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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#821

ok then ye lo....ye bhi short hai...sorry...😔

Wo nahi jaanti thi ki wo kya kar rahi hai, usse bas yahi laga ki wo is duniya me ab akeli ho gayi hai, kyunki uska pyar use chodkar chal gaya hai. Bas ab wo bhi yahan nahi reh sakti, use apne pya ke paas jaana hai. Usne ek baar zaroor socha ki uske parivaar ka kya hoga, par shayad apne aap ko khatam karke wo thik hi kar rahi hai, kyunki wo ye nahi chahti ki uske kaaran koi uske parivaar par ungli uthaye.

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Ek ladki seedhiyon se bhaagkar neeche aati hai'.

Simi: Rajji, dhyan se''ye kya kar rahi hai''aaram see utar naa

Rajji: Maa, main thik hun, aap bas aise hi gussa karti rehti ho',

Simi: Ab tu hi bata rano, kya karun mai isss ladki ka, aaj iski sagai hai, aur ye dekh abhi bhi bacchon ki tarah'

Rano: Kya didi aap bhi, apne ghar jaayegi to sab sambhal legi

Rajji: Aap logon ko to naa, pata nahi kyun itni jaldi padi hai meri shaadi ki

(apni maa ko piche se gale lagaakar)

Simi: Dekh le, hame koi jaldi nahi hai, tu kahe to''

Rajji: Maine aisa to nahi kaha (hiding her face)

Rano: Haaye, meri bacchi kitna sharmaati hai'

Simi: Meri laado''(kissing her)

Rajji: Waise geet kahan hai? Abhi tak to usse aa jaana chahiye tha?

Rano: Darji gaye hain usko lene. Kahin baithi hogi rooth kar.

Rajji: Rooth kar? Kyun? Kya hua?

Simi: Kal wo darji ne usse daanth diya tha naa, isliye wo naaraz hai.

Rajji: Kal ki baat ko lekar abhi bhi roothi hui hai wo? Ye ladki bhi naa'uff'

Rano: Teri hi behen hai, aur waise bhi darji gaye hai naa usko lene, abhi aate hi honge wo dono.

Simi: Cha lab tub hi jaa, tyar ho jaa, wo log aate hi honge.

(Rajji starts to run from there, towards the stair)

Simi: Arre dhyan se, aur ab bahar mat nikalna, jab main lene aaon, tab hi naa, sun rahi hai naa

Rajji: haan maa, sab sun liya (disappears while saying this)

Simi: uff'ye ladki'

Rano: (while laughing) Chaliye didi, aur bhi kaam karne hain

Simi: Haan chal, nahi to darji phir aake puchne lag jaayenge ' Simi puttar saara kaam ho gaya (in darji's tone)

Both the women enter other room while laughing

FLASHBACK ENDS

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#822

At different times throughout the day,

I find I'm missing you.

And I wonder if, perhaps a bit,

Maybe you miss me too.

I miss you in the shower,

When I'm in there all alone.

And when I want to hear your voice,

And call you on hte phone.

When I check my e-mail

And find there's nothing there.

I can't help it that I worry,

And I put you in my prayers.

I think by now it's safe to say,

That I miss you very much,

And my heart will never be the same

Since it suffered Cupids touch.

Krystle Frame

this for Maaneeet missing each other

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roopali

@rsroopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#823

jyoti nice story

gud nite every1

byeeeeeee

sweet dreamssssssss

Edited by rsroopali - 14 years ago

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komlika

@komlika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#824

PART 14: 😛 LAST PART OF DAY.....SORRY 😳

Geet reach at car……..n………sit inside

G: chale

P: not so fast……..geet……..giving her smile

G: par kyu……….we got everything……checking to see if they miss anything

P: I knew it…….said all upset

G: what did u know……..all confuse

P: u forgot ur promise……..

G: which promise Pari……..trying to remember

P: aaaaaahhhhhhh……the promise to tell me about what u were doing in store smiling at MR. totally DREAMmmmmmmyyyyyy

Geet goes into flashback remembering her encounter with maan n smile ……..

G: self talk……geet what is wrong with u……..how can u think like tht……par……what par……..HE is OTHER Man…….. ur married remember……….tht too for past 3 yrs (girls I change yrs from 2 to 3 just to avoid confusion n make story realistic)………yeh paap hai geet……..aur waise bhi who toh sadu, akdur, batameez insan tha……..he yell at u…….tum par woh chilaya……tum sab kuch bhulgaye…….how could u GEET……..nahi………meine kuch nahi bhuli………woh woh …….bilkul DUS DANAV tha………yeah…….yeh naam thik hai,………DD…..DUSDANAV………

Pari was waiting for geet to say something………n………show her completely lost…….geet expression was changing from smile to annoyed to guilt to anger n back to annoyed

P: geet……..kaha khogaye

G: hah

P: geet seriously r u OK?..........tum ajeeb behave kyu kar rahi ho?

G: nahi……ha…..mera matlab hai……..im fine

Pari gave her "IFYOUSAYSO" LOOK

P: SO

G: ………..SO....... what?

Pari roll her eyes n remind her about promise again………..geet than tell pari about what happen at caf n why she was at store

P: OMG

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#825

@jyoti
first ek aur baar sorry kaha na
we r friends dear so no sorry.
come to the update.
awesome part. lovely flashback.
continue karna kal iyaad se🤗

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#826

@kate beautiful poem
@priya awesome part.
continue soon.

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#827

ok then ye lo....ye bhi short hai...sorry...😔

Wo nahi jaanti thi ki wo kya kar rahi hai, usse bas yahi laga ki wo is duniya me ab akeli ho gayi hai, kyunki uska pyar use chodkar chal gaya hai. Bas ab wo bhi yahan nahi reh sakti, use apne pya ke paas jaana hai. Usne ek baar zaroor socha ki uske parivaar ka kya hoga, par shayad apne aap ko khatam karke wo thik hi kar rahi hai, kyunki wo ye nahi chahti ki uske kaaran koi uske parivaar par ungli uthaye.

FLASHBACK

Ek ladki seedhiyon se bhaagkar neeche aati hai'.

Simi: Rajji, dhyan se''ye kya kar rahi hai''aaram see utar naa

Rajji: Maa, main thik hun, aap bas aise hi gussa karti rehti ho',

Simi: Ab tu hi bata rano, kya karun mai isss ladki ka, aaj iski sagai hai, aur ye dekh abhi bhi bacchon ki tarah'

Rano: Kya didi aap bhi, apne ghar jaayegi to sab sambhal legi

Rajji: Aap logon ko to naa, pata nahi kyun itni jaldi padi hai meri shaadi ki

(apni maa ko piche se gale lagaakar)

Simi: Dekh le, hame koi jaldi nahi hai, tu kahe to''

Rajji: Maine aisa to nahi kaha (hiding her face)

Rano: Haaye, meri bacchi kitna sharmaati hai'

Simi: Meri laado''(kissing her)

Rajji: Waise geet kahan hai? Abhi tak to usse aa jaana chahiye tha?

Rano: Darji gaye hain usko lene. Kahin baithi hogi rooth kar.

Rajji: Rooth kar? Kyun? Kya hua?

Simi: Kal wo darji ne usse daanth diya tha naa, isliye wo naaraz hai.

Rajji: Kal ki baat ko lekar abhi bhi roothi hui hai wo? Ye ladki bhi naa'uff'

Rano: Teri hi behen hai, aur waise bhi darji gaye hai naa usko lene, abhi aate hi honge wo dono.

Simi: Cha lab tub hi jaa, tyar ho jaa, wo log aate hi honge.

(Rajji starts to run from there, towards the stair)

Simi: Arre dhyan se, aur ab bahar mat nikalna, jab main lene aaon, tab hi naa, sun rahi hai naa

Rajji: haan maa, sab sun liya (disappears while saying this)

Simi: uff'ye ladki'

Rano: (while laughing) Chaliye didi, aur bhi kaam karne hain

Simi: Haan chal, nahi to darji phir aake puchne lag jaayenge ' Simi puttar saara kaam ho gaya (in darji's tone)

Both the women enter other room while laughing

FLASHBACK ENDS

love it but pls be mercy with Kate i'm in hindi next pls english sweet heart if dont mind yu can add hindi but not much pls pls my dear awesome ❤️👏🤗

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#828

@ meri pyari beti super awesome part❤️👍🏼 @rakhi thank yu sweet heart MAUH🤗

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#829

@All ,pls if this cc will cross 149 page then make another cc and pu the link of this cc and rules and member list and index in page 1
and if any of u open tit then pls write the maaneet express 2 in title
chalo me going for sleep now
good night ,sweet dreams.
love u all

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komlika

@komlika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#830

@ RAKHI, KATEMASI............thank you 🤗

@JYOTI..........tht was awesome story 👏

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