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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Reading and correct minor minor mistakes :)

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Anything that needs an attention? 😃

Please re-quote. 😉

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Ehh... I have to go find it now -.-

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#484

Just tell me if you remember? What needs to be done?

CHECK YOUR SCRAP, Titaliya!

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

I'll give you my review in a second Sanki :)

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Oh and of course I won an Oscar today ;D

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Posted: 12 years ago

#487

@Aapi: *completely out of topic but can't resist till you reply my pm :P* Did you see ZGH's Last Epi? OMG.. the ending part was damn cute..

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#488

Anyways Sanki I think it's wonderful! I loved it.

For Arnav's last speech... I think that you just need to make his words more jagged, rough, unrehearsed, confused, broken, etc.

Get what I mean?

And maybe you need to emphasis the ambiguity a bit more, the ending is slightly slightly awkward.