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MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1091

Originally posted by: JforChimpanzee

Hey bhagwan...
swimming in the gutter pool.

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Arnoww ji : Tum itna laal kyun ho gayi?
Khushi : Kaha na daadhi chubti hai. Ab aap hathiye..

Arnoww ji : Khushi, mujhe dekhne do..

Arnowji: Di kehti hain yeh garam garam sarson ke tel ki maalish se Saara dard khatam ho jaata hai

*Thoda dard hoga**Aahaah**Mujhe dekhne do Khushi *

*censored scene*

Khushi : Arnowji di sahi kehti hain, ...Aapke haathon mein jaadu hai..

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MsDroolKanthan

@MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1092

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Edited by MsDroolKanthan - 11 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1093

haila all in gutter mode
well after the excerpt she put we would be right

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Cherylann

@tvpal007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1094

I'm curious about the soul baring conversation which happened.I find Arnavji holding back emoshunally.
Has the anonymous letter writer gotten nasty ?
Is that why Khushi is worried?
Writerji .. Is Shyam the bad guy?Or is Aman the bad guy?or is it La or Dhruv or Nk?or has Sheetal been trained to send poisonous mail?
The other ahem questions have been posed by the Senior Management of the Gutter Company
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Cherylann

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1095

My phone is acting up.. Can't seem to like or quote any posts 😕

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vks11

@vks11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1096

If this story would still have been on IF, the plot and dialogues of Ch 7 and 8 would still have remained the same, and they would have done the same things in bed and out. However, I would have censored the scenes to an extent, much like my earlier ones in 'Seduction' and other stories. That would have been the only difference.

So yes, I did have it planned beforehand that Arnav will interrupt Payal's phone call in just this way, and when you read the rest of the Chapter, you'll know exactly why😊

I'm not going to lie here, I love being able to write intimacy the way I've always wanted to. To me, the awesome chemistry between ArHi deserves no less. To that end, moving to the blog has helped me spread my wings as a writer, I guess.

May I ask what prompted this question? I'm only asking that because I just read a comment somewhere that 'Shaadi' is all sex and no plot, and I wondered if you and others here felt the same. I would love to get your honest opinions, as always!

Juhi , one of the things I love about your stories are the intense passionate scenes with awesome chemistry. The passion, intense attraction and the drawn to each other feeling . This can be described only with intimacy. I felt you restricted yourself in writing the intimacy part in Seduction because it was on IF.

Your write your scenes in your stories so beautifully and elegantly where we can can see the passionate connection of body, mind and heart. When I am reading them I don't feel it is about sex but more about love making. I love how you write about their emotional and mental quotient too.

Believe me , when I say that I have abandoned reading a lot of stories after the second or third chapter because it was all about sex and i am really not a fan of that. It gets boring after a while.

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly.

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1097

Juhi, Shaadi is definitely more just about sex! I think us Baaratis choose to only focus on the sex part😆

But yes your story about Shaadi is really showing a gradual progression and buildup in relationship, not just physically but also emotionally. While they are exploring their intimate side, they are also learning how to share their emotions. From Arnav who voices his opinion about Payal, to Khushi who still has issues opening up and completely trusting him. There have been so many other instances as well, that I think they both are gelling well together. A true marriage is about emotional and physical connect, and we enjoy reading about both!

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lala rukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1098

nops not at all "shadi" is not all abt sex...its a sweet story of a love deprived girl who got her prince charming in form of a understanding husband...the one who is helping her gaining her self confidence back...who is there to help her out in her all insecurities...at the same time a man who never fallen for someone that strong is there enjoying his life with his wife...its a sweet love story ...and the passion between the two adding beauty to the story...

Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago

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kushi.raizada

@kushi.raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1099

Welcome back..what a excerpt sizzling hot...

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kurinji

@kurinji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1100

Shaddi is everything about sex, yes in real life all married will agree. Anybody dare to disagree with me. 😆 Why we in all over the world have "wedding night" not the relationship night or conversation night or bonding night...
Not only after Shaddi before too why we have Bachelor party and bachelorette party... Do I make any sense?????
Shaddi is related to sex. Shaddi without sex will lead to Haddi and Ex only.
Bas Bol diya.