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Devika
This is really good update the way each of them Dev and Radhika passing their days Dev is busy Radhika is too but she has more time and so missing him more now that she is going to Chandenpur she will miss him more and all the scenery and atmosphere will not soothe her she wants her Dev back.😃

awwwww! dat was such a sweet and emotional update! i loved it! can't wait for Dev's arrival!!! wooohooo!! keep it coming Devika di!

great filler episode.... like it how you advanced everything smoothly.. Now so many changed in personality... in professions... more maturity... now the story moves forward on Dev's coming... may be wedding???

loved the way you projected everyone's emotions di.... lovely update.. Thank you so much...

wow di birju going to marry hope Dev will come for the marriage and fox a date for his wed also...
Rad also finished her course coool... Hey really what happen to Arjun...
any way heena thinks much about Arjun aha...
cool di thanks for the update it is gr8
waiting for the next part

Nice filler episode--lot of things happened and story has moved ahead quite a bit...
Felt the deep yearning of Radhika for Dev--the ending was very touchy--and I feel like saying "I am waiting..I am waiting" for the next update..

Thanks for the insights to your FF--thoughts you addressed in your comments..it really (I think) helps the readers to understand your characters and their mind set much better..liked your description of a man's role Vs a women' role in the Indian society; and especially liked the fact that "a woman is more powerful than man"😊...just kidding--

Loved the conversation between Heena and Radhika and you brought out the answers to the questions we all had about Radhika's acceptance of Dev's decision..

Your carefree, free-spirited Radhika--a beautiful, restless butterfly,... will soon be leaving her garden and will travel with you --the journey may be long and the path may be meandering..but I am sure, you will get her to her world safely and with love and support from her Dev...

Devika it was a beautiful update... Really loved the way u described Radhika's reasons and pains...

Devika bt i found one thing missing in ur this update, that was the return journey of Suchi and Surender.. hw they feel nw ....i would have loved it more if u would have thrown some light on it. too.

Nice filler update , full of diff. emotions .. radev is really missing each other .. probably things go different for her now in chanderpur also .

very good update ...thx for the pm...looking forward to more 😃