Delusional & LID#55[IO] Jaa Chudail Bhag Ja..:P :| - Page 25

So finally I finished ur OS

And its time to comment on it…

Btw why did u write this OS—bolo why?????????

Aur likha bhi then why it was too small???

Accha ow bhi chod- small hua tou hua but itna accha kyun likha?????????

Yesss I loved ur concept

It was wonderful

Mayur got married against their parents wish and they were sorry for it .

They were desperately waiting that their aparents will forgive them as they missed then so much

I loved the way they were passing their moment with cute noke jhok and arguing on baby.. it was supercute

Mayank ws very caring.. I really loved the whole part

U r too good sweety-I swear it was the best

Plz do cont it

I m waiting for next part and do post it on FF section or mjht forum

faria this concept is not fully mine 😊

OMG OMG OMG!!!!

Originally posted by: Irum.

OMG OMG OMG!!!!

Jaya u write a OS or wo bhi mayur pr.

It ws so beautiful.

I loved it .

It ws mayurish .

Tum ne mayur ki cute fight kitne ache se likhe.

It ws too good.

was it ur first OS.

I will be waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: THIS-IS-LIFE

faria this concept is not fully mine 😊

i heard story in my fav radio show so i tried to give mayur version so some concept from that story and some i write my wording

😊

tujhe yeh chhota laga pure 3 pages ka hain MS word ka 😆

i was going to continue but later drop that idea

u wait i will try to update till next week whenever i will be free 😃

thanks for ur comment 😳

@bold- agar apni jaan pyari hai tou aisa karne ka sochna bhi maat

plzzz janu
sonu
monu
plz do cont it

next week??????????? kya tu pagal hai ya hume pagal karna chata hai
plz na- friday update kar de. plz plz plz

Originally posted by: Faria.

@bold- agar apni jaan pyari hai tou aisa karne ka sochna bhi maat

plzzz janu
sonu
monu
plz do cont it

next week??????????? kya tu pagal hai ya hume pagal karna chata hai
plz na- friday update kar de. plz plz plz

Originally posted by: THIS-IS-LIFE

i drop idea to continue for today but i will write 2 part 😊

i will try but cant promise becoz after so long time i am free today so write it

but sunday i will update pakka wala 😃

oki
lekin pakka wala promise yaad rakhna
love ya

Originally posted by: THIS-IS-LIFE

i drop idea to continue for today but i will write 2 part 😊

i will try but cant promise becoz after so long time i am free today so write it

but sunday i will update pakka wala 😃

Faria jan kl tera bank off hai kya?