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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: hotie

Okay Okay...Hmm lets see

Today Tommorow.
Eanie Meanie Minie Mo Catch the tiger by the toe if he hollers let him go eanie meanie minie mo not because your dirty not because your clean just because you kissed a girl😳😆Behind a magazine.😆
And it is....
Drum roll please.....
Keep scrolling if you have to😆😃
It is today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





2dai yay i cant wait update soon if u mean 2dai u mean 2dai right not 2moz and if u dnt update i might faint so update a nice part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey soz 4 my mistake in the last part im not that good in hindi as im gujrati but i still understand so plz bare with me as i said i will post a pt this week here is one 4 u now

recap:radhika and dev were alone at home but then shocked to see other a little incident happned that made radhika a bit embarrased but dev seem colled with it and didnt seem to affect him nupur, mayank, gunjan, samrat, armaan, riddzi, muskaan , dia, suhaani anji, sapna and radhika become friends but decide that there will be a bb match but only 4 fun. now will the other agree to be friends with eachother and try and make the other friends with eahother

part 4

radhika always wakes up early no matter wherever she is and always has bb match with armaan or sharman or either she practices herself but inside she still had a heavy headache but decide not to tell anyone. She was bouncing the ball and was waiting 4 the other to come. Dev and his friends came in their bb kit and was ready for the practice, all the girls and samrat and mayank smiled at radhika and she smiled back at them suddenly she saw dev walking in talking to someone on the phone and all his attention was there. She was admiring him and thinking how awesome he looks in this bb kit but then suddenly she came back to reality and asked herself wt she is thinking. She didn't know y but since she was close to dev that day since then she was feeling some excitement in her body. And decide to practice till the other came

samrat and the other saw radhika skill and admit that she was really good at bb and had really had good skills samrat saw dev coming and thought he should try this idea out and called out to dev and said: arrien dev come here. Dev walked to samrat and asked : kya hua?

Samrat tell dev to look at radhika and see her bb sklls dev admitted that she was good at it but he said that he know one can ever beat him in bb which made the other face gloomy as they understood samrat plan except benj, uday and adhiraj and they agreed with dev.

Benji: sammy to yh kya keh raha hain we all know that dev is the best player and no one cant beat him isn't it dev

Dev: exactly

By the time armaan and the group arrived and they all smiled to the other and went for their practice there was a ball for each person most of them were practicing with each other wile the other were practicing there self . radhika just couldn't move her gaze from him and whenever dev turns her ways she try to concentrate on the bb dev then turns his gaze away and pratices again . radhika couldn't stop herself and gazed back at him she then came back to herself and said radhika control yourself wt wrong with you you don't have to stare at him and y u smiling when you look at him no radhika concentrate on the ball not on dev that wt her mind was telling her to do but her heart was telling her to do what she feels like and that was gaze at him she just didn't understand the emotion running insider her and was in her own little world thinking about that incident and his breath near her neck that just made her shy still in trance she was running bouncing the ball not seeing the rock infront suddenly she just tripped and hurt her feet and slightly her arms started to bleed when everyone heard her moan they all went running to her dev was so worried that he ran to her before the other

Radhika: owwwwww! Bahut dard ho raha hain she said looking at her arm and feet and crying suddenly she sees a hand coming up to her arms and trying to wipe the blood which made radhika slightly shiver because of his touch and was lost in his eyes

Dev didn't notice radhika staring at him even the other except armaan and nikki they knew something was wrong and decide to find out and gave both each other a thumbs up. Radhika suddenly notice she was staring at dev and was surrounding by other and moved her gaze away. She was about to get up but she couldn't as her ankle was slightly twisted and she gave another moan.

Nupur went up to radhika and asked her: radhika tum teekh ho na chinta mat karo hum gar jaate hi doctor ko phone karege

Everyone was in shocked as nupur said that especially mayank because they didn't want dev to know this

Abhi: yh tum kya ke rahin ho kal to tum isse affat bula rahin thi aur ab tummein radhika ki chinta hain he said a bit suspicious

Armaan decide that soon everyone gone find out the truth so y not now so he said

Armaan: emr guys wo actually baat ye hain ke wo'..

Nikki: baat yh hain ke hum log friends ban gayein hain ek dussre ke saath

Dev and the other who didn't know about this while the other were shocked rest and was nodding there head and then mayank came up in the middle and said

Mayank: guys main jaanta hoon ke tum log shocked ho aur upset par guys jagar ne se kya hoga atleast we can become friends and get to know new ppl

No one had any words to say and then he continured plz guys lets become friends and the other agreed but dev just stayed like that samrat then went up to him and said

Samrat : dev tu to kehta tha radhika tere best friend hain and u r proud to have her as ur childhood friend then would u want to be friend with her dev looked at radhika while radhika stared at him feeling a bit guilty.radhika was still stitting on the floor with the other by her side and dev infront of her and then he pulled dev hands forwared and radhika hand and said now come on guys shake hands and become friends radev thought about this and looked at there friends and they all nodded and then shaked eachother hand and smiled

Muski: hi rabba ab hum sab ki dosti ho chukki hain kitna mazza aya na ab chalo bb match ki practice karien

Samrat : haan lets play th bb mathc not to prove anyone good but just 4 fun

Dev: hmmm chalo radhika

Nikki: hello bhai wt do u mean chalo radika uske haath par to choth deko na aur uske pair pa mocha a gayien she said while laughing

Radhika: tum log practice karo main ghar chal ti hoon and tried to get up but couldn't

Dev: ek minute and picked her up. Radhika didn't expect this from dev but the other weren't too shocked then he said to other guys tum log pratcie karo im taking radhika home which everyone nodded to

Dev got radhika out of the car and bough her home both the dadi saw this and was happi to see radhika and dev so close to eachother

Dev bought radhika into her room and placed her onto the bed abdn then he asked her for first aid box which she told him. He got the first aid box and sat next to her and applied the medicine on her which slightly stinged but then he blew air on and then put a bandage over her wound and smiled at her he was about to call the doctor but she told him that doctor keerti will come and she will check it. Suddenly there was silence between them when radhika said: dev tum mujse naraaaz nahin ho na

Dev was surprised by her question and asked: nahin par tum aise kyun puch rahien ho?

Radhika? Wo actually jo hua uske badd I mean wo

Dev: Relax radhika wo to past tha aura b we r friend now smiling back

Radhika: hmmm and then the had a long conversation and what they done in childhood wt they studied and wt they are panning to do in future and continued soon as dr keerti came dev left from there to get freshen up and dr keerti said radhika has sprained her leg and she will need rest soon everyone started to take care of radhika and didnt let her get out of bed.

Sharad, shashank and shekar were in the study room. Sharad and shekar were taking about business and shashan kshares most of his idea suddenly sharad gets a phone call he answers it

Person on the phone: hello sharad gupta kaise ho

Sharad: main teek hoon par aap kaun hain

Person on the phone: main hoon tera dushman hahahahahha came the laugh

Sharad: kya bakh rahien ho and who r u:

Person on the phone : wt makes u think that I will tell u who I am anyways I have something important to tell u infact u and the other know this but don't u think u kids should know this

Sharad : kya bakh rahien ho tum who was now angry gets up in anger shashank and shekar are worried and they get up shekar put the phone dow and puts the loud speak on

Person on the phone: main bakh nahn raha and keep ur volume down anywas let me tell u the good new that I know that one of your kids is adopted and u didn't tell her or the other kids in ur house aren't I right

Sharad: wt do u want and how do u know this

Person on the phone: arrien app to dar gayien abhi to survaath hain ker abhi to maine sirf itna battnein ke liye phone kiya. anyways ive got so many things I want but Ill tell the important want later let me tell u the first one for now

Sharad: bolo

Person on the phone:: main to yahin chata hoon ke tum barbaat ho jao

All the men were shocked wt did this person want and y did he want the gupta family to be ruined

Person on the phone anyways I heard radhika birthday is coming up so ill send her a gift do u know wt that gift is well let me tell u it's the paper that u signed when u were adopting her now ur daughter will know the truth imagine how she will feel well I cant wait when she leaves ur house hahahah

Shekar : akhir tum chatein kya ho: god trek hain 2 thing I want is RADHIKA do u want to hear it again I WANT RADHIKA AND MR SHARAD GUPTA HOW CAN U BE A CARLESS PERSON U KNW WT HAPPENED TODAY MY RADHIKA FELL AND HURT HERSELF HOW CAN U DO THAT AND THIS IS UR PUNISHMENT SHE SHOULD KNOW ABOUT THE SECRET U HID FROM HER SO MANY YEARS HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAhAhAhAhAhAhAhAHAHAH and then phne end

Shahasnk:bhaiyan yh inssan hain kaun aur wo radhika ke choth ke barrien main kaise jaanta hain

Sharad: sharad who was felling nervous that the raaaz that his family kept from his kids might come out now and was thinking of a way to stope this: pata nahi shshank yh kaun hain but because of his words he seems to be a dangerous man who can do anything and is after my radhika he said putting his hands on his head

Shekar: u r right sharad he does seem to be dangerous but we cant let radhika or the kids now they truth otherwise they will shatter and we have to make sure is radhika goes out then someone needs to be with her because it seems that this person is following radhika. 3 of the men came out of the study room and informed the elder of the family vecause of this new dadi kind of fainted and she was taken to her room and devs dadi followed

They all new the kids were with radhika but still they kept the voice low so they cant here anything.

Gayatri: ab kya hoga meri baachi she said crying

Vashakli and padma tried to console her and she agrre when they assured her that nothing will happen to radhika. It was nigh time and everyone went to sleep but sharad and gayatri went to radhika room they saw the other girls sleeping there and didn't want to disturb them they go and sit next to radhika for a while and see if she is ok when they saw her sleeping peacefully they decide to leave but before leaving sharad gave a kiss on radhika forehead and left:

Precap: both the teams got ready 4 the bb match everyone radhika was playing iswell as her feet got better and started to play before the game everyone wished eachother best of luck and started to play suddenly radhika notices someone outside the bb court she turns and looks at her side but finds no one therr and continures playing her game then she still feels someone watching onver and looks again to find no one armaan notice radhika looking in that direction and tell her to concentrate radhika tell armaan that someone there but he tell her there none . Everyone finished with game and chatting to eachother on bb court armaan see someone standing there with a hood on takes a piz and goes he was about to stope that person but he was gone and decides to tell the other later

guys if im boring u plz let me know, if u liked this pt plz press a like button and surley leave a comment 😉

group bb match

Edited by palak13 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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g8 part...thx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OH dear I went back from last posting to read the previous ones..
thanks for doing this FF.. my only problem is getting to know all your charactors. I know vishaka, but truely speaking, none else.. so they are still revolving around my head.. I loved Radev part so much... so nice and refreshing to be away from Vrindavan ... good to see Radhika as Bb player and also with so many friends.. around her..
I loved DEv's reaction when the flour fell on his head.. that was really funny..
thanks
Upadate soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: DEVIKA8

OH dear I went back from last posting to read the previous ones..

thanks for doing this FF.. my only problem is getting to know all your charactors. I know vishaka, but truely speaking, none else.. so they are still revolving around my head.. I loved Radev part so much... so nice and refreshing to be away from Vrindavan ... good to see Radhika as Bb player and also with so many friends.. around her..
I loved DEv's reaction when the flour fell on his head.. that was really funny..
thanks
Upadate soon.
😃



yay finally u commited di thanks ur words gives me inspertaion and so does everyones thanks for commeting now i will surley update the next pt soon i just need urlot support lol dw u will get to know all the charachter soon 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: palak13

Palak, i have something serious to tell you. If you really love to continue with your FF, always depend on the story line you want to continue.. The response is always and must a boost to your work..but if you wait for that you will be very disappointed. I wrote only one FF and that also first time in my life..but the story line in me was adding with each part... if i would have looked for the responses at the beginning, i may be still stuck with my part 4 or 5.. i never looked back till i reached part 20's , i believe and I realized, the importance of getting that responses.. I was posting as quick as i can and expected so much responses to fill my heart with the end part... but I got few when i compare to the readers list and PM list ( was sending to more than 50 people each time PM's, and it is not a complaint but a response what everyone look for their work)... once we start looking for that after posting the new update with so much enthusiasm, it may give happiness or vice versa.. so go ahead with ur lines, and we will defenilty follow you..
Even if u don't see the response quick, don't feel down, we all are here , need more radev stories because we all love avina... and cb..
Best wishes dear...
waiting for next part
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yay finally u commited di thanks ur words gives me inspertaion and so does everyones thanks for commeting now i will surley update the next pt soon i just need urlot support lol dw u will get to know all the charachter soon 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pyaar to hona hi tha Palak😉 so all turned friends and a friendly BB to follow liked the update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey PALAK Lovely update:)Loved it soo much:)
Please update ASAP😊
and OHH thanks for the pm:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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grt part.👏..loved it lot.... thrilled to know what happens nxt... pls update it soon....

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