thought for a while and said ' Mr.Raizaa, tomorrow mng I am leaving for India, and Kushi is coming with me too... if u wish U too can come with us, because its Dev marriage in case, and I am sure she will come with u by the time u return to here"


Arnav:So ur shopping for marriage completed

Radhika looked at Arnav frowning ...

Arnav: Its ur marriage with Dev right, how about ur shopping...

At the same time a church bell ran from distance.. Radhika looked at the side from where the sound came and looked at ASR and said " I amn't Dev's Bride Mr.Raizada"



Arnav: But, Miss.Sharma U are the one Dev loved, u are Dev's dream girl right... Dev always say just dream girl to every one, but for me he said ur name. and I am sure its u.

Radhika:Ofcourse u are right Mr.Raizada... its me, but every time Luck won't allow us to get what we want.

Arnav: Can u say me what happened Miss .Sharma..

Radhika:Dev's already married before 14 years, it was recently known to us.. and we can't deny it.

Arnav: Miss.Sharma we are in 21st century, not in some 18th century... grow up

Radhika: Watever century it might be, but the family values will be same Mr.Raizada, U can't understand it.

Arnav: Did Dev accept for it

Radhika:He accepted it on many conditions.. please don't remind him of my love any more

Arnav: Okay Miss.Sharma... at least to watch how foolish u people are I will come. and also for my Kushi I will come

Radhika smiled and Arnav said to her "Urs smile reminds me of my sister."

Radhika: Oh... gud , then i am lucky to have a smile like ur sister..

Arnav looked at her and walked away..

Radhika ran towards him "Mr.Raizada... U are coming to India na"

Arnav:Yeah

Radhika:Tomorrow afternoon flight

Arnav nodded and as he left Radhika looked at side he left and then waited there standing for Dev. She can feel her mangalsuthra on her neck she looked at lake and thought to herself "Kyun Kanha"

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India...

Shankar came rushing and looked for Maan.. And as he got Maan he felt relieved and said "Maan beta, Radhika ki phone ko kya hua"


Maan:Wo dad, Radh was busy in a prty

Shankar:I need Radhika here for Janmashtami

Maan:Dad..

Shankar: She has to be there for her best friends marriage na

Maan:Kiska marriage

Shankar:It Dev's marriage on Janmashtami, and i need Radhika eeither by hook or crook...

Maan felt the shock of his life... "Dev ki shadi"

Shankar:Haan beta, its a long story, Dev ki shadi kisi ladki se vuski bachpan mein hi kiya gaya hain, kyun ki vunke jaatak ke anusaar, Dev vus ladki se 14 saal door rehna padega, aur vo 14saal iss janmashtami se khatam hoga, aur vus din wo ladki bhi aayegi

Maan:Lekin vo ladki hain koun?

Shankar:Beta ye baat hum abhi nahi bata sakthey hain... RP took promise from me..

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Sharada was sitting in her room... and Vaishali,shalini were beside Sharada.. After wat they got to know from RP the mng make them all shatter.

Mrinalini came there rushing " Ye kya, jo kuch bhi maine suna Dev ke baarein mein"

aishali:Sab kuch sach hain..

Mrinalini: Lekin agar ye sab kuch sach hain toh, papa aaj tak kyun nahi bataya

Sharada:Mrinalini beta mujhe Raj se baat karna hain, vusse bhulakar lee aao

Mrinalini:Thik hain dadima

Vaishali:Maa... aap sheetal ji ko jo vaada diya, vuska kya hoga

Sharada looked at Vaishali and said "Pata nahi kyun mujhe ye lag raha ki , vo ladki Radhika hi hain"

Vaishali:aap itne confidence se kaise keh sakthey hain

Sharada:Bas, mere beta kabhi jhooti vaada nahi kartey hain vaishu, vus din jab sheetal vuskey tabiyat ke baarein mein hum se baat kar rahi thi, vus din maine ye bola ki Radhika meri bahu bankar aayegi, aur raju mujhe support kiya. Agar vusko pata ki Dev ki shadi already ho chuka hain, toh vo kabhi aisa baat nahi kiya kartein

By that time RP came there.. "Maa"

Sharada: Raju, vo ladki koun hain

RP remained silent"I can't tell her name maa"

Sharada:Ek baat poochu, agar dev ki shadi kisi aur se ho chuka hain ye baat tum jaante toh, kyun vus din sheetal ko vaada kiya ki Rahika, Dev ki patni banegi.


sheetal:par sharada

sharada: no buts sheetal, ye faisla tum yaan main nahi le rahe hain, ye faisla niyati ne li .

sheetal:haan sheetal lekin

mr.purohith:aunty, ye toh hum vunki bach pan se jaante hain na, ap ko ab itni doubt kyun hain

sheetal: lekin aap vun donom ke taraf se bhi socho. vun donom ko hum bachpan se kuh nahi bataya aur ab vunke man mein kya chal raha hain ye hume nahi jaanti hai na

sharada:sheetal tumhe mahanth ji ki baaat yaad hain na," vun donom sirf ek doosrein se pyar karage aur vun dooosron ke beech koi bhi nahi aa sakte hain"

mr.purohith: aap aisi chinta mat karo, mahanth ji jo kuch bhi bolte hain vo jaroora hogi aur vun donom shaadi ke liye haan hi karenge.
hum ek kaam karte hain is shaadi ke baad vun donom ka bhi engagement karenge aur jab dev return aayega us se tab vun donom ka shhaadi karenge


RP: I did it for sheetal aunties happiness...

Sharada:matlab

RP:Maa mujhe bahut kaam baki hain jaane do... lekin, mujh par barosa rakhiye saying that he left out...

PRECAP

Shalini:ye kya hua.. Radhika ke haath par Dev ka naam kisne likha

Mehendi wali:lekin madam, humse yahi kaha gaya ki, iske haath par Dev ke naam likho

Radhika:Kisne kaha aap se..

Mehendi wali woman: Madam mujhe pata nahi..

Radhika looked at her hand and decided to remove the mehendi, but Geet stopped her "No Radhika, tum aisa nah kar sakhthey ho"

Radhika:Kyun

Geet whishpered in Radhika's ear "Pati ka naam haath se nikhal diya toh, pati ko hi problem hoga"



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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update,i have no doubt its Radevs wedding,Radhs is the one who is Devs childhood bride.thank you.pls pls pls giving another update soon.i cant wait any more to know who is Devs bride.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmm so Dev was married to radhika when children so the father the raj prohit I was testing Dev in 2 ways does Dev listen to what dad says
And does he love enough too-----


Great update
Edited by chayya55 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks, if you could translate in English it will be great, my Hindi is very limited.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Once again superb update Hari 👏 👏 👏 Party convo between Dev-Radhika n Radhika-ASR was outstanding. A very well written Dio. Loved story move. Very excited for Marriage scene because,Precap scene is looking damn interesting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update hari so dev was married to radh in childhood waiting for next part

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