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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks palak 4 the update...........plzz continue soon.....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: DEVIKA8

dear.. so r u working on next part ... keep it coming.. i still have struggle with so many jodi's , but it is always nice to have many friends and charactors aorund, u can surely build a nice story with it.. waiting for next

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PS: how you selected all those names yaar, i have big struggle in that.. so made, DM, DW, SW..ha ha ha.. thinking how people will follow who is who.. but after reading ur charactors i think, it is ok with so many names around...😆

yep di im working on the next pt probz pst it 2moz lol i knw its hard to remeber the all character but sure u will remeber the one day 😉 lol it was nor hard selecting their names and the ppl who layed the characther were easy to find. like i chose radhikas friens froma show called dil mil gayen and devs friend from milley jab hum tum and just put thier names they are been called bexause if i hadnt thought of the name this ff wouldnt have started 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess84

awesome parts palak update soon can't wait to read the next installment...i caught with the story and its amazing...continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn



omg u knw when i sent u a pm prob 2 times i thought u might not be intreseted in it or u must of been busy thats y u have not read it but im glad that u found some time and caught up with the story coz i was thinking when is princess84 gone comment and finaaly u di i will update the next pt on sunday which is 2moz and once again thatks for commeting and the liking the few pt 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: DAIRY25

THANKS DEAR PART IS MIND BLOWING , JUST WAITING FOR NEXT.



thanks dairy25 for liking the pt i will update soon
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Originally posted by: hotie

Haye Haye main marjaawan!!


Sorry for the late comment I was busy writing teh other Part for teh FF and thats for you...

Anyways

Fabulous..
Fantablulous..
Awesome!
Exellent!
Perfect!
Cute!
Superb

Part!! There are more words but it to big of a list so yeah..

Anyways Awesome Sonali Yaart! SUperb!



thank u anmol really appreciate it next pt coming up soon on sunday which is 2moz 😉
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Originally posted by: sweetrubi

thanks palak 4 the update...........plzz continue soon.....😊



thank u glad u liked it
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next part coming up in few minutes
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Originally posted by: palak13



thank u anmol really appreciate it next pt coming up soon on sunday which is 2moz 😉


2day In a few minutes can't wait!! HUrry up1
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys here is the next pt

Recap: everyone became friends radev had some casual talk. Shekar, shashank and sharad get some call by a person who threatens them and says that he want them to be ruined and he want radhika and know a secret that radhika is adopted. All the three men tell the other member of the family and finding a solution 4 this and then retire to their room. Sharad and gayatri went to check on radhika as they were really worried and then went back to their room as they saw her sleeping peacefully.

Part 5

All the younger were going for the bb match and the elder decided to stay at home and didn't tag along coz they knew that at least radhika is with so many peoplel. Dadi was still not feeling well and stayed in her room and devs dadi stayed with her in case she needs anything. The men were talking to the commissioner that they knew very well and informed him about the phone call last night

At the bb court mrinanli, vivek, deepika, arjun, vishaka, purab(who came as vishaka friend so that no one else finds out about them and radhika made sure that no one else does) roshani, keshav, sharman and angad were sitting on the bench waiting 4 the match to start. Sharman saw angad lost in his own thoughts and elbowed his arm which made angad come out of his thought and raised his eyebrow asking 'what' and sharman done the same asking 'what is he thinking about'

Sharman: bhai who thoughts are u lost in asking mischievously

Angad: kya matlab hain tera pretending as he didn't know what sharman was talking about.

Sharman: bhai ap janntein ho mein kya keh raha hoon. Teek hain to mein ke dehta hoon app meri hone wali kripa babhi ke barrien mein soch rahien hain na saying teasingly

Angad who now got caught did say anything and kind of blushed

Sharman: oh ho bhai ap to blush kar rahien ho, let me do one think when kripa babhi comes here I will tell her how u were blushing

Suddenly angad gave shraman and angry stare and pulled his ears and said: agar aisa kiya to tumharein liyein acha nahin hoga and u know the results right and let go his ears. Sharman just nodded like a little kid and was quite.

Radhika came up and sat on the bench near angad tying her shoe laz up when she heard angad say

Angad: bacha apna dyan rakhna tera pair abhi hi teek hua hain hum he said stroking her hair

Radhika: bhai app chinta mat karo im fine and plz abb aur kuch mat khena im perfectly fine as she knew angad gone tell her again to take care of herself . she gave a side hug to angad and left while hitting sharman on the head lightly saying u desrve this. Sharman was confused and then said ill get you for this in his mind so that angad doesn't hear him.

Dev. Ok guys ready

The referee was birju

All: ready and who threw the ball in the air

Armaan got the ball and was boucing and running then he passed it to radhika and she ran with the ball, bouncing it samrat was behind her and was about to get it but she put the ball in the goal and hi- fived her team this time radhika had the ball and she was trying to score but dev kept blocking her way but then suddenly dev takes the ball from radhika and bounces the ball, the came kept going on and the score for radhika team was 5 and so was devs team they were on level and was enjoying the game everyone was cheering for the team they supported. This time atul had the ball and he was nervous coz he was surrounded by devs teams everyone was screaming atul pass the ball but then atul had no choice and he threw the ball towards the goal which was far away from him he thought if he misses it then everyone would be mad at him but to his luck the ball went in the goal and was cheering. Sapna had the ball and was running and she was about to pass it 2 radhika but radhika was looking somewhere else so ridzzi came and took the ball and scored arman saw radhika keep looking another direction and he said basked kya hua tumm baar baar whaha kyun dekh rahin ho. Then suddenly she spoke and said

Radhika: armaan waha koi tha I jst saw someone and armaan looked to where she was looking and said

Armaan : basket waha koi nahin hain tum game par concentrate karo ok

Radhika thought that she must be worrying for no reason and got back playing the game

Nikki had the ball and the nearest person to her was abhi but she didn't want to pass it to him

Abhi: nikki ball pass karo jaldi

Nikki: noo I will never give you the ball

Abhi: nikki hurryt up

Radhika: nikki abhi ko ball pass karo jaldi

Suddenly nupur came and took the ball and passed it to uday and he bounced the ball and passed it to mayank, sapna tried getting the ball couldn't and mayank scored. Nikki and abhi were blaming each other but then anji came and told them to play properly and concentrate on the game which they agrre to but gave each other one evil look and went to their position.

Rahul had the ball and he passed it to anji and anjali passed it to muskaan as she was near the goal and muskaan got so excited that she was dancing as she had the ball but the mayank came and grabbed the ball and went to the other side to score but couldn't

Because anjali and rahul was infron So Mayank passed the ball to gunjan and she was trying to pass it to benji as he was near but couldn't as armaan was behind benji and thought he might catch but the other told her to throw it and benji tried to catch it but missed and the ball went to armaan and he scored a goal. The score was 9 for radhika team 10 for dev and the team decided that they will end the game on 11 but birju informed them that they only had 2 minure . both the team were worried and trying to score and this time dia had the ball and she was running and bouncing the ball to throw it to dev and one minute was left. dev was ready for the ball to come to him but suddenly radhika came in the way and tried to take the ball from dia but couldn't but finally she managed and got the ball of her and was running to the goal there was 3o seconds left dev was behind her and each team member were cheering for them dev was about to get the ball but radhika threw it the ball kind of was on the edge and everyone was worried and after the ball went in the goal and radhika cheered and went up to armaan and lot now the score was 10: 10 and birju ended the game saying that it's a draw everyone went towards the bench and had water and was wiping their sweat with a towel and talking and laughing.

Dev: radhika tum acha kel lethi ho

Radhika: thanks smiling at him and drank her water then she was dev splashing water on his hair and kind of blushed and then went back speaking to angad. Armaan was flirting with riddhima but riddhima lightly pushed him and he turned the other way and saw someone standing in the same place where radhika was saying she saw someone he looked carefully but couldn't see his face as he was wearing a hood on and taking pictures and video and then walked away that person didn't see armaan as he was looking at someone else armaan decided to tell the other but thought he will tell them when they reach home. While everyone was getting ready to go roshani and keshav were speaking to each other

Roshani: hi im roshani

Keshav: hi im keshav

Roshani: um tum kya kartien ho I mean r u in college or gone join ur dad business

Keshav: no no im in college u?

Roshani : me in college to main to excel college main parti hoon aur tum

Keshav: that strange main bhi waha jara hoon parne ko I bet this is ur first year right:

Roshani: ha that great hum college main mill be saktien hain say excitedly and then put her hands forward and said friends?

Keshav : friends

And talked about casual things and went when the other were leaving

Vishaka said her byes to purab and gave him a quick hug and kiss as they were behind each other radhika saw them walking slow and said ok purab ab tum jao warna problem ho gi teek hain

Vishaka: par radhika

Radhika: no vishaka

Vishaka was upset that purab had to go even when she was meeting him yesterday

Purab gave a quick hug to vishaka and said bye sweeties see u tomorrow and then pulled radhika nose and said bye cuties ab to tum mere hone wali salli banne wali ho and left from there

Radhika: radhika immites purab saying ab to tum mere hone wali salli banne wali ho. And stares at vishaka who was laughing and said tum itna has kyun rahien ho kehta hain ke main uske hone wali Salli hoon my foot salli he doesn't even have the guts to come with his family and ask 4 ur hands. She said vishaka started laughing again seeing radhika annoyed and radhika gave her a look then she started to laugh and both went home with the others. Suddenly we seem someone coming out from a tree and saying bye radhika see u soon and went away.

All the kids came hone and got freshen up all the elders were putting up a fake smile as if nothing happened

In angad room he was on the phone taking to kripa

Angad: hi kaise ho

Kripa: main teek hoon tum

Angad : par main teek nahin hoon

Kripa: kyun kya hua being worried

Angad: arriend how can I be fine when my love is not with me plz jaldi yaha aa jao

Kripa: teek hain aur waise main kal aa rahien hoon

Angad hmmm and then was shocked and said: what what did u sai u r coming tomorrow

Kripa: ha baba im coming tommorw sharman told me how u were missing him

Angad was so angry when he heard that sharman told kripa but then a smile came up his face and was thinking how sharman care about him and his anger melted

Kripa: acha ab sab log kaise hain missing them to

Angad they all r fine radhika is missing u so much

Kripa: acha angad main phone rakh ti hoon hospital jaana hain (she has recently joined sanjeevani where radhika and the other gone work)

Angad: bye love u

Kripa: luv u to.

In the hall

Mayank was taking to his mum on the phone and was about to hang up but when he saw nupur coming he pretending that he is speaking to someone else

Nupur was all smiling and was walking to mayank when she heard mayank sai

Mayank: I miss u too I promise I will come soon

Nupur got jelous and was listhening carfully

Mayank: ha baba arrien nahin nupur yahaan nahin hain tum tension mat lo

Nupur was shocked that mayank was taking about her and she went up to mayank and tapped him on the shoulder

Mayank pretended that he just saw her now and said ok I will call u later and put the phone away

Nupur: nahin nahin phone kyun rakh diya bat karo na trying to cool herself down

Mayank was laughing inside by seeing nupur getting jelous

And said nupur something burning and I think its jelousy

Nupur : jelousy my foot why would I be jelous

Mayank: but I didn't say ur name

Nupur as being caught said mayank tum kisse baat kar rahien te aur y was u saying I miss u to and I will come soon and then u said no nupur not here so dnt worry

Suddenly mayank just burst out laghing seeing nupur like this and nupur was confuse as to why us mayank laughing and annoyingly she asked mayank y u laughing

Mayank calmed down and told her that he was only joking he was speaking to his mom and was about to put his phone down when he saw her coming so he wanted to tease her a bit hearing this nupur slapped him on the shoulder and pretended to be anger but started to laugh because of her stupid behaviour and both left

Radhika was in her room thinking about dev she was wondering y is she thinking about him and looks at her kanha and walk toward the little mandir in her room she seats infront of it for a min then ask kanha ye mujhe kya ho raha hain main dev ke barien me itna kyun soch rahine hoon kyun? (radhika shares everything with kanha and she writes it in her diary too ) kyun main itni kush hoti hoon jab wo mere samnien atta hain then y do I get shy. But all she could see that the idols were smiling at her

Then sharman walks in her room and sits on the bed with his hands crossed

Radhika walkis to him and asks wt happned

Sharman: pata nahin dad aur mom ko kya ho gaya hain wo log itne pareshaan kyon hain aur dadi maine mom se kaha ke main dadi se milne jar aha hoon unke kamre main par uno nain mana kar diya saying that she is not feeling well

Radhika : wt dadi bimar hain aur kissi nain batyaa nahin kyun

Sharman: pata nahin aur baki elders bhi stangely behave kar rahein hain

Radhika: u don't worry main mama se baat karti hoon

All the elder were in the garden in their own thoughts when radhika came up and said

Radhika: mama, papa ye sharman kya ke raha ta app sab itne pareshaan kyun hain looking at the other to and then back at her parent saur app ne hum logo ko bataya nahin ki dadi bimar hain, gayatri got up and said: beta tu chinta mat kar dadi teekh ho jayagi aur hum log pareshaan nahin hain shraman ko bas aisa laga hota

Radhika: nahin mama kuch to hua hain shrman aise to nahin ke raha tah kyun ki app log sach main pareshann lag rahien te

Vashali: nahin beta kuch nahi hua beta

Gayatri beta tum apne kamrein me jao hmm

Radhika: gave up as she knew no one would tell her anything and said main dadi se milke atti hoon

All the elder were shocked as they heard radhika going to radhika room they knew if dadi saw radhika then she would cry and health would get worrser so they wanted radika to stay away from dad until she is better

Padma: nahin beta dadi abhi aramn kar rahin hain

Radhika: chachi main sirf dadi ko dekhne ja rahin hoon

Gayatri: phir bhi beta

Sharad: radhika apne karmrien mein jao plz

Radhika: papa main sirf dadi ko dekhna chati hoon plz

Shekar: beta aap dadi ko bad main dekh le na aur waise bhi dev ki dadi hain unke saath to tum tension mat lol

Radhika: par uncle

Shashank: ha beta aur tum to apne bodo ki baath tal ti to nahin ho na to plz

Radhika: chachu plz just once main dadi ko dekhna chati hoon ok and was about to go when sharad came forward and shouted at radhka and said

Sharad: HUM SAB KE RAHHIEN NA KE TUM DADI SE NAHIN MIL SAKTI AUR APNE ROOM MAIN JAO PAR TUMHARIEN DIMMAG MAIN YE BAATH JAATI HI NAHIN PLZ RADHIKA HUM LOGO KO AUR DADI KO KAM SE KAM TOHRI SHANTI TO DO!!

Radhika was shocked and was nearly in tears because he and the other have never shouted at the kids and he has never spoke that way he was always calm but today she didn't know wt happned to him and the most thing that hurts her was when he said 'RADHIKA HUM LOGO KO AUR DADI KO KAM SE KAM TOHRI SHANTI TO DO!!' she was thinking if she is the cause of this but wondering what has she done that made her dad so angry and if she is not the cause then y is everyone so worried and not letting anyone meet dadi and couldn't say anything when she heard her dad say

SHARAD: AB TUM APNE KAMRE MAIN JAO AUR TAB TAK NICHHE MAT ANNA JAB TAK MAIN NA KAHHON UNDERSTAND

Radhika couldn't even say anything as she was so scared so she just nodded and then ran to her room

Dev and the other were in the hall and saw radhika entering the house crying and running to her room he stopped her and asked her what happned but she said nothing armaan and dev gave a worried look and the rest did to other

Back in the garden

Gayatri: ye apne kya kiya shara, apne kabhi bhi bacho ke saath uchi awaz main baath nahin ki aur jo apne radhika se kaha wo galat kaha apko aisa gussa nahin karma chayien

Sharad: to aur kya karta mian gayatri arrien wo to samaj ne ko tayaar hi nahin thi aur ma se millne jaa rahin ti to main kya karta

Shekar: phir bhi sharad iss mien radhika ki kya galit hain uss bechari ko kuch pata hi nahin

Shashank: ha bhaiyan appko aisa nahin karma chayien ta, ajj radhika ko phele baar rohte dekha aur wo bhi itna sarra pata nhain wo kya soch rahin hain aur app ko andazza hain ke usse par kya beeth rahin hogi

Sharad was not ready to listhen to anything and decided to go out for a walk and the other men joined them while the ladies went to cook dinner the commissioner told them that he will try to find out who called and then said if they get any information then should call him ASAP.

Dev and lot tried knocking on radhika door and told her to open it but she told them that she want to be left alone at the moment she was on her bed crying and tears were just flowing.

Till then dinner was cooked and the men came back everyone was seated for dinner the elder acted casual as if nothing happened except radhika both the dadi had dinner sent in their room

While serving gayatri saw radhika seat empty and said arrien radhika abhi nahin ayien

Sharad looked at the emply seat and was upset as his daughter was badly hurt just because of him and he was thinking when I said all those thing that hurt her feelings but what will happen when she finds out the truth that she is adopted. Kahna plz kuch karo he was about to get up when shekar stopped him and told him to go after as they will send the kids for a walk. They all finished eating dinner and then shashank told the kids to go for a walk they all were supirsed and asked about radhika but they told not to worry about her and go everyone went for a walk but found something fishy

Radhika was in her room she was crying for so many hours but then fell asleep, the ladies decide to join the men but they told them to go to the dadi so they agreed and the 3 ladies went to dadi.

Sharad: knocking on the door and calling her name radhika, radhika but no answer

He looked at the men and they told him to open the the door and walk in

Shashank was holding a jug with glass of water and shekar was holding a plate with food in it

The all entered in and saw the lovely innocent girl sleeping in front of them they all walked up to her and bent down they saw traces of tears sharad was so upset and started to his daughter crying for so many hours but the other consoled him and toild him to wake her up and they 2 men sat on the couch while the daughter and father speak

Sharad stroked radhika hair lovingly and woke he up: radhika, utho beta

Radhika slowly opened her eyes but when she saw her dad she got a bit upset and sat up on her bed and looked at nothing she didn't have the courage too look in his eyes

Sharad: radhika beta im sorry mujhe tum par chilana nahin chayein ta sorry putting his hands on his ears

Radhika couldn't hold her self and hugged her dad and cried her out sharad was comforting her and stoking her head after a while radhika stopped crying and the looked up at her dad and said: papa im sorry mujhe zidd nahin karma chayien ta im sorry

Sharad : no im sorry ab chalo tum ne khana nahin kya na chalo tohra sa kahlo dekho shekar aur shashank pyar se layien tumarrien liye and radika looked up at them and smiled and then he said today im gone feed u with my own hands

And both the daughter and father had a lovely moment after finishing her dinner radhika asked when dad gone be better but sharad gave a excuse saying that doctor said only one person can saty with her until she is better hmm which radhka nodded to and said I hope dad jaldi se teek ho jayien.

Radhika: uh papa bakhi sab kaha hain

Shahank: beta wo sab bar walk ke liyein gayien hain don't worry wo jald his ajjyein achha chalo ab tum sa jao teek hain

With that radhika nooded and went back to sleepy while the men closed the door and left the room

All the youngeter decide to go back dev received al call from the USA his friends knew who it was and told the other dev will come shortly till then lets go

Dev on the phone

Dev: hi

Person on the phone: hi kaise ho

Dev: im fine u

Person on the phone: im fine as usual tum india ja kar bahut kush ho na

Dev: ha kush hoon par tummarien bina alag hain I jus miss u SNEHA

sneha is devs girlfriend and this is wt she looks like

Krystle Dsouza

sneha played by krystle Dsouza

sneha: miss u too anyways ye bato tum ne mere barein apne family se baath ki

dev: erm sneha abhi bat nahin ki par I promise main jaldi bat karronga promise

sneha: its ok no worries anyways baki sab kaise hain aur tummhien appni wo childhood friend millien

dev: bakki sab acche hain nupur aur sab tummien bahuat miss kartien hain aur haan mujhe mere bachpan ki dost mill gayien aur pata hain jab hum log phele baar milli te na to''.. and dev told everything happened between them and how they became good friends. Acha sneha raktha hoon love u

sneha: luv u to

dev ran to other and nupur elbowed him and asked him wt she was saying and he said nothing.

They all returned to their room and fell asleep the firls checked on radhika and saw her sleeping peacefully and didn't wake her up as coming on the way gyatri told them not to wake her up as she just ate and fell asleep. Armaan told riddhima to see readhika and tell him if she ok

Armaan and guys were sitting in the room and chatting when riddhima and gunjan enter and tell them that radhika is fine and sleeping so dnt worry

Precap: everyone woke up early in the morning as angad had told them last night that kripa is gne arrive but radhika didn't gayatri asked about radhika and sapna told them she is till sleeping and they told her to wake her up as its 9:00 am sapna went to the room to wake radhika up but she want waking up she was then thought that she will her up and she might wake up but when she touched her hand it was so hot and she was worried she touched her forhead and and neck and it was warm and she called gaytri and told her that radhika had got a fever and she is not opening her eyes,sapna called doctor keerti and gayatri told the other, they all were worried and waited for dr keerti the ladies were upstairs with radhika while all the men stayed downstairs.

NEXT PART

Radhika ill😲



Ok guys this was pt 5 hope u like plz press the like button and leave a comment if its boring plz tell me

probz know u r not happy dev having a girl friend and must feel like throwing tomatioes at me sorry but promise radev gone be one 😃

Edited by palak13 - 14 years ago

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