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Originally posted by: vandu123

Hey,

I don't like it when they shows that Arshi loved other person instead of themselves & sad stories of Arshi It really hurt when you know that the character love each other but they can't live together.it turn me off and I don't like it personally.

well, I think it depends how the story is written also and the storyline...I am also writting a sad story but it depends how it is written...
but thanks for sharing your thoughts:)

Originally posted by: india094

well, I have read a story where it has so many characters that I have stop reading it...lol I am also wrting a sad story but it depends on how it is written and the storyline:)

yaa that is what I wanted to say...some storylines are good, they have some concept then a sad part could be read...but some stories typically very sadistic and depressing without a good concept...then I dunt read it. Like when i am liking the concept, I continue reading it...

Originally posted by: JCJS

I stop reading if it's too much hindhi as I could not understand it. And ya some write essays to say things there Will b no convos and the whole update would b a explanation to a situation that time I would feel someone pls kill me. These two. And sometimes a ff would b fabulous but there would b no regular update and ya this no of pages comment for next update makes me feel bad.

I understand about the hindi part because I myself am good not at hindi and it takes me sometime to understand what it is written...
yes, that is a shame that the autor does not update regular because you do forget the story...
about the pages and comments I have seen everyone to do that...some autor has if they get 500 likes when they will update...

i generally do that rarely... but when some writers story does not seems to proceed and it goes around the circle and not to the point ...but that has hardly happened with me ... and when sometime too many characters are introduce to make it interesting but it turns to be more confusing for me at least ... that happened once with me 😳

Originally posted by: bs1224

i generally do that rarely... but when some writers story does not seems to proceed and it goes around the circle and not to the point ...but that has hardly happened with me ... and when sometime too many characters are introduce to make it interesting but it turns to be more confusing for me at least ... that happened once with me 😳

that is good that it has never happened to you:)
but it has happened to me...
I meant the autor has written 30 chapters and still no improvement...
I was like come on do start the story now...

Originally posted by: ritzzzii

yaa that is what I wanted to say...some storylines are good, they have some concept then a sad part could be read...but some stories typically very sadistic and depressing without a good concept...then I dunt read it. Like when i am liking the concept, I continue reading it...

oh, yes, I understand what you are trying to tell and then I hate then Arnav comes and Khushi forgets her pain and runs after Arnav...and then they live happliy
like you have written about how Khushis pain and how hurt she was and later Arnav comes and she runs after Arnav...
like ASR would have said
what the...

Originally posted by: india094

oh, yes, I understand what you are trying to tell and then I hate then Arnav comes and Khushi forgets her pain and runs after Arnav...and then they live happliy
like you have written about how Khushis pain and how hurt she was and later Arnav comes and she runs after Arnav...
like ASR would have said
what the...

ya absolutely...some stories very well portrays the repention of arnav, n then u can understand her forgiving...but some only show that sad part or pain n then its like khushi got some amnesia and she goes all lovey dovey...oh thats absolute waste but it could be someone's perspective and when I am not writing, I dont believe in criticizing someone's effort so what I do is stop reading...:)

Originally posted by: ritzzzii

ya absolutely...some stories very well portrays the repention of arnav, n then u can understand her forgiving...but some only show that sad part or pain n then its like khushi got some amnesia and she goes all lovey dovey...oh thats absolute waste but it could be someone's perspective and when I am not writing, I dont believe in criticizing someone's effort so what I do is stop reading...:)

me too but it is sometime like too much...
I also dont like to criticzing someone work because of one you never know if the autor will take it on the right way and sometimes I have seen the autors are very rude to the readers...when the readers is trying to tell sometime about the update...

Originally posted by: india094

me too but it is sometime like too much...
I also dont like to criticzing someone work because of one you never know if the autor will take it on the right way and sometimes I have seen the autors are very rude to the readers...when the readers is trying to tell sometime about the update...

ya this is a reason...and also I think when I am not so talented to write something of my own so I should not say something which might hurt the author...but in general I dun mind anyone saying anything because they really dont matter to me...there are some people who takes these comments very very seriously...I dont like when they feel hurt or dejected like this because I personally belive that no one worth so much here to make u cry or hurt...
always smile...hehehe...uff me, see where I have dragged the topic...lol

When writers introduced too many characters and specially those who weren't the part IPPKND cast, I lost interest reading those stories.