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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Silver Screen

lolzz😆 u r confused between your fan fiction and tum se hi.your fan fiction has reached its 51st part. this one's just on the 23rd part😆

oh god...thnks for telling me Aditi...I am sure confused today.....😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
grt work aranya continue soon . both ur fanfics are simply amazing
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Posted: 17 years ago
Astounding!!! Your Fanfic truly rocks IF!!!Please continue fast!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
PART 24:
Abhi after haering all this,informs the hawks to make their way out of this village...that saving sameera is his responsibility and that no harm will come to her as long as he is alive.
All the others dont really want to say yes but they just agree....

It is the next morning and Sameera is in thier hands...she is really weak and hungry and she is very tired...she tries to think of a way to escape...but then each and every time hse wants to think about it, she feels very lonely and all her history comes back to her...making her weep......
Abhi comes back in the early morning and decides to make a diversion for him to esacpe with Sameerea....He presents himself at the doorstep of Shaheen's house .....all her men go and surround Abhi....Abhi allows himself to be then taken next to Sameera and with the help of signs, tells her tht they both have to escape...he even tells her his plan.
Sameera is happy and she agrees...

The men keep sitting around Sameera and Abhi when , Shaheen has gone for a meeting with the boss....its really a good timing for Abhi and Sameera.
Abhi then slowly produces his bomb in front of the men and says that he will blow this if they dont let Sameera go...and that he doesnt mind giving his life for the country.
The men are scared,......they still dont listen to Abhi...Abhi then presses the button to start the bomb explosion....the men get really scared and they start rel;easing Sameera.
They let Sameera go and then Abhi catches hold of Sameera and pulls her close to him and hugs her and throws the bomb inside the house and escapes with Sameera pulling her and running.
Within few seconds, the bomb explodes leaving all the men killed...even those who were trying to save their lives.

Sameera and Abhi run and move into the jungle....Sameera is hurt...her leg is swollen and it seems as though she has a fracture.
She cries out in pain to Abhi saying that he must continue ahead as she cant and will not be able to...Abhi calls her a fool and tells her taht he has risked his life to save hers and still she is is not happy.
Sameera and Abhi stop taht night in the jungle and Abhi appiles some herbs to help cure her of teh pain....

Will cont soon...
PRECAP: Abhi and Sam 😳

Aranya
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Posted: 17 years ago
PART 25:
Sameera and abhi are now in the jungle....they have no food nor water and are all alone...stranded....nothing and noone to help them.....
Sameera is still hurt but the pain is okay to handle...Abhi is trying to see if they can somehow go back to the satrt of the jungle so taht atlest they wont be lost.
Sameera and Abhi are sitting under the shade....when , suddenly from behind,a man comes and catches Sameera by her throat and pulls her.
Sameera screams and then she is covered on her mouth.....Abhi turns around to see her being dragged away. Abhi runs behind the person and then is able to do nothing because he points the gun at him. Abhi stops and raises his hand and asks the man who he is....he says that he works for Shaheen and that she has sent him to get Sameera. Abhi is unable to do anything.....he has no gun with him.

Sameera realises that Abhi has nothing with him and then reaches into her pocket and throws the gun at Abhi....Abhi notices the gun, catches it and then points it back at teh man....the man relises Sameera and then both Abhi and the man fight...finally, Abhi wins but he is hurt at three places. Abhi then walks up to teh man and asks him how to proceed in the jungle...the man slowly tells him before he dies.

Abhi then walks back to the shade and sits down...Sameera walks up to the point and sits with him...and then she tears a bit of her coat and then wipes the blood of Abhi's shoulder and covers the wounds with the cloth. Abhi gazes at her as she does it....he starts feeling different..as if he is seeing someone else.....he realises for teh first time how beautiful she is and then when he sees her leg....he is shocked....it is bleeding again and the cloth covering is completely blood-stained.
Sameera moves to the other side to take care of teh other wound, when she winces with pain as she is moving...her leg is hurt again when that amn pulled her...

Abhi then carries her...Sameera protets saying she can manage...but Abhi refuses and then he walks along teh way the man had said...and they finally reach the end by night fall.
That night, Sameera has a dream....she has never felt like this before....she dreams of Abhi and her...about how handsome he is and how extremely caring he is...her dream goes on and on.....
The next morning, Sameera gets up happy and fresh...and when she sees Abhi next to her, sleeping....his face the same way as in her dream, she realises her feelings for the first time....she is in love with him.....she Sameera is in love with a person she hardly knows.....Sameera is in love with a man .....thats seems impossible to her as she has never fallen in love....... 😳

Will cont soon..........
PRECAP: Back at Base and abhi's feelings

Aranya
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Posted: 17 years ago
Its an amazing Fanfic, well written and an excellent portray of emotions!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks guys....will cont soon....mostly only next week though! 😃
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PART 26:
Sameera and Abhi slowly walk back to the base...on reaching the base, all the hawks come out to meet them and all of them hug each other.
Veer comes out and is very happy to see both of them there...esp Sameera.....He decides to give a party in their safety....

The next evening, all teh hawks assemble at teh party hall, waiting for Veer.....when, Shikha an Sunaina make their entry....Shikha walks directly up to Abhi and loops her hand in his and asks him to dance with her....Abhi tries to say no but Shikha wopuldnt haer of it...she pulls him and they go to dance.
Sameera looks at Abhi and Shikha together and feels a little sad...she loves a guy who is already somebody else's....that too of her own sister.

Then Tanvi, Farhan, Isha, Samrat go to dance...Sameera is left all alone...when Sunaina walks up to her and starts insulting her downright.....she talks badly about her sisters and their downtrodden daughter and son....who are sameera and Jugal...she even talks rudely to her and tells her that Sameera has nobody on this earth except her father...who is Shikha's and bot hers.
Sameera takes the insult strongly.....but after hearing everything, she loses her control and taers start all of their own falling.....Sameera cries shamelessly....Sunaiana sees her taers and laughs at her,......just then , Veer walks in...he sees Sameera crying and Sunaiana smiling. He gets angry...he walks towards both of them, when Sunaina walks awa\y from there to talk to her friend.

Veer walks up to Sameera and consoles her and tells her that he is always there for her and that he loves her a lot and taht she has made him really proud.....Sameera wipes her tears and smiles at him and then she is overcome so much by emotions that she hugs him and cries again on his shoulder.
Veer is unhappy that he has been able to do nothing for this daughter of his...he lets her cry and then after all her bucket of crying is done, he asks her to dance with him...Sameera smiles at him and they dance.

Abhi is fed up dancing with Shikha, he asks to be left alone for a while....Shikha agrees and goes to her mom...when Abhi sees Sameera and Veer sir dancing...he smiles to himself...She looks so pretty tonight.
Veer sir sees Abhi and calls him,..Abhi goes there and then Veer puts Sameera's hand in his and asks them to dance.
Sameera is blushing and doesnt look up into his eyes even once...while Abhi is gazing at her and is amzed bu her beauty.

Will cont soon.....
Aranya
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow its too good aranya continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks guys...possible to update only next week.....so pl bare with me! 😛
thanks
Aru

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