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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
I gotta go sorry :-p
EXAMSSS

grrr

will be chatting all day tomo :-D
bye for now [ today] LOL

sorry guys :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
hey appy,
tell ur plot

ok tc bubye vani
nd BEST OF LUCK
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
we should actually decided the whole concept first i mean what is the motive behind the story? coz unless we know where we are aiming to end it we cannot start.

there has to be a solid theme behind this ok?

before that i just wanted to let you guys know certain things about me so that you all can understand my thinking process and it think you should also share yours so that we understand each other well. this will help us to develop the plot

1) I always like stories where the leads ka milan last mein hota hai
2) Chapters shouldnot be predictable (to some extent it is ok but very much predictible)
3) Occasional twists are important to hold back the readers
4) Cliff hangers are must atleast once in 4 chapters
5) as this story needs witty converation i trust both of you as both are witty 😳
6) there has to be a dhansu theme.

@sandy right now vani and me were working on vani's theme. this is her baby so i give full right to her regarding what to do. as far as my thinking on this story was what if we include thier adelocense teasing. i was thinnking what if we include some cute and naughty stories of their childhood? it will built up the characters. now as you are also a part of this story we want your opinion as to how you see the future of the story? what are your criteria? how to make this more interesting and gripping?

@vani we should freeze the theme as fast as possible then concentrate on the chapters what say?


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Appy_Indy

we should actually decided the whole concept first i mean what is the motive behind the story? coz unless we know where we are aiming to end it we cannot start.


there has to be a solid theme behind this ok?

before that i just wanted to let you guys know certain things about me so that you all can understand my thinking process and it think you should also share yours so that we understand each other well. this will help us to develop the plot

1) I always like stories where the leads ka milan last mein hota hai
2) Chapters shouldnot be predictable (to some extent it is ok but very much predictible)
3) Occasional twists are important to hold back the readers
4) Cliff hangers are must atleast once in 4 chapters
5) as this story needs witty converation i trust both of you as both are witty 😳
6) there has to be a dhansu theme.

@sandy right now vani and me were working on vani's theme. this is her baby so i give full right to her regarding what to do. as far as my thinking on this story was what if we include thier adelocense teasing. i was thinnking what if we include some cute and naughty stories of their childhood? it will built up the characters. now as you are also a part of this story we want your opinion as to how you see the future of the story? what are your criteria? how to make this more interesting and gripping?

@vani we should freeze the theme as fast as possible then concentrate on the chapters what say?



well appy my style of writing u all know isn't different then yours maybe at two or threepoints i m different.
about theme thing
i get arnav is flirtatious nd love to tease Arnav..
what abt kushi's inner feeling the prolongue ns teaser i read there khushi hated him but not in literal meaning i m does she has any feelings for him or is she still same like arnav no feelings just attraction
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
appy i'll be back in 15 minutes my mom is after me to have breakfast lol duh its lunch time
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
@ sandy if you ask me what i would like i think i will like to see khushi's starts liking him post marriage

pre marriage she wont be hating him as such but she would be gaga over him as well. well like normal girls she will be irritated with guys. i mean the kind of rowdyness and naughtyness in guys she will not like it and she always wants to stay away from guys. but arnav will be hell bend on teasing her pulling her legs. so lets say her childhood will only have memories of arnav teasing her and he getting irritated with all those things. etc etc. but during their teenage those teasings will not be restircted to mare light hearted teasings. we can write something on jealousy maybe arnav flirting with some other girls and taunting something bad to khushi. maybe her incapabilities.

what say? just random thoughts 🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
sorryi m back...i had to go else my mom would be after me, she was ready to murder me.

perfect liked ur concept.
i think we should start first chapter with marriage rituals what say
in asian muslims In pakistan especially we start marriage rasam's from ubtan/haldi, then mayoon,/mehndi females from male side comes to girls house...but we can make a modern change here like boy nd girl's mayoon mehndi together. Both sitting together and rasam carrying on frm both sides.
A big pan leave placed on their hands ladies apply mehndi on it.
apply little oil in hairs.
feed sweets to them.

the most amazing think in mayoon is the mehndi thaals and dresswhich is brought by saasurals .
i'll help u guyz this wid update if u guyz like for mayoon nd mehndi and ubta

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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
woww sandy ur awesome...ur sucha nice help to me and appy...the rituals of muslims u kno abt them so we can actually write better :)

Hey im in love with this songgg

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zGgs89UeWt4[/YOUTUBE]

i gotta go now LOL
will be back tomo...now im signing off for today..wish me luck for my exam which is tomo n i havent studied anything LOL :-p
happy discussing :)
Love
Vani


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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
VANI I M MUSLIM ALHUMDULILLAH.
ND FROM PAK

SURE DEAR TC ND BEST OF LUCK
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
@sandy i have no clue about muslim wedding. so i trust you. we should go ahead with the wedding initially that what i told vani also in pm when we were discussing our first chapter before you came on board 😆

@vani my best wishes.


Edited by Appy_Indy - 13 years ago

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