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Sorry Ankita, main sone chali gayi thi. Sometimes that's what works best on me.
Mast likha hai re. Even though I made the VM, I still couldn't predict ke what will come next. It goes well with the video and yet It's not just a scene by scene description of the VM. It's more than that, and it's amazing. It's not dependent on the VM to make it a great read, but I think together they're wonderful.
My favorite parts:
Now sitting here, her hands up in prayer, she understood the cold difference between alone, and lonely.
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She prayed, in vain. She prayed for Reyaansh to become Rey again. She prayed for Maa to be proud of her again. In vain.
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After Maa, Rey was the only person who had been remotely able to penetrate into her heart. And now, he was terribly misusing that position, to inflict wounds inside, without even his actual trying.
Her heart poured more through her eyes. No matter how many times she wiped them, the flow didn't stop.
(This part especially, so beautifully written)
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Little pieces of him... His scent... His clothing... His voice... His breath... His Touch...
It all seemed to permeate inside her body, and make her create him inside of her. Her heart, her body, her soul was filled with his existence.
And the irony was, in her real life, he didn't want to exist.
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But after hours of weeping, she sits still.
Because now, she has made her peace.
Maa kabhi khush nahi hoti.
Rey Kabhi wapis nahi aaenge.
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Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
