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asrcraze

@asrcraze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#831

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

You know Laa, I always hoped this story was produced by Balaji, the quality would be amazing.

They'd have good clothes other than that...?

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 13 years ago

#832

My update is 2300 words long! 😭

I dunno what to do

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

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Posted: 13 years ago

#833

Originally posted by: farah53

By now Khushi would have had three make overs, which she would lok totally rocking in, but at the same time, she'd be married off to Shyam, NK & Akaash & she'd be a moter of seven 25years olds!!Plus a couple of miscarriages thrown in the middle...🤢

😆

we love kekta so much

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 13 years ago

#834

Fari when is SAY coming and my comments to FT. My own frnds do this to me. Am broozed. Broozed. Broozed

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 13 years ago

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#835

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
My update is 2300 words long! 😭

I dunno what to do

Why are you worried? The SS I wrote was over 3500 words each, well almost.

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
My update is 2300 words long! 😭

I dunno what to do

thats good!!

why are you complaining>????

my readers 90% time complain that I write short updates but I can't make them longer

it's a gift Saiyu truly

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Farah

@farah53

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#837

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
My update is 2300 words long! 😭

I dunno what to do

The update for SAY I wrote inthe afternoon is 9 word pages long & I still haven't told a crucial part I want in this update from which the next one follow!😕I'd have to spend a hell of a time just cutting down lines!!!& hottie is truly right,his family is truly mad!!They just wont shut up!!Every character demands a dialogue or two!😡

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#838

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
Fari when is SAY coming and my comments to FT. My own frnds do this to me. Am broozed. Broozed. Broozed

😆

you love me very much I know iss liye I know you'll ignore this

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#839

Originally posted by: asrcraze

They'd have good clothes other than that...?

The whole packaging is what I wanted. The clothes, set, BD use was sad, really sad. See Ekta had her fair share of success and that has to be for a reason.

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

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Posted: 13 years ago

#840

Originally posted by: farah53

The update for SAY I wrote inthe afternoon is 9 word pages long & I still haven't told a crucial part I want in this update from which the next one follow!😕I'd have to spend a hell of a time just cutting down lines!!!& hottie is truly right,his family is truly mad!!They just wont shut up!!Every character demands a dialogue or two!😡

Fari do me a favor

I know you'll cut down

but always pm me the unedited version

I like reading long updates

truly

so before cutting it pm me😃