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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
Great storyline & superb way of writing it 👏👏 , just read whole parts , very well written updates and the way you are weaving incidents make reader more curious to read the next .. excellent work 👍🏼 .
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: DAIRY25

Great storyline & superb way of writing it 👏👏 , just read whole parts , very well written updates and the way you are weaving incidents make reader more curious to read the next .. excellent work 👍🏼 .


thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hello guys i know all are enjoying present cb track and the track is quite pleasent and interesting right now
and i am sorry to say that i won't do any update for a couple of days as it may have some sad scenes of radev which may spoil the happy ness of the present track to the readers if my ff


and really the present cb track is mind blowing
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: harianjana

hello guys i know all are enjoying present cb track and the track is quite pleasent and interesting right now
and i am sorry to say that i won't do any update for a couple of days as it may have some sad scenes of radev which may spoil the happy ness of the present track to the readers if my ff


and really the present cb track is mind blowing


😭oh really was waiting for a update i know it wouldnt spoil my mood dont know about the others i think they would like u to update to 😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: palak13


😭oh really was waiting for a update i know it wouldnt spoil my mood dont know about the others i think they would like u to update to 😉



yes palak hope it and i am writing the dialogues of the ff as it was quite a bit difficult for me as i know it

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hello every one i know that u all are enjoying cb track right now but as i was missing cb at weekend time i am updating my ff
hope u all enjoy it

PART 4- BROKENPART FLASHBACK 4
All the children went out for shopping and the dadimas along with all the elders like purohith couple ranjiv chacha and his wife vydehi ( he was mr. sharmas cousin and now he is looking after buisness after sharmas death) sat in the living room talking.

sheetal: sharda mujhe bahut fikhar ho rahgi hain

sharda:kis baat ka sheetal

sheetal:radhika

sharada:radhika? lekin kyun

sheetal kept silent

mr.purohith:aunty boliye na kyun?

sheetal: tum jante ho beta. aj kal mera tabiyat thik nahi tha. ab th mrinalini ki shaadi ho raha tha so mujhe vuske baarein fikhar karne ki jarrorat nahi hnain lekinn radhika wo abhi 17 yrs ka hain, aur wo apni padaai poore kerne tak shaadi ke baarein mein sochna bhi nahi chahti. agar vuski padai khatam hone se pehle hi mujhe kuch ho gaya toh, ..

mr.purohith:aunty aap aisa baat mnat karioye aap ko kuch nahi hogi

sheetal; agar hua toh

sharada: tujhe kuch nahi hone wali hain , agar kuch hua toh vuski sasuraal wale vuski dekhbaal karega

sheetal:sharada , ye kya keh rahje hain tum

sharda: sheetal main thik hi keh rahi hun.

vuski sasuraal wale matlab hum hain aur hume ye yakin khi hum apni chotibahu ko poori achui tarah se dhyan rakhungi

sheetal:par sharada

sharada: no buts sheetal, ye faisla tum yaan main nahi le rahe hain, ye faisla niyati ne li .

sheetal:haan sheetal lekin

mr.purohith:aunty, ye toh hum vunki bach pan se jaante hain na, ap ko ab itni doubt kyun hain

sheetal: lekin aap vun donom ke taraf se bhi socho. vun donom ko hum bachpan se kuh nahi bataya aur ab vunke man mein kya chal raha hain ye hume nahi jaanti hai na

sharada:sheetal tumhe mahanth ji ki baaat yaad hain na," vun donom sirf ek doosrein se pyar karage aur vun dooosron ke beech koi bhi nahi aa sakte hain"

mr.purohith: aap aisi chinta mat karo, mahanth ji jo kuch bhi bolte hain vo jaroora hogi aur vun donom shaadi ke liye haan hi karenge.
hum ek kaam karte hain is shaadi ke baad vun donom ka bhi engagement karenge aur jab dev return aayega us se tab vun donom ka shhaadi karenge

vaishali:ye toh sahi idea hain.

sheetal: lekin iske pehle hum in donom se poochna hai aur vuski ha leni hain

sharada:thik hain shaadi poore hone ke baad hum vunse baat karenge aur weding reception ke saath saath iska engagement bhi karenge

mr.purohith:thik hain maa

sheetal:okay sharada and dev ke pass wo ring hai na

sharda:haan sheetal he always had that ring on his hand and love it a lot. what abot radhika?

sheetal:radhika likes that ring a lot and i think she took it out for last time when she was 13years old

all laughed and by the timethe children came completing their shopping.

they all had their dinner and all went into their bedrooms. but there are two persons who went into dadimas bedroom they are radev
they both went into dadis room to show things they brought and both were excited saying about how they helped each other during shopping and how they have fun and how they teased mrinalin and vivek

both the dadis are silently observing and were very happy seeing them like that.

next day morning..,,,,,,,,,,,,,

the engagement of vivek, mrinalini held in kanhas temple with only members of two families. radhika and dev played pranks on each other and had a lot of fun time. both the parivaars were happy at vivek and mrinalini engagement.

at night.,,,,
radhika in her room drawing a picture of dev in her book and she thought to her self " ye mujhe klya ho raha hain kanha. kyun main dev ke saath rehna chahti hu aur vuske saath samay bitaana chahti hu. jab main vuske saath hai na, tab mujhe koi bhi yaad nahi aate hain. kahin ye pyar toh nahi hai na kanha" she smiled to her self and slapped on her head.she listened door of devs room opening and immediately closed her book and kept it in drawer.dev went to his room relaxed for a while and took his clothes from cupboard and went to radhikas rooom in order to get a shower. he didn't find radhik any where in her room and went in to the bathroom. after he took a shower and came out he saw radhika standing in balcony, she was wearing a white colour chudidaar with her hair open and her hair was flowing due to wind.he came silently back of her and closed her eyes with his hands.

radhika said 'dev"

dev (surprisingly):radhika i came in a silent manner how did u know its me

radhika:arey tum meri dost ho aur kya hum apni dost ko bhi pata nahi chalte hain kya.

dev;okay then ur friend is getting bored and please let him get some time pass.

radhika: okay what shall we do.

dev:okay lets talk

they both had a lot of talk and dev was admring radhs taste and same is situation of radhs.finally after a long talk

dev:thanks yaar! tumse baatein karte huye mujhe samay bhi pata nahi chala

radh: ye kya baat hain
dost hain meri, aap se nahi toh kis se baat karungi main
hum ne apni dosti ka waada nibha liya ab teri baari hain

dev:okay what should i do

radhika; u should study well and up to where i know abt u u are not interested in studies, pls don't be like that u should get good grades and u should help uncle in buisness

dev:its a tough job but i will try to do so

radhika:no try u should do it

dev: ok yaar!
other wise we will do a thing "tum bhi buisness pad ne wali hai na. tum meri taraf se papa ko buisness mein madad karo"

radhika: haha sorry! i wanna read buisness in order to get after my fathers buisness. but i was ready to help u any time u want.

dev:pakka

radhika: pakka lock karo

they both laugh and said gud night to each other and left to their rooms.

after dev leave to his room radhika closed common door of the rooms and balcony oor and felt a sleep

The nextday passed as the family were busy in completing rasams to be fulfilled by mrinalini and vivek. there were 2 people who were enjoying all these rasams peace fully. they were radev. the both had a lot of fun with each other and one should admit that they both became best friends.

the purohith family left to pb which was just beside the sharmas bhavan. during night unable to sleepradhika came out into the balcony suddenly see saw dv standing in balcony in his room in pb she waved at him but she saw him lost in some thoughts. she flt some thing wrong but left it.

finally the day of marrioage...

every one including radh and dev were also busy in preparations. radhika was helping deepika and vydehi i decorating mrinalini and deepika was playing pranks on mrinalini in the same way she played on her and in pb dev,arjun were getting vivek ready.
the moohrat was at 11:30 am and the baraa reached sharmas mansion by 10:30.the marriage rituals were started, radhika brought mrinalini into mandap. mrinalini was wearing a red colour bridalcostume where as radh was wearing a blue colour ghagra with a diamonds set and her hair open.dev can;t take his gaze away from her but immediately something striked his mind and took his gaze away from her.radhika didn't notice all this as she was busy in helping the pandit.
after completion of marriage biddai was done and all went to purohith bhavan along with married couple and only radhika and sheetal wre there in hopuse. sheetal was seeing things get ready to send for shagun and radhika a bit restless went to her room.after going to her room she opened devs room and went into it, there she saw a paer lying on floor and took it, she saw her picture beneathh which was written please get ou of my life and below signed at edge was dev. she was shattered on reading this and she was fed into tears went into her bed and was crying. dadima thought she was sleeping as she told her not to disturb before she comes into her room. at night its nearly & radhika was out in balcony, at that moment only dev came into balcony of his room and seeing her he waved his hand. but radhika on seeing him went into her room and shut the door. dev felt a bit odd on this and some thing wrong about her.

sheetal;radhika!

radhika:haan dadi

sheetal:ye box ko jakar sharada aub=nty ko dedo

radhika:thik hain dadi

lekin ye kya hain

aap ramji ko nahyi bhej sakte hain

sheetal:ye toh gehna hain mrinalini ke liye is liye tujhe bhejrahi hu

radhika:toh thik hain dadi

radhika went into pb and saw birju,

radhika; arey birjy bhaiyya

birju:bolo radhika ji

radhika:bhaiyya aap muje sirf radhika hi bhulaiye

birju;thik hai bolo radhika

radhika:bhaiyya vo hum dadima se milni hain

wo kaha hain

birju: mere saath aao main tujhe dikhavunga

birju took radhika to devs room where dadi was talking some thing to dev. radhika was about to go in but listening dadi saying important matter she felt wrong to diaturb tem and stopped there. they both stood beside door but radhika can heear their words.

sharda:dev my tum se ek jarroorat baat karni hain

dev:bolo dadi

sharda and vaishali looked at each other and dadi continued

"dev humaari donom parivaar bachpan se bhi teri aur radhika ki shaadi karna chahte hain. aur ab sheetal ki tabiyat thik nahi reh raha tha is liye hum ne socha ki aap ki wedding engegement abhi karke tere padai ke baad tum donom ki shaadi karenge. tum kya kehte ho dev.

dev was silent. radhika who was listening this from out side was thinking of paper and waiting for devs reply

vaishali; dev kuch toh batao. we are waiting for ur reply.

dev:maa, dadi mai ne indagi mein kabhi bhi tumse inkaar nahi kiya lekin ab aaj i am sorry to say no to u

vaishali: no ? but why dev. don't u like her

dev: no maa i like her a lot , ( radhikas face is happy) shes my best friend. but i doesn't have any feel towards her

dadimaa:dev tum kisi aur se pyaar karte ho (radhika again tensed)

dev:no but may be in future.

so i don't want to take a decision right now till completion of my studies

vaishali:lekin

dev:maa sorry but please don't hope on this because i am not sure.

and right now stop this

radhika was already crying in her heart but in one way shes happy that he considers her as his friend but she was crying a lot for his disagree. unable to stay there radhika left giving box to birju and saying him to givew that to dadima. when birju tried to speak she said him not to tell any one that she listened all this

the next days though the senior citizens are unhaapyy they tried to be normal with rads as they thought radhs doesn't know all these and radhs to pretended to be happy. she avoided dev mostly which made dev think that she hates him and he was really sad that his best friend hate him.

the day before his departure dev came to radhikas room to tell her bye.

dev:radhika

radhika:kya dev

dev: i am leaving tomorrow


radhika:okay dev

dev:radhika whats wrong with u and why u are bahaving like this

radhika:nothing dev i was just a bit sleepy right now

she said this and closed the door andd inside she said sorry dev but i don't want u to know that i know all this

dev was really sad with the way radhs with him he just doesn't liked it.

radhika gave a letter and a gift to birju telling to give to dev before he left in airport

purohith family along with mrinalini left vrindavan.

after 2years...

it was a great meeting as the two main companies of delhi purohith industries and sharma industries were becoming one p.s industries

on the stage were the company m.d rajkumarpurohith and sheetal sharma and ceos from both the companies... vivek,susheel,ranjiv,padma.

after releasing the logo of ps industries shetal started talking and in between she was a bit emotional which resulted in heart arrest. sheetal died.

after sheetal death ranjiv chacha wants tot ake care of radhika but sharada wants to take care of radhika. there was a small argument between them but finally sharada succeeded in saying that she gave a promise to sheetal. finally radhika came int o purohith bhavan,delhi.she cmpleted her 12thstandard and joined buisness school and succesfully completed her 2 years with a top rank. and the upcoming year is final year and if she completes it tooo she will be the youngest woman to complete the buisness schooling at a tender age of 22 years

in these three years she was very much attatched with the purohith family and even she loves rp couple more than her parents.

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she came back from her thoughts as her phone ringed and lift it up

precap:dev meeting radhs in vrindavan for second time
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guys i know i fasten up the track but i don't want to drag the precap more becaus ei just want to show present track, and in next update u can get some special radev moments
hope u people are enjoying track

yaar please forgive me if i did any wrongs as i am not a good writer and when ti comes to emotions i am very poor so please bear my nonsense and don't throw tomatoes at me
Edited by harianjana - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
lool again read it before i got ur pm really loved it too good finally the present track really cant wait till radev meet who called radhika update soon really cant wait for the next part and i really mean it when i say i loved it and thanks for the pm in advance hari
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I was rite with my prediction about the paper!yuppyy...Amazing update hari!so they r friends,nd he refused the arranged marriage,poor radh!! Waiting 4 radev moment?,tnx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
thanks yaar really love it and waiting for the next part...hope you update it soon...really love it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for the lovely update...can't wait for Radev moments.
please add me to your PM.

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