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Posted: 15 years ago

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Sent it 😛...

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Day Two posted on PAGE 4.

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-Nayab-

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Dhruvi... I'm getting all excited at the comments 😆... I can't believe everyone loved it 😛...

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Dhruvi hun i already posted that on page 1... becuase both part 1 and 2 happened on the same day!!!! you were supposed to post the 3rd part.... sori hun.... i should have wriiten that before to avoid confusion..😳

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The following minutes were filled with silence. Only the sound of one wave hitting another could be heard as Bonnie stared at her Grams in utter surprise.

For days after Grams death, all Bonnie did was cry and live in utter misery, mourning the one person she loved the most and thought of as her mentor. But now, Bonnie was more than overwhelmed seeing her Grams standing in front of her, with that soft wrinkly smile that she'd never thought she'd see again.

'Gr-Grams' whispered Bonnie, still unable to believe that this was actually happening.

'Yes my child' Grams smiled warmly, then seeing Bonnie's tears she frowned, 'I thought you would be happy to see me here child?'

'Of course I am Grams' Bonnie said coming out of her stoic trance, 'I just...I can't believe that your actually here', she continued smiling.

Then not wasting another second she ran and pulled her Grams into a bone crushing hug. 'I missed you so much Grams, so much.'

Meanwhile Damon stood aside watching the whole scene quietly. He would have bought Bonnie here sooner, but back then she blamed him for her Grams death and wouldn't give him the time of the day. But as they gradually became 'closer' he decided the best time to bring here, to this magical island, would be on her birthday. Hence the surprise birthday party.

However what Damon did not count on, was experiencing this weird warm feeling, everytime he saw Bonnie smile. He accepted a while back that he 'may' have some feelings for Bonnie. But he decided not to act on it. Well apart from the occasional playful kisses, he decided not to act on it! Damon had already loved once and had gotten burned by it, and there was no way in hell he was going through that ride again. Hell in his opinion love was overrated! This love seemed to work for some people but not for others and he fell into the latter group.

Besides Bonnie was pure and innocent and he... well he was not... She deserved someone better...someone who was not damaged goods....and that someone was not him. Sure he had seen her giving him those intense looks when she thought that he wasn't looking and then deny it when he confronted her. Sure he had never met anyone as fierce yet caring like her. Sure he can't deny that sizzling chemistry they have, a chemistry so strong that it made what he and Katherine had look like a small weak spark in comparison.

Yet he still decided to ignore his feelings.... because Damon Salvatore no longer believed in love. Damon Salvatore was a free man... he may be fiercely loyal and go to any lengths to protect the people he cares about. But he would never let another woman have control over his heart. Not even sweet little Bonnie Bennett.

But deep inside even Damon knew that after 165 years he had finally met his match. That Bonnie Bennett was his equal in every possible way. And that if there was one woman that could truly devote herself to him...then that woman was Bonnie.

But would Damon give in...or would he let his fears control him.... and throw away another chance at happiness????

As that last thought went through his mind, he felt a hand on his shoulder......

i know i know...utterly crappy and sappy...but nothing else was coming to mind...😳

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-Nayab-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Yaz... That was not utterly crappy AT ALL! I loved it...The insight into his emotions and feelings was great and you still made it sound like Damon 👏...

Only one complaint though 😛...

Why was it so short? 😔 😆...

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-DhruviBear(:

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Oops , new part fixed. Day 3: Part 1 with the same link (:

BTW Yaz, what are you crazy? That was not crap, far from! I abs loved it. You give another level of depth to Damon and managed to do so in a stunning way. I like the direction you took it. He's admiting to himself he likes Bonnie, that's she is meant for him *thud* awesome job!

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Originally posted by: -Nayab-
Yaz... That was not utterly crappy AT ALL! I loved it...The insight into his emotions and feelings was great and you still made it sound like Damon 👏...

Only one complaint though 😛...

Why was it so short? 😔 😆...

lol....thanx Nay...glad u liked it....😳

it was short because i didn't know what else to write...😆

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Originally posted by: dhruvi.
Oops , new part fixed. Day 3: Part 1 with the same link (:

Thanx hun....i'll PM everyone 2mro....just one more thing... it's supposed to be Day 2 not 3...😆

BTW Yaz, what are you crazy? That was not crap, far from! I abs loved it. You give another level of depth to Damon and managed to do so in a stunning way. I like the direction you took it. He's admiting to himself he likes Bonnie, that's she is meant for him *thud* awesome job!

LOL...thanx alot.... i kinda struggled to write this bit becoz i didn't know which direction to take it...

so i thought maybe i should take an easier route and write about whats going on in Damon's mind...😆..