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SANDY

@.Sandy.

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

OK SO WHAT U GUYZ DECIDE ABT FIRST CHAPTER FIRST CHAPTER WE WILL WRITE ALL THREE SO WE ALL COULD GET A PROPER BASED STORY SONEXT TIMEWE ALL COULD CARRY ON WHAT SAY

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 16

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

@sandy vani and me have discussed something on pm yesterday but i am not able to find out right now so i think i will request vani to send it across to you. i mean how to start the chapter.

jitna mujhe yaad hai its like

khushi is entering her house

she meets her mom

she is as usual pissed of with arnav's teasing in high school.

lets make both of same age i.e. 18 what way?

her mom tells her to go and deliver the mithai ka dibba to arnav's mom

khushi doesnot know that her's and arnav's marriage is fixed

@vani's pov

khushi's dad died in an accident long back and khushi's mom her to get married to arnav for her future security. all the elders agreed to the thing and both the families are in good terms. as her father died her mother was no able to support her family for long

@my pov

so her mom decided to give away her daughter to them for her daughters future and also to less burden herself.

khushi goes to their hows and take all the elder's blessings and hugs arnav's mom and gives the mithai.

she blesses her and tells something related to their marriage indirectly which khushi failed to understand.

then when she was moving out other ladies who already came to know about their marriage caught hold of her and brought her inside. khushi was clue less about it.

@vani's pov (mixed with mine)

then she came to know about their marriage and panicking she rushes up to arnav's room to tell him about the whole situation where she finds him flirting with some random girl. arnav was about to kiss the girl when he sees khushi and his evil head started working. khushi narrates the whole marriage thing to him (he is also clueless) but then he starts to irritate her more.

@me

hopeless she runs back and questions her mom about the whole thing and she says she doesnot have a choice and all. sad khushi agreed what her mother has to say. we can put about the dowry thing (arnav's family refuses to take dowry. they only want khushi and nothing else) i dont know muslim's meye yeh system hota hi ki nahi.

@vani

then we can include the prologue scene the shwal one i meant and the wrist band thing. that can be eid or something or some festive occasion.

i think this will be enough for chap one.

@me

chapter two can start with khushi getting dressed and arnav sees her and again starts irritate her. then the teaser part. and wrist band part which i totally forgot what vani wrote and here in chapter two we can have some flashbacks of their childhood arnav irritating khushi, she is crying etc etc nicely blended with the current situation. (maybe we can include first part of the prologue).

SANDY WE WANT YOUR OPINION. ZARURI NAHI HAI whatever i have blabbered till now we have to incorporate that. we can have something totally different. and we want your input. how you want it. share your views after all all of us are equal here.

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 16

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

@sandy we need to decide on the plot most importantly. unless we freeze the plot as it what we want we cannot take the story.

i mean hoga kya ultimately? what is the theme and all.

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

APPY I HAVE NO OBJECTION WITH THIS PLOT.

ITS AMAZING AND PERFECT WE SHOULD GO A HEAD WITHT HIS ONE.

DOWRY THING IN ISLAM DOWRY IS STRICTLY NOT ALLOWED.

HAQ MEHAR AMOUNT IS FIXED,

Haq Mehr is anything that is the gift of nikaah given to the woman by the man...
she can ask for any amount she pleases (ofcourse being a reasonable amount)...
its better to be paid at time of nikaah or whenever the woman asks for it...

I THINK WE SHOULD STEP AHEAD WID FIRST CHAPTER I'LL WRITE MOM ND DAUGHTER PART IF U GUYZ WANT TO DIVIDE PARTS

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 16

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

nahi sandy

by the theme i meant ultimately story meye hoga kya?

marriage, rasams, nok jhok, bullying etc etc is ok. but theme kya hai? where will the story end? what is the future story?

we have only discussed the type of story, the characterization but whats next? after marriage kya hoga? unknown feelings kaise pata chalega?

am i able to explain myself?

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

hey I am here for some minutes.

Ok u shud kno somethin abt my wriotings-

they have alot of funny things

I can only write on arshi and not another characters, my FF updates centers around arshi and ONLY arshi..so better give me such parts only whr i can write on arshi as im good at it

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Appy_Indy
nahi sandy

by the theme i meant ultimately story meye hoga kya?

marriage, rasams, nok jhok, bullying etc etc is ok. but theme kya hai? where will the story end? what is the future story?

we have only discussed the type of story, the characterization but whats next? after marriage kya hoga? unknown feelings kaise pata chalega?

am i able to explain myself?

yeah...

I think after marriage arnav still goes to college and all and Khushi is targeted again by his frens and all...but there wud be cute fights and things like khushi cookin for him and all...they get intimate too 😳

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

I GET UR POINT APPY,

DO U REMEMBERANY FILM IN WHICH LEADS ARE CHILDHOOD FRIEND

MUJHAY EK YAAD AYE MAIN NAY PYAAR KYON KIYA BUT IT WILL TURN MY STORY.

OK WE CAN TAKE ARNAV AS CARLESS HUSBAND ND KHUSHI CARING WIFE...TYPICAL HO JAYE GA.

BUT WE CAN MAKE LITTLE CHANGE LIKE

I M GETTING CONFUSE WITH THEME

ERM...LET ME THINK FOR A WHILE

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: GodnMe.Foreva
yeah...
I think after marriage arnav still goes to college and all and Khushi is targeted again by his frens and all...but there wud be cute fights and things like khushi cookin for him and all...they get intimate too 😳

YEH KHUSHI GETS JEALOUS TOO WHEN ARNAV FLIRT WID OTHER GIRLS AND TAKE KHUSHI LIGHTLY??? IF I M NOT SOUNDING DUMB

I FEEL LIKE HIT MY SELF FOR BEING SO DUMB

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 16

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

@sandy

what do you think the write thing should be? dividing the parts write it then pm and join it together?

then we should also keep in mind simple language so that the parts reads same to the readers not from three different writers.

i am fine with anything actually.

you can write the mom-daughter and the ladies part

i can write the first part and terrace part.

vani can take over the nok jhok @ shawl part and elaborate on the same.

what say?

@sandy there will be no hurry in posting this FF. no problem if we post it late. we all have our own FFs. so no pressure.

but if someone feels like updating she can do that just mentioning the chapter to others and go ahead. we shouldnot restrict anything right? for example if i feel like writing one whole chapter while you are both are busy i will be updating but before that i will send the entire chapter to both of you for your approval and corrections. same with both of you.