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Hi everyone,
This is pilot episode update of my much talked new ff with major twists and major drama.Please read and if your are interested to read it fully then follow the link below!I have worked hard on this ff so please read it once then decide!:-)Criticism and appreciattion is welcomed!
ff:MazHab-Allah is The Greatest!
Disclaimer: Any Resemblance of any kind to any Serial,Movie,Os,Ff,SS etc is Purely co-incidental.
This ff is on a very sensitive issue and both criticism and appreciation both are welcomed but in limit of manners.
This ff is not meant to hurt anyones feelings and if this hurts anyone's feelings then I am sorry from bottom of my heart.Islamic content used is this ff is being used after lots of research and is 100% authentic.
Episode 1 { MahaBeginning }
( Khan Family is Introduced!,Tabrez to become MPA?,Rukhsar is expecting Twins?,Will she deliver both boys?,Shah Zamaan meets with an accident! And Much More...! )
Episode opens up with a view of a very big Haveli (Palace type of House.),Inside it there is a woman sitting watching Tv and another Woman is sitting with her picking pebbles from rice plate.A little boy comes running and says,"Daadi Ami A faqeer (Begger) is outside and he says that he wants Khair (Money) from Rukhsana bibi,I have told him that no Rukhsana lives here but he is not listening!".
The old lady smiles and removing her glasses says,"Beta I am Rukhsana!". The boy is astonished and says,"Really Daadi Ami your name is Rukhsana?".
The lady nods in positive and she then calls out to woman who is watching tv saying,"Baano beta go and give Khair(Money) to Faqeer Baba (Begger!)".
Baano says,"Amaa please give me few minutes ,I am watching soap and today they are going to reveal who is Frightening Gopi Vahu as a ghost!You please tell anyone else I can't leave!".
"Beta Allah says the one who comes to your doorstep for help is sent by Me so don't make him wait!Please go and give Money to Fakeer!".
Then Maryam (Maid) enters and says,"Baano BibiJi I think they are just fooling us and Rashi is the one who is scaring Gopi vahu because she doesn't want Gopi's Husband Ahem to unite with her!".
Baano says,"Ok na Let me watch!you go and give this Khair to Faqeer Baba.!".
Maryam leaves with Money and Comes back with Money and says that Faqeer Baba left before she went to give him money!Rukhsana becomes sad on listening to this and says,"Look what happened because of your this stupid drama,Faqeer Baba left empty handed from my doorstep!".
Baano makes face and says,"Don't worry Amaa nothing happens!,and why are you cleaning these rice there are innumerable servants in this Haveli they will do it!".
Rukhsana doesn't answer.Rukhsar comes and Rukhsana says,"Come Rukhsar sit carefully!".Maryam(Maid) comes and happily says,"Bibiji Rukhsar bibiji's eighth month has started na?."
Rukhsana smiles and nods in positive.Rukhsana asks,"Rukhsar beta where are Alizay and Saba?".Rukhsar answers that they both are playing with toys. Maryam says,"Those our neighbours were talking things that how Alizay and Saba are not of two years fullu and Rukhsar bibi is again on verge of Delivering other child!".Rukhsana tells her to go and work and she asks About Gul khan and Tabrez Khan from Baano and Rukhsar!Rukhsar says,"Amaa they have gone for a Daawat (Feast) and tonight they will come late!".
At Farm House:
Gul khan and Tabrez and other guests are sitting and watching dance of Nautch girls who arendancing on Munni Badnaam Hui.Tabrez touches his sexual organ in seductive way and says,"Pink!" And winks at Gul Khan.Gul khan signals to a servant and Dancer wearing Pink dress is taken in a bedroom ,Tabrez also heads towards that bedroom behind that girl and locks the door.Gul khan thinks,"Bhai will enjoy this feast a lot!" And smirks.
Gul Khan takes a sip of whisky and holds wrist of another girl and tells her to come with him and the girl agrees happily and they also head towards a room!
Next Day:
Gul Khan and Tabrez Khan are sitting in Otaaq (Otaaq is a Bungalow in which men's affairs are dealt and women are not allowed there!)
Gul Khan says,"Bhai you failed in elections that was a miserable defeat!".
Tabrez turns sad and says ,"Yes Gul I took part in elections for seat of MPA (Member of Provincial Assembly) and I thought that out of my 5000 acre land only 4000 acre is cultivated and other 1000 acres left because of shortage of irrigation water so I thought once I become MPA this problem will be solved but I failed in elections and that Akbar Qureshi won this seat!".
Gul khan says,"No problem , maybenext time!".Tabrez thinks,"Not next time this time only!".A servant comes and says,"Chote Saeein(Junior Lord,Tabrez was called Chote Saaein and Gul Bade Saaein as Gul is elder brother of Tbrez!) Munawer has come to meet you and he is crying outside!Tabrez tells them to send him in and he says,"He forgot that he is just a peasant the way he went to that Akbar and Tried to degrade me by saying lots of negative things about me!".
Munawer enters and he removes his cap and puts it on feet of Tabrez and cries for forgiveness and asks Tabrez to return his land otherwise his Family will die of hunger but Tabrez kicks him out!
At Haveli:
Rukhsana is feeding apples to Rukhsar and says,"Beta Daai Ama is coming today to see you so get ready!".
Baano says,"Whats the use what will Daai ama do if she (Rukhsar) is carrying daughter?".Rukhsana says,"Talk good if you don't look good!".Baano makes face and Rukhsar smiles and agrees to get ready to meet Daai Ama.Baano says,"I know Daai Ama has knowledge and she will tell everything that Rukhsar is carrying girl and again drama will happen in our Haveli like it happened on birth of Saba and Alizay!".
Rukhsar gets tensed and Rukhsana shuts Baano saying,"Allah will bless my Tabrez with heir! And what have you done just by giving son to Gul khan?".Baano says that she has given birth to a son and her Shah Zamaan is only the Heir to the family!
Daai Ama enters and greets everyone.Daai Ama checks Rukhsar and happily announces to everyone that once again Rukhsar is carrying Twins.Rukhsana thanks Allah for double happiness! Baano asks Daai Ama if Rukhsar is carrying sons? And Daai Ama says she doesn't know gender and in fact no one can tell gender but She is getting vibes that this time they are boys!Baano feels in secured and Rukhsar smiles in happiness!
Want to read further full update? Follow the link below:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3652741&TPN=2�
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This is pilot episode update of my much talked new ff with major twists and major drama.Please read and if your are interested to read it fully then follow the link below!I have worked hard on this ff so please read it once then decide!:-)Criticism and appreciattion is welcomed!
ff:MazHab-Allah is The Greatest!
Disclaimer: Any Resemblance of any kind to any Serial,Movie,Os,Ff,SS etc is Purely co-incidental.
This ff is on a very sensitive issue and both criticism and appreciation both are welcomed but in limit of manners.
This ff is not meant to hurt anyones feelings and if this hurts anyone's feelings then I am sorry from bottom of my heart.Islamic content used is this ff is being used after lots of research and is 100% authentic.
Episode 1 { MahaBeginning }
( Khan Family is Introduced!,Tabrez to become MPA?,Rukhsar is expecting Twins?,Will she deliver both boys?,Shah Zamaan meets with an accident! And Much More...! )
Episode opens up with a view of a very big Haveli (Palace type of House.),Inside it there is a woman sitting watching Tv and another Woman is sitting with her picking pebbles from rice plate.A little boy comes running and says,"Daadi Ami A faqeer (Begger) is outside and he says that he wants Khair (Money) from Rukhsana bibi,I have told him that no Rukhsana lives here but he is not listening!".
The old lady smiles and removing her glasses says,"Beta I am Rukhsana!". The boy is astonished and says,"Really Daadi Ami your name is Rukhsana?".
The lady nods in positive and she then calls out to woman who is watching tv saying,"Baano beta go and give Khair(Money) to Faqeer Baba (Begger!)".
Baano says,"Amaa please give me few minutes ,I am watching soap and today they are going to reveal who is Frightening Gopi Vahu as a ghost!You please tell anyone else I can't leave!".
"Beta Allah says the one who comes to your doorstep for help is sent by Me so don't make him wait!Please go and give Money to Fakeer!".
Then Maryam (Maid) enters and says,"Baano BibiJi I think they are just fooling us and Rashi is the one who is scaring Gopi vahu because she doesn't want Gopi's Husband Ahem to unite with her!".
Baano says,"Ok na Let me watch!you go and give this Khair to Faqeer Baba.!".
Maryam leaves with Money and Comes back with Money and says that Faqeer Baba left before she went to give him money!Rukhsana becomes sad on listening to this and says,"Look what happened because of your this stupid drama,Faqeer Baba left empty handed from my doorstep!".
Baano makes face and says,"Don't worry Amaa nothing happens!,and why are you cleaning these rice there are innumerable servants in this Haveli they will do it!".
Rukhsana doesn't answer.Rukhsar comes and Rukhsana says,"Come Rukhsar sit carefully!".Maryam(Maid) comes and happily says,"Bibiji Rukhsar bibiji's eighth month has started na?."
Rukhsana smiles and nods in positive.Rukhsana asks,"Rukhsar beta where are Alizay and Saba?".Rukhsar answers that they both are playing with toys. Maryam says,"Those our neighbours were talking things that how Alizay and Saba are not of two years fullu and Rukhsar bibi is again on verge of Delivering other child!".Rukhsana tells her to go and work and she asks About Gul khan and Tabrez Khan from Baano and Rukhsar!Rukhsar says,"Amaa they have gone for a Daawat (Feast) and tonight they will come late!".
At Farm House:
Gul khan and Tabrez and other guests are sitting and watching dance of Nautch girls who arendancing on Munni Badnaam Hui.Tabrez touches his sexual organ in seductive way and says,"Pink!" And winks at Gul Khan.Gul khan signals to a servant and Dancer wearing Pink dress is taken in a bedroom ,Tabrez also heads towards that bedroom behind that girl and locks the door.Gul khan thinks,"Bhai will enjoy this feast a lot!" And smirks.
Gul Khan takes a sip of whisky and holds wrist of another girl and tells her to come with him and the girl agrees happily and they also head towards a room!
Next Day:
Gul Khan and Tabrez Khan are sitting in Otaaq (Otaaq is a Bungalow in which men's affairs are dealt and women are not allowed there!)
Gul Khan says,"Bhai you failed in elections that was a miserable defeat!".
Tabrez turns sad and says ,"Yes Gul I took part in elections for seat of MPA (Member of Provincial Assembly) and I thought that out of my 5000 acre land only 4000 acre is cultivated and other 1000 acres left because of shortage of irrigation water so I thought once I become MPA this problem will be solved but I failed in elections and that Akbar Qureshi won this seat!".
Gul khan says,"No problem , maybenext time!".Tabrez thinks,"Not next time this time only!".A servant comes and says,"Chote Saeein(Junior Lord,Tabrez was called Chote Saaein and Gul Bade Saaein as Gul is elder brother of Tbrez!) Munawer has come to meet you and he is crying outside!Tabrez tells them to send him in and he says,"He forgot that he is just a peasant the way he went to that Akbar and Tried to degrade me by saying lots of negative things about me!".
Munawer enters and he removes his cap and puts it on feet of Tabrez and cries for forgiveness and asks Tabrez to return his land otherwise his Family will die of hunger but Tabrez kicks him out!
At Haveli:
Rukhsana is feeding apples to Rukhsar and says,"Beta Daai Ama is coming today to see you so get ready!".
Baano says,"Whats the use what will Daai ama do if she (Rukhsar) is carrying daughter?".Rukhsana says,"Talk good if you don't look good!".Baano makes face and Rukhsar smiles and agrees to get ready to meet Daai Ama.Baano says,"I know Daai Ama has knowledge and she will tell everything that Rukhsar is carrying girl and again drama will happen in our Haveli like it happened on birth of Saba and Alizay!".
Rukhsar gets tensed and Rukhsana shuts Baano saying,"Allah will bless my Tabrez with heir! And what have you done just by giving son to Gul khan?".Baano says that she has given birth to a son and her Shah Zamaan is only the Heir to the family!
Daai Ama enters and greets everyone.Daai Ama checks Rukhsar and happily announces to everyone that once again Rukhsar is carrying Twins.Rukhsana thanks Allah for double happiness! Baano asks Daai Ama if Rukhsar is carrying sons? And Daai Ama says she doesn't know gender and in fact no one can tell gender but She is getting vibes that this time they are boys!Baano feels in secured and Rukhsar smiles in happiness!
Want to read further full update? Follow the link below:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3652741&TPN=2�
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