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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Shivam can you pm me the link of second part of ff...totla lakshman wala...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: shivam030291


I'll try to do it by tomorrow afternoon

thank u Shivam🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Here it is Ranjana


Book : The scion of Ikshvaku


Scene 1 ( My Brother , Together Always : As Kids )



It was a day after the winter solstice and the princes were in Ayodhya on their halfyearly
holiday. It had been three years since they first left for the gurukul. Uttaraayan,
the northward movement of the sun across the horizon, had begun. Six months later, in
peak summer, Lord Surya would reverse his direction and Dakshinaayan, the southward
movement of the sun, would begin.
Ram spent most of his time, even on holiday, with Guru Vashishta, who had moved
back to the palace with the boys; Kaushalya could not do much besides complain.
Bharat, on the other hand, was strictly confined to Kaikeyi's chambers, subjected to
incessant tutoring and interrogation by his forceful mother. Lakshman had already started
riding small ponies, and he loved it. Shatrughan ... just read books!
Lakshman was rushing to his mother Sumitra after one such riding lesson when he
stopped short, hearing voices outside her chamber. He peeped in from behind the
curtains.
You must understand, Shatrughan, that your brother Bharat may make fun of you, but he
loves you the most. You should always stay by his side.'
Shatrughan was holding a palm-leaf booklet in his hand, desperately trying to read as
he pretended to pay attention to his mother.
Are you listening to me, Shatrughan?' asked Sumitra, sharply.
Yes Mother,' Shatrughan said, looking up, sincerity dripping from his voice.
I don't think so.'
Shatrughan repeated his mother's last sentence. His diction was remarkably clear and
crisp for his age. Sumitra knew that her son hadn't been paying attention, and yet she
couldn't do anything about the fact that he'd not been genuinely listening to her at all!
Lakshman smiled as he ran up to his mother, yelping with delight as he leapt onto her
lap.
I will lithen to you, Maa!' he said with his childish lisp.
Sumitra smiled as she wrapped her arms around Lakshman. Yes, I know you will
always listen to me. You are my good son!'
Shatrughan glanced briefly at his mother before going back to his palm-leaf booklet.
I will do whatever you tell me to do,' said Lakshman, his earnest eyes filled with
love. Alwayth.'
Then listen to me,' said Sumitra, leaning in with a clownish, conspiratorial
expression, the kind she knew Lakshman loved. Your elder brother Ram needs you.' Her
expression changed to compassionate wistfulness as she continued. He is a simple and
innocent soul. He needs someone who can be his eyes and ears. No one really likes him.'
She focused on Lakshman once again and murmured, You have to protect him from
harm. People always say mean things about him behind his back, but he sees the best in
them. He has too many enemies. His life may depend on you...'
Really?' asked Lakshman, his eyes widening with barely-understood dread.
Yes! And believe me, I can only count on you to protect him. Ram has a good heart,
but he's too trusting of others.'
Don't worry, Maa,' said Lakshman, stiffening his back and pursing his lips, his eyes
gleaming like a soldier honoured with a most important undertaking. I will alwayth take
care of Ram Dada.'
Sumitra hugged Lakshman again and smiled fondly. I know you will.'



Dada!' shouted Lakshman, banging his little heels against the pony's sides, willing it to
run faster. But the pony, specially trained for children, refused to oblige.
Nine-year-old Ram rode ahead of Lakshman on a taller, faster pony. True to his
training, he rose gracefully in his saddle at every alternate step of the canter, in perfect
unison with the animal. On this vacant afternoon, they'd decided to practise by
themselves the art of horsemanship, at the royal Ayodhya riding grounds.
Dada! Thop!' screamed Lakshman desperately, having abandoned by now any
pretence at following vaguely-learnt instructions. He kicked and whipped his pony to the
best of his ability.
Ram looked back at the enthusiastic Lakshman and smiled as he cautioned his little
brother, Lakshman, slow down. Ride properly.'
Thop!' yelled Lakshman.
Ram immediately understood Lakshman's frantic cry and pulled his reins as Lakshman
caught up and dismounted rapidly. Dada, get off!'
What?'
Get off!' shouted an agitated Lakshman as he grabbed Ram's hand, trying to drag him
down.
Ram frowned as he got off the horse. What is it, Lakshman?'
Look!' Lakshman exclaimed, as he pointed at the billet strap that went through the
buckle on the girth strap; the girth, in turn, kept the saddle in place. The buckle had
almost come undone.
By the great Lord Rudra!' whispered Ram. Had the buckle released while he was riding, he would have been thrown off the dislodged saddle, resulting in serious injury.
Lakshman had saved him from a terrible accident.
Lakshman looked around furtively, his mother's words echoing in his brain.
Thomeone tried to kill you, Dada.'
Ram carefully examined the girth strap and the attached buckle. It simply looked worn
out; there were no signs of tampering. Lakshman had certainly saved him from an injury,
though, and possibly even death.
Ram embraced Lakshman gently. Thank you, my brother.'
Don't worry about any conthpirathieth,' said Lakshman, wearing a solemn
expression. He was now certain about his mother's warnings. I will protect you, Dada.
Alwayth.'
Ram tried hard to prevent himself from smiling. Conspiracies, huh? Who taught you
such a big word?'
Thatrughan,' said Lakshman, looking around again, scanning the area for threats.
Shatrughan, hmm?'
Yeth. Don't worry, Dada. Lakhthman will protect you.'
Ram kissed his brother's forehead and reassured his little protector. I feel safe
already.'

The brothers were all set to go back to the gurukul two days after the horse saddle
incident. Ram visited the royal stable the night before their departure to groom his horse;
both of them had a long day ahead. There were stable hands, of course, but Ram enjoyed
this work; it soothed him. The animals were among the handful in Ayodhya who did not
judge him. He liked to spend time with them occasionally. He looked back at the sound
of the clip-clop of hooves.
Lakshman!' cried Ram in alarm, as little Lakshman trooped in atop his pony,
obviously injured. Ram rushed forward and helped him dismount. Lakshman's chin had
split open, deep enough to urgently need stitches. His face was covered with blood, but
with typical bravado, he did not flinch at all when Ram examined his wound.
You are not supposed to go horseback riding in the night, you know that, don't you?'
Ram admonished him gently.
Lakshman shrugged. Thorry... The horthe thuddenly...'
Don't talk,' interrupted Ram, as the blood flow increased. Come with me.'

Ram hastily sped towards Nilanjana's chambers along with his injured brother. En route,
they were accosted by Sumitra and her maids who had been frantically searching for her
missing son.
What happened?' shouted Sumitra, as her eyes fell upon the profusely bleeding
Lakshman.
Lakshman stood stoic and tight-lipped. He knew he was in for trouble as his dada
never lied; there was no scope for creative storytelling. He would have to confess, and
then come up with strategies to escape the inevitable punishment.

It's nothing serious, Chhoti Maa,' said Ram to his younger stepmother, Sumitra. But
we should get him to Nilanjanaji immediately.'
What happened?' Sumitra persisted.
Ram instinctively felt compelled to protect Lakshman from his mother's wrath. After
all, Lakshman had saved his life just the other day. He did what his conscience
demanded at the time; shift the blame on himself. Chhoti Maa, it's my fault. I'd gone to
the stable with Lakshman to groom my horse. It's a little high-spirited and suddenly
reared and kicked Lakshman. I should have ensured that Lakshman stood behind me.'
Sumitra immediately stepped aside. Quickly, take him to Nilanjana.'
She knows Ram Dada never lies, Lakshman thought, filled with guilt.
Ram and Lakshman rushed off, as a maid attempted to follow them. Sumitra raised her
hand to stop her as she watched the boys moving down the corridor. Ram held his
brother's hand firmly. She smiled with satisfaction.
Lakshman brought Ram's hand to his heart, and whispered, Together alwayth, Dada.
Alwayth.'
Don't talk, Lakshman. The blood will...'

Edited by shivam030291 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arre pagli :P Kya request hai?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: _Eternity_



Unfair with him from very beginning...rights then learning each and everything..I always treat him best among all and even above arjun...

Of course...Arjun's the one who was born with a golden spoon stuffed in his mouth. He was an able warrior...but his greatest strength was having Sri Krishna as an ally. That is only why they managed to win Kurukshetra.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shivam adult one you were saying na you have update that also...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: TwinMadness

Arre pagli :P Kya request hai?


I want a romantic LakshMila...after their reunion...plzzz really romantic...😉 disclaimer wala😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riya_16


Of course...Arjun's the one who was born with a golden spoon stuffed in his mouth. He was an able warrior...but his greatest strength was having Sri Krishna as an ally. That is only why they managed to win Kurukshetra.



Even taking his kavaj and kundal and he gave knowingly...

Let's not talk about it else I will say others bad and cheaters.. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riya_16


I want a romantic LakshMila...after their reunion...plzzz really romantic...😉 disclaimer wala😆😆

Let me see what I can do about that 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Riya_16



I want a romantic LakshMila...after their reunion...plzzz really romantic...😉disclaimer wala😆😆



Oh disclaimer wala..treata yug disclaimer dena riya ko tha... 😆

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