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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Incase of emergancy

The story begins with Rudra and Paro as children. Paro's parents are murdered in a bus by Tejawat's people who were wearing BSD uniforms. Thus, Paro has a misconception that BSD officers are cruel and she hates them. On the other hand, Rudra's mother has left him and his father for another man.

Years later, the story is set in Birpur, a small village ruled by Thakur Param Singh Tejawat. The latter engages in illegal trade of arms. Taking advantage of the gullibility of villagers, he instigates them against the BSD and makes them believe that he is their sole well wisher. Consequently, everyone in Birpur mistrusts BSD and believe only in Tejawat, allowing him to carry on with his trade. Rudra (now Major) is sent to investigate on the illegal trade in Birpur. Every year in Birpur a girl is selected and get married within a week to a groom who comes across the border and this year its Paro. This fake marriage is organised by Tejawat so that he can transport weapons safely. The fake baarat brings parts of weapons with them to assemble at Thakur's mansion and take back money (which is hidden in the bride's trunk). Once the marriage has taken place and the barat reaches the other side safely, the bride is either killed or sold. However, Paro is unaware of this.

Rudra learns about this and manages to stop them before they reach the border after the wedding. A fight ensues between BSD officers and the smugglers and Rudra kills Paro's husband while trying to save Paro. Paro mistake his act for cruelty and hates him as he killed her husband. Meanwhile, scared for his safety, Tejawat tries to find Paro and kill her but Rudra protects her as she is his sole witness. However, he hates her as he considers her to be guilty.

Paro realizes Tejawat is bad. She tries to win Rudra's heart.But her attempts to win him over are misused by Rudra's cousin ,who publishes in a local news paper that Paro is being mistreated by Rudra.This leads to Rudra's suspension from BSD till his name is cleared.Drunk and enraged at his job being jeopardised because of her,Rudra ends up forcefully marrying Paro. But they grow closer as Paro helps him get his job back.

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#362

This is why I really shouldn't write things that involve word limits...

After much head-banging, delaying and yelling at the serial for the last few days, here is my attempt at a Story So Far. I know it shatters the word limit to a billion pieces but trust me when I say I had a much longer version

This is the without dialogue section. I'm hoping once all the dialogues (Hridey & Sunara) are in then I can hopefully trim it...😕

And also sorry again for the lateness. I'm usually on time for things but I had an unexpected family matter come up. Time difference is a slight killer too. It's almost 2am over here...🤢

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STORY SO FAR (WITHOUT 100 DIALOGUES)

The harsh desert sands of Rajasthan plays host to this passionate tale of two destined soulmates, bound together and yet torn apart in the hues of love and hate.

Parvati and Rudra.

Reth mein shuru hue ek prem ki dastaan; lekin iss dastaan mein kya pyaar payenge ya rakht behega?

A childhood encounter

She, a beloved daughter whose parents were murdered by BSD forces and He, a once happy boy now tormented by his mother's unexplained abandonment. They meet as children at a bus stop where a caring Paro attempts to comfort an upset by parting with her treasured doll, a memento of parents who are no more. For Rudra, guarded against the taunts and tortures of the world, the comfort given by this slight girl is unexpected but deeply appreciated. They meet and then part again but what was a chance encounter between two young souls scarred by their lost childhood was simply the beginning of a destined love story.

An officer and a bride

Time marches on and those two children have now grown into adults who while living in the present are still haunted by the ghosts of the past.

The girl who once lost her world has found built another in Birpur. Raised in the loving care of her Mamisa and under the adoring watch of the village Thakurain, Paro has blossomed into a woman of beauty and grace. She dreams of a happy future whilst carrying cherished memories of the past. The only darkness present in sun-filled life is that of the danger posed by the BSD. They were the ones blamed for her parents' deaths and that of many others. All of Birpur fear the BSD; a fear that has been nurtured and harvested by the Birpur's Thakur for his own sinister purposes. Annually, he arranges for a grand wedding where a daughter of Birpur is married to a groom from across the border. But in reality it is a disguise for his gun smuggling operations; gun parts arrives with the groom's party and cash payments depart with the bridal procession. This year it is Parvati who is the bride, destined for a cruel future once across the border.

As fate would have it, Rudra has also arrived in Birpur as a ruthless and relentless major in the BSD. Returning to Birpur has brought back tortured memories of a childhood abandoned, of a child betrayed and an innocence lost. The wounds cast so many years ago are as yet unhealed and Rudra will not let them heal, forever burning himself and those around him. His father's words still echo with him; a woman of beauty belongs to no one. And so when he rescues a beautiful Paro from thugs on the eve of her wedding, he reminds himself of this truth when he lets her go.

A border clash

As the wedding draws closer, the BSD realize the truth behind these cross-border weddings and under Rudra's leadership they begin laying out a trap to catch the Thakur and his minions. But the Thakur is no less alert and rushes the wedding rituals of Paro to Varun, her future husband who has managed to win her heart with his sincerity. They are farewelled with great pomp from Birpur but are unexpectedly greeted at the border crossing by Rudra and the BSD forces. A gun battle breaks out and bloodshed ensues. To Paro's horror she witnesses Rudra kill Varun, unaware that it was done to protect her from her deceitful husband who in reality was involved with the smuggling operations. As the lone survivor of the bridal party, Paro is taken into protective custody by Rudra.

Hostilities and hostages

Within the space of a few hours, Paro goes from bride to widow and she lays the blame for all of this on Rudra. Her fears of the BSD are realized and she refuses to cooperate with Rudra or believe his claims that it is the Thakur who is the real culprit. Desperate to protect Paro after attempts on her life and bring justice to the Thakur and his fallen comrades, Rudra resorts to taking her as his personal hostage. To do so he steps into a world that he distanced himself from over a decade ago; the Ranawat Haveli where is his extended family currently lives.

It is within the confines of the haveli's walls that these two engage in a battle of the wills; his aim to break her defiance and hers to remain steadfast against him. But there are other forces at play as well on the battlefield and it is through the machinations of Mohini, Rudra's Kakisa, that the two are cornered into undergoing wedding preparations. Neither wish to wed and they know it so instead they determine that this will be the final battle for supremacy; pushing each other to the limits to determine who will break first.

Revelations of truths and destinies

The wedding day arrives and with it brings unexpected revelations for Paro and Rudra. Parvati's faith in the Thakur is shattered when he divulges the truth of her wedding to Varun and then attempts to kill her. But a feisty Paro escapes and returns to Rudra, ready to cooperate and desperate to seek forgiveness for her disbelief in him. Yet it is too late, for in her bid for freedom she has betrayed Rudra's belief in her innocence. A belief that is further shaken when Paro is accused by his family members for attempting to burn his father to death.

Despite the accusations levelled at her, Paro remains staunch in her quest for Rudra's forgiveness and the nursing of his father to full health. After many upheavals, the truth begins to unfold that Paro is truly innocent and genuine in her guilt. But a bigger truth is revealed to Paro when she discovers that Rudra is in fact the boy she met so many years ago.

An innocent but costly mistake

Taking this as sign of their joined destinies, she attempts to win Rudra's jaded heart. But his angst runs too deep within him to accept Paro's overtures and he repeatedly spurns her attempts. Alas his conniving cousin manages to use one such attempt to portray Rudra and his beloved BSD in a disreputable manner. This escalates even further leading to Rudra's suspension and in a state of drunken rage he attempts to take his revenge from the person he believes to be the root of all his problems; Paro.

He fulfils her wish for them to be joined in matrimony but promises her that this marriage will be one of pain and tears for her. A deserving punishment for ignoring his wishes and forcing her way into his life.

Growing closeness

Their vows of marriage were filled with hateful words and vengeful promises but as the days go by Paro and Rudra are drawn closer and closer. After all, how long can one fight one's destiny? But fate can be cruel as well and Kakisa's ploys are almost successful in snatching away Rudra's life. That is until, Parvati promises to her Bholenath that she will forsake the most beloved thing in her life, her Rudra, if his life is saved and he fully recovers. Her prayers are answered and her husband saved. But at what cost?

Edited by Payali09 - 11 years ago

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: Payali09
This is why I really shouldn't write things that involve word limits...

After much head-banging, delaying and yelling at the serial for the last few days, here is my attempt at a Story So Far. I know it shatters the word limit to a billion pieces but trust me when I say I had a much longer version

This is the without dialogue section. I'm hoping once all the dialogues (Hridey & Sunara) are in then I can hopefully trim it...😕

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STORY SO FAR (WITHOUT 100 DIALOGUES)

The harsh desert sands of Rajasthan plays host to this passionate tale of two destined soulmates, bound together and yet torn apart in the hues of love and hate.

Parvati and Rudra.

Reth mein shuru hue ek prem ki dastaan; lekin iss dastaan mein kya pyaar payenge ya rakht behega?

A childhood encounter

She, a beloved daughter whose parents were murdered by BSD forces and He, a once happy boy now tormented by his mother's unexplained abandonment. They meet as children at a bus stop where a caring Paro attempts to comfort an upset by parting with her treasured doll, a memento of parents who are no more. For Rudra, guarded against the taunts and tortures of the world, the comfort given by this slight girl is unexpected but deeply appreciated. They meet and then part again but what was a chance encounter between two young souls scarred by their lost childhood was simply the beginning of a destined love story.

An officer and a bride

Time marches on and those two children have now grown into adults who while living in the present are still haunted by the ghosts of the past.

The girl who once lost her world has found built another in Birpur. Raised in the loving care of her Mamisa and under the adoring watch of the village Thakurain, Paro has blossomed into a woman of beauty and grace. She dreams of a happy future whilst carrying cherished memories of the past. The only darkness present in sun-filled life is that of the danger posed by the BSD. They were the ones blamed for her parents' deaths and that of many others. All of Birpur fear the BSD; a fear that has been nurtured and harvested by the Birpur's Thakur for his own sinister purposes. Annually, he arranges for a grand wedding where a daughter of Birpur is married to a groom from across the border. But in reality it is a disguise for his gun smuggling operations; gun parts arrives with the groom's party and cash payments depart with the bridal procession. This year it is Parvati who is the bride, destined for a cruel future once across the border.

As fate would have it, Rudra has also arrived in Birpur as a ruthless and relentless major in the BSD. Returning to Birpur has brought back tortured memories of a childhood abandoned, of a child betrayed and an innocence lost. The wounds cast so many years ago are as yet unhealed and Rudra will not let them heal, forever burning himself and those around him. His father's words still echo with him; a woman of beauty belongs to no one. And so when he rescues a beautiful Paro from thugs on the eve of her wedding, he reminds himself of this truth when he lets her go.

A border clash

As the wedding draws closer, the BSD realize the truth behind these cross-border weddings and under Rudra's leadership they begin laying out a trap to catch the Thakur and his minions. But the Thakur is no less alert and rushes the wedding rituals of Paro to Varun, her future husband who has managed to win her heart with his sincerity. They are farewelled with great pomp from Birpur but are unexpectedly greeted at the border crossing by Rudra and the BSD forces. A gun battle breaks out and bloodshed ensues. To Paro's horror she witnesses Rudra kill Varun, unaware that it was done to protect her from her deceitful husband who in reality was involved with the smuggling operations. As the lone survivor of the bridal party, Paro is taken into protective custody by Rudra.

Hostilities and hostages

Within the space of a few hours, Paro goes from bride to widow and she lays the blame for all of this on Rudra. Her fears of the BSD are realized and she refuses to cooperate with Rudra or believe his claims that it is the Thakur who is the real culprit. Desperate to protect Paro after attempts on her life and bring justice to the Thakur and his fallen comrades, Rudra resorts to taking her as his personal hostage. To do so he steps into a world that he distanced himself from over a decade ago; the Ranawat Haveli where is his extended family currently lives.

It is within the confines of the haveli's walls that these two engage in a battle of the wills; his aim to break her defiance and hers to remain steadfast against him. But there are other forces at play as well on the battlefield and it is through the machinations of Mohini, Rudra's Kakisa, that the two are cornered into undergoing wedding preparations. Neither wish to wed and they know it so instead they determine that this will be the final battle for supremacy; pushing each other to the limits to determine who will break first.

Revelations of truths and destinies

The wedding day arrives and with it brings unexpected revelations for Paro and Rudra. Parvati's faith in the Thakur is shattered when he divulges the truth of her wedding to Varun and then attempts to kill her. But a feisty Paro escapes and returns to Rudra, ready to cooperate and desperate to seek forgiveness for her disbelief in him. Yet it is too late, for in her bid for freedom she has betrayed Rudra's belief in her innocence. A belief that is further shaken when Paro is accused by his family members for attempting to burn his father to death.

Despite the accusations levelled at her, Paro remains staunch in her quest for Rudra's forgiveness and the nursing of his father to full health. After many upheavals, the truth begins to unfold that Paro is truly innocent and genuine in her guilt. But a bigger truth is revealed to Paro when she discovers that Rudra is in fact the boy she met so many years ago.

An innocent but costly mistake

Taking this as sign of their joined destinies, she attempts to win Rudra's jaded heart. But his angst runs too deep within him to accept Paro's overtures and he repeatedly spurns her attempts. Alas his conniving cousin manages to use one such attempt to portray Rudra and his beloved BSD in a disreputable manner. This escalates even further leading to Rudra's suspension and in a state of drunken rage he attempts to take his revenge from the person he believes to be the root of all his problems; Paro.

He fulfils her wish for them to be joined in matrimony but promises her that this marriage will be one of pain and tears for her. A deserving punishment for ignoring his wishes and forcing her way into his life.

Growing closeness

Their vows of marriage were filled with hateful words and vengeful promises but as the days go by Paro and Rudra are drawn closer and closer. After all, how long can one fight one's destiny? But fate can be cruel as well and Kakisa's ploys are almost successful in snatching away Rudra's life. That is until, Parvati promises to her Bholenath that she will forsake the most beloved thing in her life, her Rudra, if his life is saved and he fully recovers. Her prayers are answered and her husband saved. But at what cost?

Awesome payal.😃

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#364

There are some changes.

Post 1 : Introduction (hrideyy)
Post 2 : Winners Announcement (appy)
Post 3 : Story so Far & Dialogues (mally)
Post 4 : Characters (afrin)
Post 5 : Top Five Episodes (surana)
Post 6 : Top Five Relations (sindhu)
Post 7 : Top Five PaRud (barunsanz)
Post 8 : Secret / vote of thanks to nabila, shivu and RR DTs{hrideyy}
Post 9 : Messages (Payali)
Post 10 : Siggies(titaliya)

The ones in red have been change becouse paro rura is not active.

& title isnt replying so i swappe the places of titli & payal.😳

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Koeli

@Koeli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#365

Payal it is perfectly fine :)

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#366

Mala-Paro

Themother-daughter relationship is the most complex.

~Unknown

[DIV]
The relation which mala and paro shares is no less then the relationship of a mother.
As muh as paro resoects mala as her mother mala also treats her as her own daughter.
Mala has played the role of a mother in paro's life.
In her weding she did everything a mother does and paro also always has been with her.
When paro went missing mala cried for her, she even tried to find about her this prives how much she loves paro.
Paro always talks about her thakurain maa sa and this proves how muh she adores her and respect her.
Mala and paro are not related by blood but thy are related with an unusual bond of respect and love which is very rare in today's selfish world where some mothers disowns thier own daughters
Admist of all the relations I find paro and mala's relationship most respectable.

Edited by CrazyBoy-.Hd.- - 11 years ago

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#367

The harsh desert sands of Rajasthan plays host to this passionate tale of two destined soulmates, bound together and yet torn apart in the hues of love and hate.

Parvati and Rudra.

Reth mein shuru hue ek prem ki dastaan; lekin iss dastaan mein kya pyaar payenge ya rakht behega?

A childhood encounter

"Bacchon ka dil pyar samajh tha hai, sachhaai aur jhoot, achaai aur burayi mein pharak samajhtha hai aur jab viswaas karta hai tho wo jhoota nahi hota..."

She, a beloved daughter whose parents were murdered by BSD forces and He, a once happy boy now tormented by his mother's unexplained abandonment.

"Kuch nahi hua, kuch nahi hua, sab teekh hojayega. Maa, bapusa aaraha hai"
"Iss Maa ki badua hai tuje, ki jis tarah se tune aaj mere beta ko mujse alag kiya na? Ussi tarah iss Ishwar bhi tuje teri maa se alag kardega"

They meet as children at a bus stop where a caring Paro attempts to comfort an upset by parting with her treasured doll, a memento of parents who are no more.

"Manne lagta hai ki main apne soch mein bahut aamir hu"

"Tujhe takleef main dekhkar mujhe bhi takleef hoti hai"

For Rudra, guarded against the taunts and tortures of the world, the comfort given by this slight girl is unexpected but deeply appreciated.

"Woh apne aage bhagwaan ko bhi nah maane, toh santan ko kya maanegi? ... Usne aaj tak na kabhi thara bapusa ko chaha, na tujhe"

"Mera saara bachpan, main khela nahi, main toota, bikhra aur fir nafrat ki maine aur ajj bhi karta hu, main nahin chahata woh aiye, par woh laut ayi...saari zindagi ladke jisse door hoya woh laut ayi...mera majak udane"

They meet and then part again but what was a chance encounter between two young souls scarred by their lost childhood was simply the beginning of a destined love story.

An officer and a bride

Time marches on and those two children have now grown into adults who while living in the present are still haunted by the ghosts of the past.

"Birpur ki hawa bolti hai, baat karti hai aur bhatke hue ko rasta dhikati hai"

The girl who once lost her world has found built another in Birpur.

"Birpur se bahar kabhi nahi nikari shayad. Jindagi inn reth ke teelo mein kaate hue dikthi hai. Kuch logon ke liye bade khaas, bade apne se hota hai ye reth ke teele, tumhare liya bhi hain na?"

Raised in the loving care of her Mamisa and under the adoring watch of the village Thakurain, Paro has blossomed into a woman of beauty and grace.

"Suraj ki roshni,registan ki ret tak iski shakal nahi dekh sakti,agar mein na chahu"

She dreams of a happy future whilst carrying cherished memories of the past.

"Apne suna na Bholeji? Kya kehrahe the woh? Woh matlab...woh. Aur koi na jaane iss baat ko, kyunki pehle kabhi hoto pe na layi. Par aapke to mann ki avaaz sunaijave hai. Haazaron bar suna hoga aapne, mhare mann ka yahi sapna. Ki mhara bhi ek chota sa ghar ho, jaha ki deewaron pe bina hijak mhare pasand ka chuna karvao, ki mharo calendar tangvao, mhari rasoi, mhara apna parivaar"

The only darkness present in sun-filled life is that of the danger posed by the BSD. They were the ones blamed for her parents' deaths and that of many others.

"BSD aag hai, aag! Aur aag janmi hai chitha ki saheli banne"
"Bas! Gaon mein ghoomte kutte ki baddai kar lijo par dobara kabhi BSD walon ki baddai na karjo"
All of Birpur fear the BSD; a fear that has been nurtured and harvested by the Birpur's Thakur for his own sinister purposes.

"Yaha ki logon ko BSD se itni nafrat hai ke lagta hai inki sabziyo mein namak nahi, BSD ke khilaf zeher khilayi jaata hai inkon"
Annually, he arranges for a grand wedding where a daughter of Birpur is married to a groom from across the border.

"Sarkar jor jabarjasthi se zameen pe kato ke bard gardh sake, hain himmat to humare dillon main ye kato ke bard gardh dekhave, sarkar. Mhere liya koi sarhad nahi, aapke liye koi sarhad nahi, mhare betiyo, mhare jawan ke liye koi sarhad nahi!"

But in reality it is a disguise for his gun smuggling operations; gun parts arrives with the groom's party and cash payments depart with the bridal procession. This year it is Parvati who is the bride, destined for a cruel future once across the border.
"Par main apne ek beti ko ghar vapas lane ke liya, Birpur ke har bahu aur beti ki izzat aur jaan khatre mein nahi dahlunga. Aaj agar main BSD walon ko Birpur mein kadam pasarene ka jaga dhedhu to kal ko inhe BSD walon ke wahi kadam Birpur ke galiyon se hote hue mhare gharo mein ghoos jayenge. Aur uske badh aapko Birpur ke naliyon mein Birpur ka mardho ka rakht aur yaha ki bahu betiyan ka izzat behti hui nazar ayega"
"Iski sapno mein na aayaho par iski sapno ka raj kumar issi lejane aa raha hi hoga. Iss registan me uske pair iske ghar ki taraf murdh hi gaya hoge. Iske aankhon mein na aye tho kya hoya, uske aankhon mein Paro baisa ki sapne avela"

As fate would have it, Rudra has also arrived in Birpur as a ruthless and relentless major in the BSD.

"Tumne rules ki book ulti pardhe ho kya? Pehle dushman se bhirdo, phir unne khatam karthe ho, phir apne team ko kehete ho unke bodies uthane ko, aur uske baad me tum jaake apne seniors ko inform karthe ho. Ye bewakoofi nahin, suicidal bhi hain!"
"Yes, you and your men may go home. Aaram kar. Bohot busy din tha na aaj? Do ladkiyo ko pakardne mein takhat lagayi, Kesari Ram ko bhagane diya. Thakgaya hogaya. Rest karo"
Returning to Birpur has brought back tortured memories of a childhood abandoned, of a child betrayed and an innocence lost.

The wounds cast so many years ago are as yet unhealed and Rudra will not let them heal, forever burning himself and those around him. His father's words still echo with him.

"Apne aap ko pathar isliye bana ke rakha hai na aapne, ki is pathar ke neeche wo viswaas dab jaaye.."

"Apne baap ki ek seek yadh rakhna. Khoobsurat aurate kisiki nahi hoti. Na apne baap ki. Na apne pati ki. Na apne aulad ki. Kisiki nahi!"

And so when he rescues a beautiful Paro from thugs on the eve of her wedding, he reminds himself of this truth when he lets her go.

A border clash

"Kamene guns ko lekar BSD ke naak ke niche aisa nikalgaye, jaisa apne baap ke pajama silwane aiye"
"Pura gaon haveli mein hoga, sir. Kabootoro ke beech mein kaweh baiteh honge. Pehchana muskhil hoga"
"Bidaai dulhaan ki nahi, aapki dos aur aapki azaadi ki hogi"

As the wedding draws closer, the BSD realize the truth behind these cross-border weddings and under Rudra's leadership they begin laying out a trap to catch the Thakur and his minions.

"Kabhi kisse sher ko shikar karthe hua dekha, Amandeep? Shikar ko dekhkar who ek kadam aage bardatha hai aur phir do kadam peeche letha. Sirf takhat nahi, chard, chardtha hai who apne shikar ko. Shikar dhoke mein aakar samajtha hai ki khatra gaya magar sher ka chard aur baas ek charda sab khatam"
"Tejawat, museum me pardi keemti murat ki tarah hai jise hum dekh to sakthe hai lekin choo nahi sakthe. ~ Chooenge bhi aur thapad bhi marenge! Iss Tejawat ki duniya, oolatni hai aaj"

"But the Thakur is no less alert and rushes the wedding rituals of Paro to Varun, her future husband who has managed to win her heart with his sincerity.

Thakurainsa chahathi ki unka diya jhoda pehne, par shayad Ishwar ki marzi na thi. Woh chahathe the ki ma ki jhoda mein beti beendini bhane"
"Isse dhyaan ho naho par manne tho dhyaan hain ki isse kaisa bheendh chahiye; seedha, dheeme dheeme boltha, pyaar bhare dilwala; voh kavi nahi hote? Jo geet likne vala? Vaisa. Har jiv ki jaan samajne wala, jo nazar niche karke chale ki kahi bhoolse paoke niche koi cheeti na aajave"
Jab tak zinda hu, tab tak na to khudh, na apne, apne kabhi BSD ke gulaam bane doonga."

They are farewelled with great pomp from Birpur but are unexpectedly greeted at the border crossing by Rudra and the BSD forces.

"Anne do. Anne do iss baraat ko. Iska swagat aisa hoga jaisa aaj tak kisse baraat ka nahi hoga"
"Rudra, remember, apne duties dil se karo aur actions dimaag se"
A gun battle breaks out and bloodshed ensues.
"BSD mein do tarah ki log hote hai; ek wo jo rules ke hisab se chalte hai aur dusre wo jo apne rules khud banathe hai. Badkismati se tum aise insaan ke saath kaam kar rahe ho jo dusre category mein aatha hai"
"What the hell is this? Tumhe laashon ko dekhne ka shauk hai kya? Itne insaan maare tumne ki itne keerde makorde bhi hote tho dekhke dukh hota. Kya paya itna khoon kharaba karke?"
To Paro's horror she witnesses Rudra kill Varun, unaware that it was done to protect her from her deceitful husband who in reality was involved with the smuggling operations.

"Yeh dekho parda hai ek aur Hindustan ke rakhwala, apne hi mitthi mein dhool chatthe hue"

"Aur ye tiranga, ithrahte hue, lehrahte hue, accha nahi lagraha hai. Iss desh ki mitti mein humare jhoote gandhe ho gaye hai, aaj jaate jaate saaf karenge"

As the lone survivor of the bridal party, Paro is taken into protective custody by Rudra.
"Ye ladki humari akri gavaah hai isliya iski khamoshi todna bahut zaroori hai"

"Ye chote mote morche jeetne se fateh nahi kehlata; akri ladrayi jeetne ko kehte hai fateh. Apne witness ko azaadi ka lalach do; darr se nahi, hope se"

Hostilities and hostages

"Ek vidhwa Paro ke liye, pura gaon vidhwa bann jata. Bilkul sahi kiya mhare gaon walon ne. Bilkul sahi"

Within the space of a few hours, Paro goes from bride to widow and she lays the blame for all of this on Rudra.

"Ye aag ubalta hosala,ye bahaduri agar galath logo ka saath nahi deti na tho vvake taarif karta iski"

Her fears of the BSD are realized and she refuses to cooperate with Rudra or believe his claims that it is the Thakur who is the real culprit.

"Jis din se tujhse mila hu, us din se sirf ek hi chhej kar raha hu, tujhe jindas rakhne ki koshish. Sirf main hoon mein, jiski vajah se aaj teri saasein chal rahi hai"

"Kinnko bacha rahe hai tu? Kinnko bacha rahe hai tu? Unnko, jinno ne tere saath me rishta rehne se manna kardiya?"
"Isliya Jallad nahi, apne rakshak, apne suraksha chakra ka naam dijiye unhe. Woh zyaada sahi hoga"

Desperate to protect Paro after attempts on her life and bring justice to the Thakur and his fallen comrades, Rudra resorts to taking her as his personal hostage.

"Apne usse lardayi mein legaye the, aur aaj aap hi ke vajese mera beta... Itni himmat, itni himmat kaha se ayi? Ke ek maa ke samne aake ye kahe ki kya hogaya? Koi baat nahin ki usne apna baccha khodiya. Tum officer the na? Tho aapne apne chahtipe par uss goliyon ko kyun nahin khaya? Kyun mere bacche ko aage kiya? Kyun? "

To do so he steps into a world that he distanced himself from over a decade ago; the Ranawat Haveli where is his extended family currently lives.

"Bevakoof ladki is ghar ke bahar kadam rakh kar, apne mauth ko khud apn a chehra dikhake a raha hai tu"

"Agar mhaare ko kisiko chunna pada,toh mein wo haath na chunu jo mhare apmaan ke liye aur mhare ko thappad marne ke liye utha tha. Nafrat karti hoon usse lekin phir bhi unpe aapse jyaada bharosa karti hoon!"

"Thare aankein uski hai! Inhe podhle, bhool jayenge uskon!"

It is within the confines of the haveli's walls that these two engage in a battle of the wills; his aim to break her defiance and hers to remain steadfast against him.

"Koi raasta hi nahi hai, Haaregi tho tu hai..Ladaayi tere aur mere beech hai aur mein haartha nahi hoon paro, bachi tu"

"BSD ne ye nahi sikhaye ki choti choti tu tu mei mei hi dushman ki ghutane aise thod do ki wo anthim ladayi ke liye dobara khada hi na ho payi"

But there are other forces at play as well on the battlefield and it is through the machinations of Mohini, Rudra's Kakisa, that the two are cornered into undergoing wedding preparations.

"Waise mein purane khyaalothon ka nahi hoon, tum chahe tho mujhe mere naam se bula sakte ho Rudra, ya Jallad kehna jyaada acha lagta hai, bas mujhe kuch pharak nai padta, tere muh se tho wo bhi meetha lagte hai"

"Byah ke pehle mere honewali beendni ki shakal koi nahi dekhega"

Neither wish to wed and they know it so instead they determine that this will be the final battle for supremacy; pushing each other to the limits to determine who will break first.

"Ab tho saare haq hai tujhpe, hone wala pati jo hoon tera"

"Adharmi patni lag rahi hai meri"

"Jal ne ki itna shauk hai na tho hamare shaadi ke baad phero wali aag me khood jana, shadi ke baad kuyn shaadi ki phle hi khud jaaungi"

Revelations of truths and destinies

"Sach suraj ki saman hove beta, saam dalte dalte thodi der chupna jaroori hove, par subah aati hai, suraj nikalta hai aur tab uske ujhale ko phelne se koi na rook sake"

"Jab ek din, mauth achanak samne aakar khade ho jaayegi, par mauth aur tere beech mein nahi aaunga tab ye saare baatein yaad ayenge aur phir pachthayegi tu"

The wedding day arrives and with it brings unexpected revelations for Paro and Rudra.

"Mat ja, mat ja Paro, maar dalega ye tuje mat ja"

"Agar usse kharoj bhi aaya na tejawat, thho vada kartha hoon cheerke rakh doonga"

Parvati's faith in the Thakur is shattered when he divulges the truth of her wedding to Varun and then attempts to kill her.

"Baisa aap sach mein itna na samajh ho ya na samajh hone ka don kar rahe ho"

"Baisa, kab tak moh maya ki bandhano mein jakhre rahoge? Mhari Paro, mharo gaon, mhari jindagi, tyaag do mooh maya ne. Vaise bhi Baisa, aaj thane zaroorat je zyaada janliya hai"

But a feisty Paro escapes and returns to Rudra, ready to cooperate and desperate to seek forgiveness for her disbelief in him.

"Jo pachthava hota hai na, bahuth bhooka hota hai, insaan ko dheere dheere andar se bahut dard deti aur khaa jaata hai phis iska pet nahi bharta"

Yet it is too late, for in her bid for freedom she has betrayed Rudra's belief in her innocence.

"Teen kadam aur tu apne ghar. Teen deen shareer me koi zakhm hove voh khatam. Teen mahine tere saath jo ghata uska dard khatam. Lekin teen janam bhi legi to chup rehekar apne inn logon ke saath jo galath karegi na uska karz nahi uttar payegi"

"Aur the sunlo, Dilsher ya uska janme hue uss bhode main mhare ghar mein kadam nahi rakhne doongi"

A belief that is further shaken when Paro is accused by his family members for attempting to burn his father to death.

"Dhyaanse meri baat sun dobara nahi bolunga. Iss pure duniya mein, iss pure duniya mein akela main hu main, shayad tu khud bhi nahin, jo tujhe jinda rakhna chahta hain"

Despite the accusations levelled at her, Paro remains staunch in her quest for Rudra's forgiveness and the nursing of his father to full health.

"Jab tak aap mhaari raksha ke liye ho tab tak mhare ko kuch nahi ho saktha"

"Mhare ko mhare major saab par pura bharosa hai isliye kissi bhi baat ki chinta nahi hai"

After many upheavals, the truth begins to unfold that Paro is truly innocent and genuine in her guilt.

"Ab dobara main aapko chot nai pahuchane doonga..kyun mhare ko chot pahuchane ka haq sirf aapko hai..mhaare ko bhi nahi"

"Mhare ko samajhne keliye aapko bahut mehnat karni hogi, mhare dil mein utarna hoga joote utaarke"

But a bigger truth is revealed to Paro when she discovers that Rudra is in fact the boy she met so many years ago.

Aap paida hi hua hai mujhe bachane ke liye..

Bewakoof ladki, tera raksha sirf mein kar saktha hoon..chod iska haath aur pakad mera haath..chal mere saath ..aa..

"Kya hai? Inn aakhein mein, iss avaaz mein? Jo itne bezaati aur beruki ki badh bhi kichi chali athi hai? Koi aur hoti to laath maarjaathi"

"Kaash us din humari bus rukhi hi na hoti, kash mai tujhse nila hi nahi hota"

An innocent but costly mistake

"Waise chahe tho Rudra ka naam apn hatheliyon par likhe ya na likhe usse koi pharak nahi padtha kyunki apni kismat me tho tu ne uska naam apne haathon se likh liya hai"

Taking this as sign of their joined destinies, she attempts to win Rudra's jaded heart.

"Bas yahi ek kami rahegi, kaash unka naam aapka naam mein se ek hota!"

"Diktha hai, jis tarah se tu usko choota hai, uske rakshak banta hai, uski parwa karta hai, tu ne usko haq de diya hai rudra, tujh par haq jamane ka"

But his angst runs too deep within him to accept Paro's overtures and he repeatedly spurns her attempts.

"Bhagwan ne mardh teen kisam ke banaye...Teesri kisam ka mardh hota hai janwar. Janwar aur iss kisam ka mardh pe farak itna sa hota hai; janwar ke paas dil hota hai aur unke paas... unke paas dil ke jaga hota hai katare. Andhar hi andhar, khud bhi cheelthe rehete hai aur unhe bhi cheelthe hai jo unke gale parda hota hai. Jaisa mera Rudra"

"Abhi bhi inkaar kar sakthi thi,kar sakti thi, nahi kiya kyunki aapse door rehna tha, shaayad tere bhaagya mein nahi hai mujhse alag rehna, aati hoon mein"

Alas his conniving cousin manages to use one such attempt to portray Rudra and his beloved BSD in a disreputable manner.

"Jaan nikal gayithi mhari ki ek baar fir mhari wajahse aapki naukri paar anch ayegi, ke mhari badtameezi ke wajah se aapko saza milti, main mar jati aur aap mazak hi karte reh jate"

This escalates even further leading to Rudra's suspension and in a state of drunken rage he attempts to take his revenge from the person he believes to be the root of all his problems; Paro.

"Naya kya kiya. Aurat ho na. Tum bhi aur woh bhi. Rishta todke, mudke, wapas na aane ke khasiyat paidha hote ho na tum log. Kuch naya sabhit nahi kiya. Sirf itna sabit kiya ki aurat ho"

He fulfils her wish for them to be joined in matrimony but promises her that this marriage will be one of pain and tears for her.

"Sahi pukara tha uss ladki ne. Jallad ho tum. ~Mention not!"
"Mai jaanti hu jija ki mhara bhyah koi pariyon ki kahaniya wala nahi hai par bhyah toh bhyah hai"
A deserving punishment for ignoring his wishes and forcing her way into his life.

"Mhare ko shanti deta hai, shakti deta hai ye gana,un dino ki yad dilatha hai jab mein khush thi,jab sab theek tha, aur mujhe taklif deta hai gana.. un dino ki yad dilate jine yaad nahi karna chahti"
"Darr mujhse, nafrat kar mujhse. Mujhe dekhke seene mein aag lagti hain na? Yeh darr, yeh nafrat, yeh aag bahot zaroori hain. Kyunki yahi tujhe mujhse alag nahin hone denge aur yahi tujhe jinda bhi rakhenge"

Growing closeness

"Aman bol isko maine BSD join nahi ki iski jaan bachane keliye. Gavaah hai yeh, sirf gavaah"

"Wo rahe, aapki Paro"

"Diktha hai, jis tarah se tu usko choota hai, uske rakshak banta hai, uski parwa karta hai, tu ne usko haq de diya hai rudra, tujh par haq jamane ka"

Their vows of marriage were filled with hateful words and vengeful promises but as the days go by Paro and Rudra are drawn closer and closer.

"Sunne mein kitna accha lagta hai na? Pehle pyaar fir shaadi par yeh sab sirf sapno mein hi hota hai, asliyat mein to rishtaa rishtaa hota hai aur ek rishte ki dor aurat ko hi sambhalni hoti hai"

"Hamare baare mein jab baat hoti thi ,tho tu thaara maara karta tha, aaj tu ne usse apna saath jod liya"

"Thari aankhon mein dekha tha maine, dekha tha wo bechaini, wo tadap, jo tu uskeliye mehsoos kar raha tha, dekha tha maine thari aawaz mein uske liye phikar"

After all, how long can one fight one's destiny?

"Apne hone wali beevi ke liye tofa laaya tha..tere naap ki hongi kyunki tere kalayiyon ka naap mujhe patha hai"

"Ab woh mujhse nafrat nahi karte, kuch to badla hain unme aur iske liye unka gussa mujhe manzoor hai"

But fate can be cruel as well and Kakisa's ploys are almost successful in snatching away Rudra's life.

"Lagta hai dhua kumari ka hawan kund ke chaaro taraf phere kaatne ka mann hai isiliye agni dev ne gusse me aakar iske gore gore hathon mein aise khrod dikhaa diya"

"Bachchi hainjo khel rahi thi aur kissi ne mujhe kuch bataya kyu nahi, bhabisa aap iska khayal nahi rakh sakti thi"

"Kuch haani ka vrat rakha hai kya? Agar tereko kuch ho jata toh mera kya..."

That is until, Parvati promises to her Bholenath that she will forsake the most beloved thing in her life, her Rudra, if his life is saved and he fully recovers.

"Woh tera pati nahi hai"

"Tu mera patni hai"

Her prayers are answered and her husband saved.

"Jab tak mein jinda hoon tu usse lekar nai ja sakta yahan se"

"Jab jindagi ki raste thode kaai bhari ho na, tho phisalke jameen par girne ke baad rone ke bajay hasa kar, dard kam hoga"

But at what cost?

Naye rishte banane se pehle puraane rishton ka raaz chupaana nahi chahiye, Rudra

"Bhoolja apne atith ko Rudra aur apne aaj mein jee, utaar fek iss boj ko apne kandho se warna yeh kandhe jhook jayege iss boj se"

Edited by Payali09 - 11 years ago

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Payali09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#368

Okay so...so far it's like 20 dialogues... but you guys get the gist.

Thoughts, suggestions? Etc?

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Mally

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Posted: 11 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: Payali09
And here is my idea of the Story So Far with Dialogues 😳

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STORY SO FAR (WITH 100 DIALOGUES)

The harsh desert sands of Rajasthan plays host to this passionate tale of two destined soulmates, bound together and yet torn apart in the hues of love and hate.

Parvati and Rudra.

Reth mein shuru hue ek prem ki dastaan; lekin iss dastaan mein kya pyaar payenge ya rakht behega?

A childhood encounter
She, a beloved daughter whose parents were murdered by BSD forces and He, a once happy boy now tormented by his mother's unexplained abandonment. They meet as children at a bus stop where a caring Paro attempts to comfort an upset by parting with her treasured doll, a memento of parents who are no more. For Rudra, guarded against the taunts and tortures of the world, the comfort given by this slight girl is unexpected but deeply appreciated. They meet and then part again but what was a chance encounter between two young souls scarred by their lost childhood was simply the beginning of a destined love story.
"Bacchon ka dil pyar samajh tha hai, sachhaai aur jhoot, achaai aur burayi mein pharak samajhtha hai aur jab viswaas karta hai tho wo jhoota nahi hota..."

An officer and a bride
Time marches on and those two children have now grown into adults who while living in the present are still haunted by the ghosts of the past.

The girl who once lost her world has found built another in Birpur. Raised in the loving care of her Mamisa and under the adoring watch of the village Thakurain, Paro has blossomed into a woman of beauty and grace.
"Suraj ki roshni,registan ki ret tak iski shakal nahi dekh sakti,agar mein na chahu"
She dreams of a happy future whilst carrying cherished memories of the past. The only darkness present in sun-filled life is that of the danger posed by the BSD. They were the ones blamed for her parents' deaths and that of many others. All of Birpur fear the BSD; a fear that has been nurtured and harvested by the Birpur's Thakur for his own sinister purposes. Annually, he arranges for a grand wedding where a daughter of Birpur is married to a groom from across the border. But in reality it is a disguise for his gun smuggling operations; gun parts arrives with the groom's party and cash payments depart with the bridal procession. This year it is Parvati who is the bride, destined for a cruel future once across the border.

As fate would have it, Rudra has also arrived in Birpur as a ruthless and relentless major in the BSD.
"Apne aap ko pathar isliye bana ke rakha hai na aapne, ki is pathar ke neeche wo viswaas dab jaaye.."
Returning to Birpur has brought back tortured memories of a childhood abandoned, of a child betrayed and an innocence lost.
"Mhare ko shanti deta hai, shakti deta hai ye gana,un dino ki yad dilatha hai jab mein khush thi,jab sab theek tha, aur mujhe taklif deta hai gana.. un dino ki yad dilate jine yaad nahi karna chahti"
The wounds cast so many years ago are as yet unhealed and Rudra will not let them heal, forever burning himself and those around him. His father's words still echo with him; a woman of beauty belongs to no one. And so when he rescues a beautiful Paro from thugs on the eve of her wedding, he reminds himself of this truth when he lets her go.

A border clash
As the wedding draws closer, the BSD realize the truth behind these cross-border weddings and under Rudra's leadership they begin laying out a trap to catch the Thakur and his minions. But the Thakur is no less alert and rushes the wedding rituals of Paro to Varun, her future husband who has managed to win her heart with his sincerity. They are farewelled with great pomp from Birpur but are unexpectedly greeted at the border crossing by Rudra and the BSD forces. A gun battle breaks out and bloodshed ensues. To Paro's horror she witnesses Rudra kill Varun, unaware that it was done to protect her from her deceitful husband who in reality was involved with the smuggling operations. As the lone survivor of the bridal party, Paro is taken into protective custody by Rudra.

Hostilities and hostages
Within the space of a few hours, Paro goes from bride to widow and she lays the blame for all of this on Rudra.
Ye aag ubalta hosala,ye bahaduri agar galath logo ka saath nahi deti na tho vvake taarif karta iski
Her fears of the BSD are realized and she refuses to cooperate with Rudra or believe his claims that it is the Thakur who is the real culprit.
Jis din se tujhse mila hu, us din se sirf ek hi chhej kar raha hu, tujhe jindas rakhne ki koshish. Sirf main hoon mein, jiski vajah se aaj teri saasein chal rahi hai..
Desperate to protect Paro after attempts on her life and bring justice to the Thakur and his fallen comrades, Rudra resorts to taking her as his personal hostage.
Bevakoof ladki is ghar ke bahar kadam rakh kar, apne mauth ko khud apn a chehra dikhake a raha hai tu..
To do so he steps into a world that he distanced himself from over a decade ago; the Ranawat Haveli where is his extended family currently lives.
Agar mhaare ko kisiko chunna pada,toh mein wo haath na chunu jo mhare apmaan ke liye aur mhare ko thappad marne ke liye utha tha. Nafrat karti hoon usse lekin phir bhi unpe aapse jyaada bharosa karti hoon!
It is within the confines of the haveli's walls that these two engage in a battle of the wills; his aim to break her defiance and hers to remain steadfast against him.
Koi raasta hi nahi hai, Haaregi tho tu hai..Ladaayi tere aur mere beech hai aur mein haartha nahi hoon paro, bachi tu..
But there are other forces at play as well on the battlefield and it is through the machinations of Mohini, Rudra's Kakisa, that the two are cornered into undergoing wedding preparations.
Waise mein purane khyaalothon ka nahi hoon, tum chahe tho mujhe mere naam se bula sakte ho Rudra, ya Jallad kehna jyaada acha lagta hai, bas mujhe kuch pharak nai padta, tere muh se tho wo bhi meetha lagte hai..
BSD ne ye nahi sikhaye ki choti choti tu tu mei mei hi dushman ki ghutane aise thod do ki wo anthim ladayi ke liye dobara khada hi na ho payi..
Neither wish to wed and they know it so instead they determine that this will be the final battle for supremacy; pushing each other to the limits to determine who will break first.
Ab tho saare haq hai tujhpe, hone wala pati jo hoon tera..
Adharmi patni lag rahi hai meri..
Jal ne ki itna shauk hai na tho hamare shaadi ke baad phero wali aag me khood jana, shadi ke baad kuyn shaadi ki phle hi khud jaaungi..

Revelations of truths and destinies
Sach suraj ki saman hove beta, saam dalte dalte thodi der chupna jaroori hove, par subah aati hai, suraj nikalta hai aur tab uske ujhale ko phelne se koi na rook sake
Jab ek din, mauth achanak samne aakar khade ho jaayegi, par mauth aur tere beech mein nahi aaunga tab ye saare baatein yaad ayenge aur phir pachthayegi tu,..
The wedding day arrives and with it brings unexpected revelations for Paro and Rudra.
Mat ja, mat ja paro, maar dalega ye tuje mat ja..
Agar usse kharoj bhi aaya na tejawat, thho vada kartha hoon cheerke rakh doonga
Parvati's faith in the Thakur is shattered when he divulges the truth of her wedding to Varun and then attempts to kill her.
Baisa aap sach mein itna na samajh ho ya na samajh hone ka don kar rahe ho
But a feisty Paro escapes and returns to Rudra, ready to cooperate and desperate to seek forgiveness for her disbelief in him.
Jo pachthava hota hai na, bahuth bhooka hota hai, insaan ko dheere dheere andar se bahut dard deti aur khaa jaata hai phis iska pet nahi bharta..
Yet it is too late, for in her bid for freedom she has betrayed Rudra's belief in her innocence. A belief that is further shaken when Paro is accused by his family members for attempting to burn his father to death.
Despite the accusations levelled at her, Paro remains staunch in her quest for Rudra's forgiveness and the nursing of his father to full health.
Jab tak aap mhaari raksha ke liye ho tab tak mhare ko kuch nahi ho saktha
After many upheavals, the truth begins to unfold that Paro is truly innocent and genuine in her guilt. But a bigger truth is revealed to Paro when she discovers that Rudra is in fact the boy she met so many years ago.
Aap paida hi hua hai mujhe bachane ke liye..
Bewakoof ladki, tera raksha sirf mein kar saktha hoon..chod iska haath aur pakad mera haath..chal mere saath ..aa..

An innocent but costly mistake
Waise chahe tho rudra ka naam apn hatheliyon par likhe ya na likhe usse koi pharak nahi padtha kyunki apni kismat me tho tu ne uska naam apne haathon se likh liya hai
Taking this as sign of their joined destinies, she attempts to win Rudra's jaded heart.
Diktha hai, jis tarah se tu usko choota hai, uske rakshak banta hai, uski parwa karta hai, tu ne usko haq de diya hai rudra, tujh par haq jamane ka..
But his angst runs too deep within him to accept Paro's overtures and he repeatedly spurns her attempts.
Abhi bhi inkaar kar sakthi thi,kar sakti thi, nahi kiya kyunki aapse door rehna tha, shaayad tere bhaagya mein nahi hai mujhse alag rehna, aati hoon mein.
Alas his conniving cousin manages to use one such attempt to portray Rudra and his beloved BSD in a disreputable manner. This escalates even further leading to Rudra's suspension and in a state of drunken rage he attempts to take his revenge from the person he believes to be the root of all his problems; Paro.
Ab dobara main aapko chot nai pahuchane doonga..kyun mhare ko chot pahuchane ka haq sirf aapko hai..mhaare ko bhi nahi
He fulfils her wish for them to be joined in matrimony but promises her that this marriage will be one of pain and tears for her. A deserving punishment for ignoring his wishes and forcing her way into his life.

Growing closeness
Iski saamne tameez mein aur maryada mein baat karna
Their vows of marriage were filled with hateful words and vengeful promises but as the days go by Paro and Rudra are drawn closer and closer.
Hamare baare mein jab baat hoti thi ,tho tu thaara maara karta tha, aaj tu ne usse apna saath jod liya..
Thari aankhon mein dekha tha maine, dekha tha wo bechaini, wo tadap, jo tu uskeliye mehsoos kar raha tha, dekha tha maine thari aawaz mein uske liye phikar..
After all, how long can one fight one's destiny? But fate can be cruel as well and Kakisa's ploys are almost successful in snatching away Rudra's life. That is until, Parvati promises to her Bholenath that she will forsake the most beloved thing in her life, her Rudra, if his life is saved and he fully recovers. Her prayers are answered and her husband saved.
Naye rishte banane se pehle puraane rishton ka raaz chupaana nahi chahiye, Rudra
But at what cost?