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-Nayab-

@-Nayab-

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#71

@Dhruvi... That good? 😆... I admit this is the first time I'm actually semi satisfied with any of the Bamon parts I've written but so many *thuds* 🤣... Most of the credit goes to you though seeing as they were your suggestions 😛...

@Yaz... Thanks 😃...

I'm happy with this part because for once I feel like I've been able to keep the "essence" of Damon's character 😆...

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-DhruviBear(:

@-dhruvi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#72

Too lazy to edit, so my review shall be here.

okay Nayu you solved my biggest worry. I wanted Bonnie to be emotion and hug Damon but I was worried I set up the next writer to be OOC. But you were flawless with it. I love how regardless of her emotions running high, she was able to be snarky with Damon, which is Bonnie to the T. I loved Damon here too. Awesome job love.

Off-Topic: So get this, I was taking my sister to the mall for something she needed and as I was driving I was thinking how the other kayaks are MIA still, and then thoughts trailed to how they could have made-out till they got then and then Damon break the good news to her. In a way I hate myself for writing Damon to spoil the news too soon, LMAO.

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#73

ohmygosh Nay, that is amazing. I love that you kept the Bamon snarkiness intact despite the high emotions. Wonderful! (: send me the PM anyways, though I don't think I'll be writing the next part. (:

D - ohmygosh, you just want smexy scenes between the two all the time don't you?

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-DhruviBear(:

@-dhruvi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#74

^ heyheyhey, you don't? I mean of course writing it wouldn't make sense but a girl can dream, right?

Besides, it's tv!bamon's fault not mine. I never thought up these types of scenerios for them till I saw the scenes in Isobel. I knew then, there is no turning back. Give me UST once and I'll want that ALL the time, yes please, thank you. (:

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-Nayab-

@-Nayab-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#75

@Radz and Dhruvi...Thanks 😃...

I know... What I had in mind would've been out of character for these two but then I started writing and ended up with that 😆...

Radz... Will do 😆... Don't blame Dhruvi for wanting smexy Bamon scenes 😛... Thank God someone else does to otherwise who would I share my Bamon craziness with? 🤣...

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-DhruviBear(:

@-dhruvi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#76

o0o0o0o Nayu, this OOC writing... is this what I think it is?

I'm going to assume so, knowing us, because hellyeah we are passionate about their passion and there is passion is...well, *clear throat* what were we talking about?

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-Nayab-

@-Nayab-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#77

🤣...

Unfortunately not 😲 😆...

But I was gonna go that way with Bonnie's promising him anything 😉 🤣...

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-DhruviBear(:

@-dhruvi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Oh Nayu, you just broke it. Does this make me the dirtiest bamonator? In a way I like it, in a way I don't. TBH fanforum influenced this view of mine on these two. They are all like me and you but... worse (in a good way).

Oh okay gotcha. So who is treating us with the next part? :D

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-Nayab-

@-Nayab-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#79

I guess it does 😆...

The fanforum sounds like my kinda place 😉 🤣...

I dunno 😛, PM'd Radz your PM 😆... Like she asked... Yaz thinks Radz is doing it, so let's see 🤣...

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-DhruviBear(:

@-dhruvi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#80

Honestly, I was like aweee these two may be bantering atm but they will be the cutest. And i was thinking of these nice cheesy scenes. and as I share my 'goody-two-shoes' scenes they make them turn into these...very bad things. Which made my mouth drop, yet I liked it...bad as it is. And then I come here and turn you into what they've turned me. We are irreverisble, at least I am.