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waterunder11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1061

Originally posted by: molten_lava
no. I'm here. I was just reading a random os :/

yeah, I think experience will make you write better. :/

I know a gazillion mature os's...would you like to read them? ;-)

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waterunder11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1062

Originally posted by: molten_lava
no. I'm here. I was just reading a random os :/

yeah, I think experience will make you write better. :/

hmm well then go get married lava! 😃

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Targaryen

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Ah ah ah ah so i just started reading it and i was right about abhaas wanting to be the sole owner of all the money 😃

oh yeah baby 😎

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: waterunder11

I know a gazillion mature os's...would you like to read them? ;-)

lol! no. I have read quite a few. I only liked some of them. But the problem with me is vocab. I hardly get those amazing words to describe a scene. And that's where my shortcomings come into the picture.

I sucked in english at school and when I write such scenes, I realise why i sucked :/

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1065

Originally posted by: waterunder11

hmm well then go get married lava! 😃

Errmmm... that won't happen. I think I'll use my ultimate super power of my imagination and try to come up with something. Maybe not now, a couple of years later.😆

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waterunder11

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: molten_lava

lol! no. I have read quite a few. I only liked some of them. But the problem with me is vocab. I hardly get those amazing words to describe a scene. And that's where my shortcomings come into the picture.
I sucked in english at school and when I write such scenes, I realise why i sucked :/

yeh they all use the same words: suck, nibble, warm, wet, hard... 😉

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: loveydovey
Ah ah ah ah so i just started reading it and i was right about abhaas wanting to be the sole owner of all the money 😃

oh yeah baby 😎

yeah. he's like the shyam of the serial actually.😆

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

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