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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cherrybloom1


But there are 5 chapters left for that to get over! 😭😭 But okay, you're the writer. We will go according to how you want it!

Which reminds me, I am due on comments for this story as well as WAYMR. I will do both tonight.

I'm kind of done with my syllabus. Just a few poems that I have never done in the whole year needs to be done now as well as revision of all the formats. So I hope to get that out of my way in another 2 hours or so and then shift to doing papers! I'm having small panic attacks in my head now because everyone is studying so much while I'm just sitting here and doing nothing! I just hope this doesn't cost me during the exam!



I know how exams feel! But the key is to not get stressed and do whatever you can thoroughly.

Don't worry about the comments. They can wait! I don't care too much about the comments. As long as you read it and like it and come back for more, I'm ok with it. I know I have a lot of silent readers judging by the views, but I'm ok with it. So don't worry if you miss commenting on a few updates. Your boards are more important.

Now go study!

I love poems!! Have you read my poem 'Rhapsody'? That's my favorite work to date. I'll post it here and hope that no one minds me doing it. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago



Graceful motion, synchronized movements,
The dance of love, the physical form of sentiments
Like a rose, I bloomed, turned red for you
I lose my petals with your touch now, on cue
Unfolding the ecstasy, exploring the abyss
every time your eyes close, my existence seems amiss
my fear and mane I tossed in the winds of paradise
life drips against time, I am immortal, a sculpture of ice
when the sun comes burning, toss me, twirl me, hold me
above you, in the clouds, in the blue, wrapped in Rhapsody.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: limoncello



I know how exams feel! But the key is to not get stressed and do whatever you can thoroughly.

Don't worry about the comments. They can wait! I don't care too much about the comments. As long as you read it and like it and come back for more, I'm ok with it. I know I have a lot of silent readers judging by the views, but I'm ok with it. So don't worry if you miss commenting on a few updates. Your boards are more important.

Now go study!

I love poems!! Have you read my poem 'Rhapsody'? That's my favorite work to date. I'll post it here and hope that no one minds me doing it. 😳


You know I'm not too concerned about exams otherwise but this is like THE thing. All year I've been telling myself that its okay whatever marks I get because I just need to get through boards without mistakes. And I'm kind of in that position right now where there is no room for mistakes if I want to get a 95% average. And that is kind of getting me jittery. Like, even one mistake can cost me. All through I've been telling myself I have lots of time and now I don't have any time so its super overwhelming.

No I haven't read that poem. I'm not too big a fan of poems. I like a few selected one. My favourite has to be "Fire and Ice" by Robert Frost. I read it for the first time in Eclipse (Twilight Saga) and I have never been able to get it out of my head since. I actually have it learnt up because I love it so much (which in itself if a miracle because learning poems is something I have always had an issue with)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: limoncello




Graceful motion, synchronized movements,
The dance of love, the physical form of sentiments
Like a rose, I bloomed, turned red for you
I lose my petals with your touch now, on cue
Unfolding the ecstasy, exploring the abyss
every time your eyes close, my existence seems amiss
my fear and mane I tossed in the winds of paradise
life drips against time, I am immortal, a sculpture of ice
when the sun comes burning, toss me, twirl me, hold me
above you, in the clouds, in the blue, wrapped in Rhapsody.


That is so beautiful! My god, that is amazing. Woah! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Haha! Thanks! I suck at writing poems. I wrote this for the Diwali Contest. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: limoncello

Haha! Thanks! I suck at writing poems. I wrote this for the Diwali Contest. 😳


You wrote that? 😲😲
Oh my god, I was wondering who wrote it. I thought it was like a professional poet or something!

WHAT THE... That is beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EtRIz7VocNs[/YOUTUBE]
You guys should listen to this! A friend of mine made me listen to this and it's good. It's super soothing. I absolutely love listening to him when I feel really restless. It makes me feel so much better from the inside!
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Posted: 9 years ago
I love it Ani!

Have you heard Damien Rice? He's my go-to singer when I'm sad or I just need something soothing. Just his voice makes me feel calm!

Blower's Daughter is his most famous song. It was featured in the movie 'Closer'. What a weird movie that was!!

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5YXVMCHG-Nk[/YOUTUBE]
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Posted: 9 years ago
I have read Fire & Ice. It is powerful? I can't seem to find words that would be more appropriate. Among the few poets who don't bore me to tears or drive me crazy with incomprehensible lines, Robert Frost is in the top few. His Stopping By Woods on A Snowy Evening is just as amazing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sin, that poem is so well written. No, you don't suck at poetry writing. At all.

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