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fiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: ...Tich...
haan dear.. i'm maha confused..
btw how many parts are you planning this ff?
and who is writing the first part?

i typed next part already u do ch2 ok

um dont know will go with the flow ...lets c

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Tich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

ok.. btw did you read all the comments.

many readers have already come to the conclusion that dhokha is by viren. That's why i said to change this VirMan FF thing.

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fiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

how did they get that dhoka ...that viren is at fault lol let them think its good suprise for them haha did u get the 1st pm

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Tich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

yes, i got the second part too...

i have so many doubts.

if virat loves maanvi then why he'll make her mistress and not wife?

And he'll offer her mistress position and she'll accept?

moreover she is pregnant with viren's second baby isnt it?

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fiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

check the last pm ... ok abt the virats love ...he intentions are basically ...get maanvi by hook or crook ...n maanvi has miscarriage with in next few chapter will in turn bring more bitterness between viren and her

then virat will take advatage of this ... the something will happen taht will force maanvi to accept virat doown market agrrement ... virat love is his junoon he wants her ...at n e cost ... mr viren isnt as innocent as he looks

but bichara virat spikes both jeevika ans virens drink .. which in turn they sleep together ...n out of fear of manan jeevika lies viren forced her ...they will make maanvi hurt

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Tich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

just now muskaan dies and then manvi has her miscarriage.. uff...

first of all what was the need to show manvi pregnant again.. so much of tragedy... ok i loved this.. enough to accept virat's offer.

let us make this a planned ff. instead of assumptions like RDK..

i mean let us write this like a film script instead of a tv show script.

we'll plan it in a perfect story line.

with story, number of chapters. when will the truth be revealed and all..

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Tich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

fiza i'm sending you the pm of my version .. it's yours and annies story completely. i have only rearranged it.

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fiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

add what ever uwant ... its ur ff too ..i thought that too but her writing style is like lets go with the flow ... idk i never planed a ff lik ethat beofre but i dont mind ...oh n muskaan doesnt die ... she is just kidnapped

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Tich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

yup i'm online sorry typing the draft.. btw check ur pm..

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fiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#190

i read it ... n sent it ... i told u few things ...so might be easy ..she wont lose the baby right away ... since viat will find out she is expect he will act if he is the father n care for her ...all the time this will piss viren off ...he confronts hin to stay away from manvi ... but he acts innocent says main kay kiya bhai he notices maanvi uncomfortable with viat closeness

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