IPKKND - EBP ~NEWSLETTER TEAM~ Submission on 1st May - Page 19

It is a clear fact that the show had undergone a tremendous improvement last few months what I feel is that from the point waseem sabir took over direction, accurately from the kohlapur scenes, the show has started speaking with symbolisms and imageries...

From the title itself it is clear that this post is meant for some constructive criticisms.
So we are here with some suggestions for the show's betterment.
The main areas that need some changes are:

• The whole plot seems to be scattered or less connected. The show had passed more than 100 episodes, but less character reasoning is given incase of agnihotri members. Why they are like this? Incidents that made them like this especially the reasons behind the abusive nature of NIiranjan Agnihotri. This improper reasoning of actions and behaviors is one of the most important reasons for the negativity against the show. I think it's high time to give at least some hints. So cvs pull some skeletons out of the closet and move the story ahead rather than pondering on the storeroom treasures of Agnihotri mansion and Jaya's thievery skills.

• Next is lack of continuity between successive tracks. One day they show a suffering jyoti, next day they show some useless jaya sojal scenes or saas bahu stuffs. The story is only revolving around agnohotri household- father, mother, sons, daughter in laws and their lives. Months before it is shown that avdoot lost job, but recently it is shown that he is going to office -how? What happened to anjali's parents? Does Shlok have one more sister? If so, why even the brothers are not concerned about her whereabouts? Lot of questions...I think cvs should concentrate on these missing links rather than showing the unnecessary saas bahu stuffs and humuorless comedies.

• Next is, although we love suspense and mysteries, its getting more and more complex. It won't be a problem for IF members as we read lot of wonderful analysis posts after every episodes. But we should also think about other viewers.Too much mystery, twisted dialogues, symbolisms may make it more complex for them and there are chances to lose interest if cvs fail to abridge the missing links soon.

• Though we are used to this Shlok's swapping behaviour, it needs a little justification. We are unable understand whether his actions are genuine or fake.The real care and love should stand out from the fake one. Cvs can do this by giving Shlok's povs or thoughts .

• The characterization of Astha -If she can stand up for the injusice to the girl in college so boldly,if she can stand up for the injustice to Jyoti, then why she is meek and silent in her own case.Her obsession of love for Shlok is justified, but it doesnt means being unresponsive towards his mean actions towards her.Hope she grew up stronger as a woman learning from her experiences...Like this- fierce and fearless😈

• Last but not the least , a wardrobe makeover for Astha and few more good shirts for Shlok. All except the leads are having a very lavish wardrobe. Is there any hidden agendas in this as well? May be trying to portay them as too simple and sans luxuries🤔

Originally posted by: -LECHU-

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SUGGESTIONS TO MAKERS

It is a clear fact that the show had undergone a tremendous improvement last few months what I feel is that from the point waseem sabir took over direction, accurately from the kohlapur scenes, the show has started speaking with symbolisms and imageries...

From the title itself it is clear that this post is meant for some constructive criticisms.
So we are here with some suggestions for the show's betterment.
The main areas that need some changes are:

• The whole plot seems to be scattered or less connected. The show had passed more than 100 episodes, but less character reasoning is given incase of agnihotri members. Why they are like this? Incidents that made them like this especially the reasons behind the abusive nature of NIiranjan Agnihotri. This improper reasoning of actions and behaviors is one of the most important reasons for the negativity against the show. I think it's high time to give at least some hints. So cvs pull some skeletons out of the closet and move the story ahead rather than pondering on the storeroom treasures of Agnihotri mansion and Jaya's thievery skills. 👍🏼

• Next is lack of continuity between successive tracks. One day they show a suffering jyoti, next day they show some useless jaya sojal scenes or saas bahu stuffs. The story is only revolving around agnohotri household- father, mother, sons, daughter in laws and their lives. Months before it is shown that avdoot lost job, but recently it is shown that he is going to office -how? he did not lose job, he was suspended. niranjan although bailed him out but it was not shown to us clearly that he also got him reinstated????, also how long was he bailed for and what is the status of inquiry now... What happened to anjali's parents? Does Shlok have one more sister? If so, why even the brothers are not concerned about her whereabouts? Lot of questions...I think cvs should concentrate on these missing links rather than showing the unnecessary saas bahu stuffs and humuorless comedies.

• Next is, although we love suspense and mysteries, its getting more and more complex. It won't be a problem for IF members as we read lot of wonderful analysis posts after every episodes. But we should also think about other viewers.Too much mystery, twisted dialogues, symbolisms may make it more complex for them and there are chances to lose interest if cvs fail to abridge the missing links soon. 👍🏼

• Though we are used to this Shlok's swapping behaviour, it needs a little justification. We are unable to understand whether his actions are genuine or fake.The real care and love should stand out from the fake one. Cvs can do this by giving Shlok's povs or thoughts. even the monologues are in a twisted way and have double meanings

• The characterization of Astha -If she can stand up for the injusice to the girl in college so boldly,if she can stand up for the injustice to Jyoti, then why she is meek and silent in her own case.Her obsession of love for Shlok is justified, but it doesnt means being unresponsive towards his mean actions towards her.Hope she grew up stronger as a woman learning from her experiences...Like this- fierce and fearless😈

• Last but not the least , a wardrobe makeover for Astha and few more good shirts for Shlok. All except the leads are having a very lavish wardrobe. Is there any hidden agendas in this as well? May be trying to portay them as too simple and sans luxuries🤔 good one😛

ok enough of my banter, my dear friends, please feel free to add more points and give suggestions🤗