CC 31* Where is Liya??* Invites Only - Page 105

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

I was with my boss. Discussing stuff...

La and K both...

In this FS update I am as good as telling the readers they wont be doing IT anytime soon.

But I want them to keep guessing when will they do it...

So how should I do it? I should keep them guessing... Keep things interesting

I think the whole guessing game is a good part of FS.

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

I think the whole guessing game is a good part of FS.

See them doing it is a big step for both so it should happen when the time is right

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

K! But I am telling the readers no IT for sometime. So the guessing stops... Should I rephrase that part and make it ambiguous? Or I am thinking too much and it is alright?

Off course they have to keep guessing, you CANNOT tell them they will not do it, the more intimate they get the more the anticipation will increase.

K that is what she is saying...She wants the readers to keep guessing ... But in part 16 there's this line in Arnav's POV that says he'd make love to her only when both of them are comfortable and are ready and not when desire is ruling them... It implies they won't be doing it anytime soon right ?

Did we make anyone jealous with our rangeen raat ;)

*cough*La*cough*Saiyu

K came too late to know how rangeen our ratein used to be ;)

Originally posted by: asrcraze

K that is what she is saying...She wants the readers to keep guessing ... But in part 16 there's this line in Arnav's POV that says he'd make love to her only when both of them are comfortable and are ready and not when desire is ruling them... It implies they won't be doing it anytime soon right ?

That is there Laa but coming to think of it, apart from doing IT, they have done most of it. So in a moment of weakness they can take it forward, so their will wait when you are ready will go out of the window.

Two pages!

Should I mock you guys a little ;)

A ha ha ha

A/N – I would like to thank everyone who reads and leaves a comment, it is truly encouraging to know the story is well liked. Please don't be unkind by just noting the length of the update, I am aware that you are not compelled to read or comment but my efforts to put across a nice story appears thankless when I read such comments. At the same time, it is very discouraging to note, the silent readers who don't care to comment but keep sending PMs asking me to update soon or include me in the PM list to notify them.

I gave up sending PMs to save time and concentrate on story writing and resorted to emailing readers about the updates. Despite the efforts, I am left feeling unappreciated. Going forward I am not going to send email notifications either. I love writing so will continue to write and post the updates here, if you do like the story let me know on the thread, else read and move on to the next story. My intention is not to offend anybody, but at the same time, I would like you to know, my patience has worn out.

Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND

Did we make anyone jealous with our rangeen raat ;)

*cough*La*cough*Saiyu

K came too late to know how rangeen our ratein used to be ;)

We are not jealous

Humein koi farq nahi padtha

Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND

Two pages!

Should I mock you guys a little ;)

A ha ha ha

Go ahead and mock, I will not send the POL updates to you and Saiyu will not send FS.