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Posted: 17 years ago
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hii guys .i am sanjhali.i am new to this forum.I have read many fan fictions so i wanted to write 1 .i'll b posting the 1st part now.....so here it comes hope u all will like it..

It goes lik this that abhi n sam r married n its sam's b'day today .Abhi haven't wished her yet.Sam is at home only n all the other haws including veer sir n her mom + mother in law have wished her.Sam ws very upset that abhi haven't remembered her soo special day but still she was happy that others remembered it.They had organised a party for her.

Its the evening time n when abhi comes home .

Sam-abhi aaj hame ek b'day party mein jana hai n u also have to come .

Abhi -sam tum chale jana mera man nahin hai n tumhe pata hi hai ki mujhe zyada parties mein jana pasand nahin hai.

Sam-plzz abhi u have to come with me ma ne kaha hai ki zaroori hai party mein jana isliye plzz

Abhi gets ready n while they were (sam abhi n his mom)half way,abhi gets a call from the base that some1 have come to meet him so he has to report back to the base immediately.

Abhi-Sam mujhe base jana hoga ek emergency hai lekin i promise mai jaldi hi party mein a jaunga.

Sam -Its ok abhi .tum hame partry mein drop kar do n then u can go to the base.

Abhi-ok

So abhi drops them to the party place n leaves for the base.

Its been almost an hour n everybody is waiting for abhi so that sam will cut the cake.Then Farhan calls up abhi.Abhi was on his way

Farhan-Abhi kahna pe ho tum.Yahan pe sab log tumhara intezaar kar rahe hai .Jaldi se aao plzz.

Abhi-(farhan keeps the fone)mera intezar kar rahe hai????😕Farhan bhi us party mein aya hai???Anyways i have to rush.

Now abhi has arrived in the party .He was surprised to see that all the hawks,veer sir,sameera's mom all r present there.He goes near the cake where all the hawks were standing.He saw the cake n was shocked that today is sameera's b'day.

Farhan-lo abhi aa gaye .Bahut jaldi aa gaye Abhi.Kam se kam aaj ke din to jaldi aa jate.Sam jaldi se cake kato mujhe khana hai.

Sam-Abhi come n cut the cake with me

Abhi -(feeling very sad)Nahin tum hi akele kaat lo.I..I

Sam-abhi tumne mujhe subha se wisk to nahin kiya hai par atleast mere saath cake to kaat sakte ho na.

tanvi hears this 4m the back.

Guys i have written this much.Plzz tell me r u all liking it .Then i will most the next part.Hope its not soo boring.

plzz do reply

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ofcourse not. its not boring. pls post the next parts soon 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its not boring at all please continue soon we are waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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itz lovely infact do continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks a lote guys for a lovely response.So here comes the next part
PART 2
While sam was giving the cake to everybody ,Abhi was standing in 1 corner talking to person from d base.Tanivi comes from behind.
Tanvi-kya hua abhi bahut tensed lag rahe ho.
Abhi-nahin to bas aise hi
Tanvi-Abhi tum Sam ka b'day bhool gaye the na
Abhi-(being very honest)han mai sameera ka b'day bhool gaya .How can i do this??
Tanvi-Abhi tumne sam ko abhi tak wish nahin kiya hai .Usse wish karna ke bajaye tum fone pe bat kar rahe ho.
Tanvi-Abhi sam ko dekho wahan pe.Wo khush to bahut lag rahe hai .Sabke ke samne to wo bahut khush hai par andar se usse kahin na kahin bura zaroor lag raha hoga ki tumne abhi tak usse wish nahin kiya.
Abhi was feeling very sorry .
Tanvi-Abhi i think u should go n wish her .Abhi tak to wo tumse gussa nahin hui par i think ab zaroor ho jayega.
Abhi-(thinks upon what Tanvi said)i think u r rite i should go n wish her.Thanks tanvi.
Tanvi -anytime

Sam was talking to her mom
Sam -Mumma thodi der aur ruk jayena plzz.Aj mera b'day hai.
Mom-Sameera tum to janti ho na mai zyada der tak nahin ruk sakte parties mein.to plzz mujhe jana do
Sam -ok !! Lekin mai apko bahar tak chodne chalungi.Mana mat karna.
Both of them then leave.While Sam ws making her way to the hall Abhi holds her hand n takes her to the room.
Sam- abhi kya kar rahe ho.kisse ne dekh liya to
Abhi-Sam relax koi nahin dekhega.
Abhi-Sam mai janata ki tum mujhse bahut gussa ho kyunki aaj tumhare special day par bhi maine tumhe gussa kar diya.I am really sorry for that.
Sam -abhi its ok!! .I understand tum kaam mein bahut busy the isliye shayad mera b'day bhool gaye the.Plzz don't say sorry kyunki tumhe pata hai ki mujhe acha nahin lagat jab tum sorry bolte ho.
Abhi-Samera plzzz mujhe bol lena do otherwise i'll feel very guilty.
Abhi-maine aaj ke din to pura barbad kar diya tumhara lekin i promise mai kal ka din pura tumhare saath spend karunga.Mai base se half day leave le lunga.
Sam -Abhi iske koi zaroorat nahin hai .Tum mere saath ho yeh mere liye sab se bade baat hai.Tumhe koi zarroorat nahin hai leave lene ki.
Abhi-no sameera mai kal tumhe outing pein zaroor le jaunga.Tumhe mere saaath ana hi hoga nahin to mai yeh sochunga ki tum abhi bhi mujhse gussa ho.
Sam-abhi tak to mai gussa nahin hui tumse lekin shayad ab hojaungi.
Abhi-Ab kyun hogi gussa.
Sam-Abhi tumne abhi tak mujhe wish nahin kiya.
Abhi realises his foolishness
Abhi-happy b'day sameera
Sam-thanku so much Abhi.
Both of then hug each other n abhi gives a kiss on her cheeks.

Guys this was the 2nd part.Hope u all liked it
Now i would like u to plzzz give me some ideas on how to continue this .


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Posted: 17 years ago
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it is very good
pls cont fast 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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its really very nice we;; if u want an idea then i will say that u rite about a beautiful outing for abhi sam and how abhi makes this outing very special and memorable for samera
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hii guys.thanks for the lovely response.
soo here comes PART 3

SO its the a day after sam's b'day.Abhi n Sam after having a delicious breakfast went out for a romantic outing.While sam was getting ready
Sam-Abhi dekho mai tumse gussa nahin hun n tumhe koi zaroorat nahin hai mujhe bahar le jane ke.
Abhi-Sameera mujhe pata hai ki tum mujhse gussa nahin ho lekin plzz mujhe bahar le jane do tumhe.Aur wiase bhi hum kitne dino se ghumne nahin gaye .
Sam-to tum apne decisiopn change nahin karoge.
Abhi-nahin .
Both abhi n sam start smiling
Both abhi n sam left for having fun.
They did a lot of shopping n our dear abhi gifted a beautiful diamond set to Sam.They even went out for a romantic sight -seeing.
It was about 9'o clock at nite when Abhi stopped his car to very beautiful place.
Sam -Abhi car kyun rok de.
Abhi-Yahan par tumhare liye ek surprise hai.
Sam-Abhi surprise.Lekin yeh to bahut lonely se place hai.Yahan to koi nahin hai.
Abhi-koi nahin kya .Hum hai na .Lets go inside.
Both sam n abhi went inside .Abhi had arranged a beautiful candlelite dinner for her with music(specially violin),flowers,etc etc.there was a lovely waterfall rite at the back of them.
Sam-Abhi yeh sab tumne arrange karwaya hai.
Abhi-(holds her hands)Han yeh sab maine arrange karwaya hai.Mai kuch special karna chahata tha.
Sam-Abhi i dont need this .I just need u n you are with me .
Abhi-Sam kal ka din special nahin bana paya to aaj hi sahi.Common SAmeera lets celebrate this special moment.
Both sam n abhi started dancing .They were lost in each others eyes.Abhi was about to kiss Sam when Sam started blushing n moves away.
But abhi holds her n kisses her on her back.
They had a wonderful time with each other.

Guys thats it .I'll try to get more ideas n write another fanfiction.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Its an amazing Fanfic, Sanjhali!!! Do continue fast!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was very gud i am looking forward some more of ur fanfics

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