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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

uska chamcha nhi balke chipkali ke chamche i.e bewde ke bodyguards i wonder ke bhabhi ke bager kese a gaye yeh dono bhabi ke chamche 😛 😳

waise bhi iss party mein toh a hi sakti thi na akhir itv wale toh har saal pray karte hain unki jodi ke liye 😉😳😛 stupids!!!!!!! manhoos!!
aur madam apne JW ke bager ayi thi kya?? hawww!! kitni buri baat hain soulmates ke bager hi a gaye dono...tsk!tsk! huh!!!!!
party ka theme tha kya white??? 😛😉😳


arre haan chipkali ke chamche
bewade ka pata nahi kab kya karde to uski baby sitting ke liye bheja hain usne kyunki chipkali badi shy hain usko sharam aa rahi hogi camera ke samane aane me
ya kya pata gold award ki tarah peeche se aa jaye
aur aisa ho sakta hain akdu JW ke bina aaye na not at all 😉

they are giving competition to fevicol couple 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


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Posted: 12 years ago
Are final hi hai ekdum or tu ek hai jo is manhoos jagh ko chodti hi nahi sirf teri wajah se yaha par aati hun...warna mai kabhi nahi aati yaha par...



That's why i made sanaya my fav. ...She is beautiful ,charming ,gorgeous...and above all she is not among Arti ...So i just love her...
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talliya ...Writers ki biradri main koi to aaaya ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -DreamzGirl-

Are final hi hai ekdum or tu ek hai jo is manhoos jagh ko chodti hi nahi sirf teri wajah se yaha par aati hun...warna mai kabhi nahi aati yaha par...




That's why i made sanaya my fav. ...She is beautiful ,charming ,gorgeous...and above all she is not among Arti ...So i just love her...


ohh really aapka yeh ehsaan main zindagi bhar nahi bhul sakti

khushi (sanaya's character name) ke aansu 😭

yeh jagah manhus nahi hain wo log manhus hain
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -DreamzGirl-

talliya ...Writers ki biradri main koi to aaaya ...

shukriy shukriya and now u can sit and wait for my next part 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: THIS-IS-LIFE

khushi (sanaya's character name) ke aansu 😭

yeh jagah manhus nahi hain wo log manhus hain



LOL LOL LOL
pata nehi kyun tere asu dekh kar mujhe haasi arahe hai

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.



LOL LOL LOL
pata nehi kyun tere asu dekh kar mujhe haasi arahe hai


kyunki aansu khushi ke jo hain 😉
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Mayank was pacing outside OT and he was scare panic and what not and he was praying silently for nupur and their baby's safety and health and was wishing that hope his family was there with him he needed them badly but sigh no use and after sometime he saw nurse came out from OT and he ran towards her and ask her about nupur and baby before nurse could say anything he heard baby's crying and look at nurse and nurse smile at him and said its baby girl and mayank was shock stunned and he came out from his shock and smile ear to ear and then he worry about nupur and ask how is she and she said she is fine just weak after delivery and mayank took breath of relief and ask naurse that could he meet them nurse told him that doctor is checking baby and nupur after that he can meet them but mayank was impatient to meet them and made puppy face nurse giggle on him and said wait for sometime after that he can meet them mayank finally gave up and said ok and he went and sat on bench and called his mom and told her that its baby girl and cut call he doesn't have courage to talk to further and later he was imagining that how will their baby look ??? mayank was imaging baby's look that her eyes might be like nupur big big and her smile will be like him and she will surely have dimple like me and later he grinned and told himself so nupur sharma I won its baby girl and he was grinning and imagining that how will he tease nupur this chain of thought broke by nurse she tapped on her shoulder and signal him to go and meet nupur and baby he stood up and thanks to nurse and ran towards nupur ward and first he was nervous to go inside (sare plan pe paani pher diya mayank ne) and after gathering courage he went inside and saw nupur who was looking pale he felt bad nupur slowly open her eyes and saw towards mayank who was standing at the door and she signal him to come towards her, mayank slowly come towards nupur feeling happy and nervous both and he reached towards nupur and spread his hand on her hand and ask her

M : Nupur how are you feeling now ???

N : whisper I am fine but feeling weak, how are you more than me you were scare ??? aisa lag raha hain meri nahi tumhari delivery hui hain and she giggled and mayank was showing his fake anger to her and nupur made puppy face and ask him

did u saw baby ??

M : nope nurse will bring her soon and he smile and grinned at nupur and said nupur I won and its baby girl and now its nupur time to glare at him and mayank time to giggle at her and I really want to see her yeh nurse kitna time laga rahi hain nupur giggled at him and mayank glare at her and they heard door to open and here nurse came with baby and lay her beside nupur and left after wishing them

Mayank was looking towards baby and thinking she is so fragile her finger are so small and baby open her eyes and look here and there and mayank though omg her eyes are just like nupur eyes big one and he walk towards baby and mesmerized by her and baby look towards him and smile and mayank was stunned after watching her dimple and his mouth was open and he said to nupur she is beautiful just like you and nupur who was watching him and his act was amzed to see him like that and smiling at him and when he said that she is beautiful and she nodded at him shyly.

Mayank want to hold baby but he was scared becoz she is so fragile and small her fingers are so small he forward his hand but took it back as soon as possible he is scare that he cant hold his own baby properly and nupur was smiling at him and thinking that THE MAYANK SHARMA is scare to hold his own baby lol mayank bhi na she called mayank and mayank look towards her and ask what ???

N : mayank come and sit here mayank nodded his head and went towards nupur but didn't stop looking at baby sit beside nupur and nupur hold baby in her hand and ask mayank to forward his both hand and mayank did what nupur told him and nupur hold baby in his hand but he was scare and look towards nupur and signal her that he cant he is scare but nupur blink her eyes and gave courage to him and show her faith that he can not hurt his love one and mayank was feeling less scare and slowly hold baby and he felt amazing heavenly it seems he got everything in his life and he smile at her and look towards nupur and blink his eyes and said thanks to her. He hold baby properly and shifted towards nupur and kiss on her forehead and thanks her for this beautiful gift and nupur said same to him and later he became comfortable and started to play with baby and here nupur was waiting for her turn to hold baby and play with baby but mayank was so much engrossed with baby that he forgot to do that lol and nupur called mayank twice but yeh janab kuch sune tab na phir usne chillakar bulaya MAYANK, he came out from his own world and look towards nupur and show frown on her face and he asked what ???

Nupur : mayank dekh rahi hoon baby ke aane se tum mujhe bhul gaye ho aur yeh baby mera bhi hain aur mujhe bhi uske saath khelna hain

Mayank realized his mistake and hold his ear and ask for sorry and nupur smiled at him and said its ok and later he hold baby to nupur and nupur hold her baby and sat beside her and was looking at them and nupur look towards him ask what ??? he smiled at her and shook his headand side hugged her and said my family my small world and nupur smile at him and kissed on his cheek and said my mayu and said my family is still incomplete so my fairytale love story and become sad and mayank too

N : mayank did u inform ma and papa about baby ??

M : hmmm haan

N : what did they say ?? are they coming to meet baby ?? she asked hoping against hope

M : mayank look at her and feel guilty and said I told maa about baby but I didn't talk further becoz I was not in condition to bear rejection

Nupur understand his dilemma and hug him and pat his back and said its ok and smile at him and he smile at her and there convo was broken by nurse

Nurse : sorry to disturb you but mr. sharma doctor is calling you at his cabin and she left

Mayank look towards nupur and signal her to sleep and kept baby in cradle and went towards nupur and kissed on her forehead and said I will be back soon, mayank was worried about nupur and pray that hope so everything she is all right and went towards doctor cabin

M : may I come in doctor ??

D : yes mr. sharma and mayank went inside and sat on chair

M : doctor is everything all right means nupur and baby both ??? he asked scared and worriedly

D : mr. sharma no need to worried both are fine but nupur and baby both are still weak so u have to take care both of them u know that during pregnancy nupur was weak so here are prescription for both and take care of them after delivery nupur is really weak and she will be tired soon even after walking from 1 room to another room and becoz of that baby is also weak so it will take time to them to come out from weakness and smile at him for assurance and mayank smiled at him faintly and took prescription and thanking him went towards nupur ward.

He knew nupur is ready with question he sighed and getting all courage enter in to room and as usual he entered and nupur throw all her question to him

N : mayank doctor ne kya kaha ??

Sab theek to hain na ???

Baby to theek hain na ??

Mayank tum chup kyun ho kuch bole kyun nahi

Mayank bolo na

Mayank tumhari chuppimujhe dara rahi hain

MAYANK

M : mayank sigh at her and told her main tab bolunga jab tumhari rajdhani express rukegi and nupur glare at him and mayank sat beside nupur and hold her hand nupur was impatiently waiting for him to continue and she open her mouth to ask another question before that he kept his finger on her lips and hushed her and said everything is fine doctor called me for your medicine which u have to take everyday and grinned at him and nupur frown at him

N : mayank main ab medicine kyun loon ab to baby bhi theek hain mujhse nahi khayi jayegi medicine and she pout

M : nupur u have to take medicine for ur health for me please

N : she gave up and said ok and pout and mayank smile at her antics and gave quick peck on her lips and she was stunned and look towards door if any one watching them or not and shyly said mayank tum bhi na

M : maine kya kiya nupur ??? he asked innocently

N : mayank show her fake anger

M : laugh at her and hugged her and she hug him back and look towards their baby and smiled at her.

After 2 day they discharged nupur and mayank took them at home and do all ritual which has to be done by elder but keeping that aside they were happy for their baby

Mayank knew that now he has to take care two babies nupur and their baby. He doesnt want nupur to stress anything and want proper care of baby and he can not trust anyone and wish his family was there but he stop thinking that took nupur towards their bedroom and kept baby in cradle and started all his work.

There was namkaran function after 2 days and mayank celebrated lavishly but keeping mind not to stress nupur in this function. He called their parents and were hoping for them for arrival and again and again watching towards door that they might come but their hope was vanish when function came to end and baby's name they gave anjali who brought happiness in their life.

(Strange they didn't fought on name na becoz they decided that if its baby girl name will be given by mayu and for baby boy by nupur)

After function, mayank signal nupur to go to take rest

M : nupur please go and have rest you need it

N : nupur frown mayank main jab se hospital se aayi hoon tab se yeh line sun sunkar pak gayi hoon aur main bore ho gayi thak gayi aram kar karke please na mayank mujhe help karne do

M : ok nupur do whatever u want don't listen what I say he said irritating

N : ok fine main aram karti hoon gussa mat karo lao anjali mujhe de do

M : good girl tum jao room me main lekar aata hoon anjali ko

Nupur went towards their room and mayank brought anjali their and nupur was playing with anjali and mayank completed his work and with tiredness he came to room and sat on bed

N : mayank why r u bothering urself and giving stress u r handling home me anjali and office u also need rest, mayank please we can hire aaya who can take care anjali and home and I am here na please mayank agree with me

M : nupur kisne kaha ke main thak jata hoon aur stress hota hoon nahi mujhe bahut accha lagta hain jab main tumhara aur anjali ka khayal rakhta hoon, jab bhi main thakke ghar aata hoon tab tumhe aur anjali ko dekhakr meri thakan mit jati hain aur mujhe accha lagta hain tum dono ka khayal rakhta hain uar yeh mera haq hain aur mera haq koi nahi chin sakta samji

N : smile at him and nod her head ,to mr. sharma mujhe bhi tumhara khayal rakhne do na please patting her eyelids

M : shook her head nupur jab tum theek ho jaogi to main tumhe shanti se nahi baithane denewala tumhe sab kaam karna hoga main mera badla lunga to abhi rest le lo baad main rest ke liye minnate karogi mere paas mayank made evil face

N : hit him on his shoulder and hug him and said I love you and I am waiting for that day

M : I love you too

Suddenly anjali started to cry and they look at each other and laugh mayank took her in his hand and saw anjali did her deed means shu shu yaar hehehe

Mayank brought her nappy and trying to change her nappy but it was mess its not his fault he is new na and nupur smile at him and shook her head and ask him to give nappy to her mayank recluntly gave to her and nupur show him how to do it lol its not first time he is trying from last 2 days he is learning from nupur but still couldn't learn and gave up.

M : i can not do anything without ur help and I am so bad in this matter he pouted and she smile at him

N : don't worry mayank you will learn

M : nupur yes I will learn after 2 3 kids

N : nupur mouth was open 2 3 kids nahi re baba

M : kyun nahi nupur and looking at nupur seductively

N : mayank tum bhi na jao yaha se anjali aur mujhe aram ki jarurat hain jao tum apna kaam karo and turn her face to hide her shy

M : mayank shook her head and kiss on her cheek and went to washroom to freshen up

After he came out from washroom saw nupur and anjali were playing with each other mayank smile looking at heavenly scene and his phone rang he saw and shock to see name on his phone screen and nupur called him and ask him why he is not picking his phone and he came out from shock and nod her head and went outside room and pick up his call

M : shaking voice he… hel… hello ma.. maa

SA : mayank main 2 din main aa rahi hoon waha

Before mayank could say anything phone was disconnected (SA did same what mayank did in hospital)

Mayank was standing their shock he was not sure is he awake or dreaming ???

He came out from his shock land and went inside bed room and nupur ask about call he thought should he tell her or not ??? what if mom wont come and nupur will be upset again so he dropped his idea to tell her and said it was from office and nupur didn't question him more though she knew he is lying but didn't force him and nod her head and back to play with anjali.

Next day, mayank had to go for shopping for home, nupur and baby, it has been 1 hrs he was roaming in mall and when he came back to his car he realized that he forgot his phone at car and he check his phone and saw 5 missed call of nupur

He was worried that why nupur call him hope everything is fine and he called her and nupur pick her phone after long bell

M : nupur what happen is everything all right are u fine and anjali ???

N : sobbing couldn't speak

M : worriedly nupur what happen ????

N : mayank anjali is not responding and started crying badly

M : mayank was hell shocked

Precap :

D : u brought her late

M : nupur cant see anjali like this

Edited by THIS-IS-LIFE - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome OS DI..

loved it lodsss
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee

thank you

awww...poor MN
bt bhag kar shadi ki thi kya?? very bad!!!
i don't like it!!! so punishment toh milegi hi

ya har galti ki punishment hoti hain 😉
waise yeh bhagkar shadi karne ka matlab kya hota hain 😕
bicharo ne court main marriage ki aur wo bhi chair pe baithkar 😆

bt loved that cute nok-jhok of MN abt baby girl V/S baby boy 😆😳
bt ismein bhi mere SRK ki burai ki yeh Mayank bhi na 😛😆
bt i loved that

to koi bhi upset hoga nupur mayu ke samne mera srk jo karti rehti hain koi bhi apne partner ke pehle pyar se jalega

n awww...Nupur ko upset dekh he agrred so sweet
loved it lodsss

aakhir mayank itna pyar jo karta hain apni nupsie se 😳

n lolzzz 😆 typical idea 🤣 bt it alwaysss works on parents 😆
😲 what is this pre-cape???
yeha kahin 3 Idiots ke scene toh nhi dekhne ko milega??
i hope ke unke parents bhi aye
jaldi jaldi continue karna
eagerly waiting di
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss DI...🤗🤗🤗


haan lekin parents bhi kam nahi hote
update padhna phir pata chalega ke kya hain 😉
kar diya yeh part ab next part ke liye 1 week rukna padega

ps: waise yeh ap FanFic par bhi toh post kar sakti thi agar 3some stupidsome forum par na karna chaho toh 😉😆

i will post in 3some forum mere mayur ka bhi haq banta hain 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

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