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Posted: 14 years ago
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A tear drop which is rolled up at the bridge of her lower lid...
the smile from her face fade away..
the tear filled eyes looked at him,
but he hide his face behind that fake KK...
I can feel the weight of that chunri over my head, and i am still holding it carefully
lekin kyum , krishna kanhaya , aapne aapka chehra mujhse chupaya....
your face brought colors into my mind and filled my heart with joy...
and i was dreaming , and was silently exchanging all those unspoken words....
lekin kyum krishna kanhaya, aapne aapka chehra mujhse chupaya kyum..
mei hum aap ki radha rani, aap se ye pooch rehe hei...
why this tear is failing to fall down....
her eyes kept on looking into his hidden face, the words were exchanging in the middist of happy moments around....... the pain that only they can feel, the words that only they can hear, their eyes were only seeing them......
he looked into those tear filled eyes with that stabbing pain..
kya kahum mei thumse... mei tho socha..... thum mujhe mil geye, ye bede bath hei...
lekin................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very good Devika....you have written beautifully and woven the atmosphere of coming precap...This forum is full of surprises...Liked your poetry....Without them saying a word you conveyed their thoughts in your poetry.....very sad
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good work Devika.........here is something for you.

From Dev to Radhika

Your questioning eyes are sad. They
seek to know my meaning as the moon
would fathom the sea.
I have bared my life before your
eyes from end to end, with nothing
hidden or held back. That is why you
know me not.
If it were only a gem, I could break
it into a hundred pieces and string
them into a chain to put on your neck.
If it were only a flower, round and
small and sweet, I could pluck it from
its stem to set it in your hair.
But it is a heart, my beloved.
Where are its shores and its bottom?
You know not the limits of this
kingdom, still you are its queen.
If it were only a moment of pleasure
it would flower in an easy smile, and
you could see it and read it in a
moment.
If it were merely a pain it would
melt in limpid tears, reflecting its
inmost secret without a word.
But it is love, my beloved.
Its pleasure and pain are boundless,
and endless its wants and wealth.
It is as near to you as your life, but
you can never wholly know it.


The poem is by Tagore and its called Your Questioning Eyes.

Edited by misti73 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Devika, all I can say is Wow!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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No Words to describe what i felt Misti except it brought tears in my eyes....I have read very few poems by Rabindranath Tagore, that also which were in text books....this is very beautiful ...Thank you
Edited by neerjashingla - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Devika bravo👏👏👏👏👏
You have put it so beautifully in poetry and words Radhika's thoughts and feelings....
It brought tears for me too😭😭
beautiful...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Misti for a beautiful poem of our Dear Tagore....👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow Devika, that was beautiful! I am speechless.....
Misti, that was a touching reply from Dev to Rads......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Devika, good job with describing Radhika's feelings and Misti I loved the poem.

Since this is a spiritual relationship, they should show Dev and Radhika interrupting each other's sadness. Radhika has always seen Dev as a smiling chirpy person who talks a lot with her. This silent Dev with his sad eyes staring at her has to make an impression. Also, Dev has to see that Radhika went from a shy blushing bride to be to a sad looking person whose eyes were overflowing with tears while looking at him. So he has to understand that Radhika is experiencing pain and questioning it.

There has to be an introspection after this from both Radhika and Dev's side (once the breakdown is over) if they are making a right decision.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Devika you have protrayed Radhika's thoughts beautifully and Misti your reply from Dev is beautiful too. Your words will remain in my mind when watching the episode and crying through out the chunri scene.

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