Originally posted by: Asharkibiwi
di, this s a demo for dialogue ...so tell me is it ok? or should i make it short? any changes needed? pls let me knw 😳
Shlok:sawaal ke badle sawaal poochke tum iss ehsaas ko dabah nahi sakte, yeh tumhari aankhen haina, yeh sabkuch kehdeti hai.kyun yeh aake hamesha mujhe hi dhoondthe rehte hai, kyu tume gussa aata hai jab tum, mujhe kisi aur ladki ke saath dekhte hai, tum keh kyu nahi dete ki tume mujhse..
Aastha:yeh aankhen, yeh dil, yeh chehra, chaahe kuch bhi kahe, lekin mein woh nahi kahoongi jo aap sunna chaahthe ho.kyunki mein aisa kuch nahi kahungi jisse mujhe dukh ho, nahi kahungi mein
Shlok: tum ne kuch na kehke bhi bahut kuch boldiya
(This scene was on Niranjan-Anjali's wedding anniversary, where shlok making aastha confess her love for him )