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-dhruvi thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
*thud* Like seriously, never have I gotten such an amazing review before. OMG! Thank you so much love. Now I'm the one speechless, here. I know my worries get annoying. and yet everytime you say scare them away by such nice words. This has to be top 3 nicest comments to me online on my writing. OMG thank you so much Nayu 🤗
Will PM you tonight or tom on my ideas. True Beauty is my guilt pleasure, LOL, so gotta go! Thank you so much once again. (:
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-Nayab- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
No problem 😊... Haven't I said you worry for no reason? 😛... Glad to be in your top 3 😆...
-dhruvi thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
^ yes you have. so I stop here (;
Anhdara13 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
ohmygosh, D, that was beautiful! The emotions were so real, and palpable. *squee* I love that he's protecting her now because of her and not because of Emily. So sweet, and the twist! Gah, epic.
-dhruvi thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
^ OMG thank you so much love! I totally forgot her getting him out the tomb is tech saving him, so I had to use it here. BTW I kinda owe it to you in a way. My orginal plan was must diff and then your part helped shape this 'epic' turn.
441240 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#66
hey will one or more of you galz reply to all the comments on the ff thread...
u lot are MUCH better at it then me...im kinda rubbish at responding to comments..... 😳
-Nayab- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
Ooh there's comments already? 😛...
Will do soon 😃...
-Nayab- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
Done:

She let him go, looking up to meet her teary eyes with his now warm eyes. "How Damon? How do I see her?"

Stepping back a little he smiled at her, not his usual smirk but a genuine smile of happiness, happiness at seeing her so joyful, Watching her now he realized how much Grams' death had affected her, since the day her Grams had died, he'd sensed a constant sadness lurking behind her cheerful faade, but today, today it was as if the old Bonnie was back.

'Before you can see her, there's a few things you should know' He grimaced slightly at what he was about to tell her, hoping it wouldn't change her mood. ' You can only see or talk to

the Bennett's on your birthday's or in times of great need.'

'Ok. Anything else?'

'Ok? That's all you've got to say?' he'd expected a reaction but not this, this wasn't Bonnie like at all.

'Uhhh Bonnie, are you ok?' Reaching over, he placed the back of his palm on her cheek.

'I'm fine you idiot.' Bonnie ground out, removing his hand from her cheek. 'Can you just get on with it?'

'Now now, my fiery little BonBon, calm yourself, too much excitement isn't good for such a skinny little body like yours' He smirked. 'you're like one of those jumpy little jack in the boxes'

'Stop it.'

'Stop what?'

'That eye thing, that you're doing'

'What, eye thing?' Damon asked innocently.

'Uggh whatever, Forget I said anything' Bonnie struggled to control the urge to set him on fire, after all she reasoned, she did need him to show her how to see Grams.

'So how do I see her?' Bonnie was almost jumping with excitement.

'You have to say this spell, 3 times' Damon took out a paper from his pocket and handed it to Bonnie. 'But, the spell lasts for 4 hours only, which means''

'' I can only see Grams for 4 hours' Bonnie finished.

Damon nodded.

'You know what? I don't care.' Bonnie grinned. 'Up until today I thought I'd never see Grams again. Now I can. So nothing you tell me will affect how I'm feeling right now.' She knew she was revealing to much of herself, her emotions, to Damon, but she didn't care, she was gonna see her Grams again!

'Ok, so close your eyes, say the spell 3 times and picture your Grams in your head, unless of course you're planning a Bennett Family reunion? In which case you better tell me now because I'm pretty sure Emily's still ****** at me for biting you, or rather her' His brow creased in confusion. 'I need to be prepared' He grinned, his lopsided grin at her.

Reading the spell over a few times, Bonnie closed her eyes and took a deep breath.

'I, call upon the powers that be, to bring together Bennett's past and present'

Low whispers started, As she repeated the spell, she felt the air change slowly around her, The ghostly whispers grew louder and louder, building to a crescendo, as she repeated the spell one last time the whispers stopped abruptly, she felt a whoosh of air go past her. Slowly opening her eyes Bonnie looked around.

Nothing. Just Damon stood in front of her grinning infuriatingly. Her spirits dropped. She should've known this was all a ruse to get her here. Just the two of them. That was low, even for him. Her disappointment and sadness was replaced by anger. How dare he! He knew how much this had meant to her.

'I swear to God Damon, I'm gonna make you regret making a fool out of me.' Her eyes flashed in anger.

Damon just stood there grinning at her, fuelling her anger even more. She advanced towards him, scowling. As she got closer, Damon moved away. Bonnie stopped dead in her tracks.

Grams stood in front of her.

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Whoever continues let me know if you want the PM Dhruvi sent to me (with suggestions 😆)...
-dhruvi thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
*thud* *thud* *thud* RESERVED for now, I have to leave. I shall be back on tonight or tom with a full review.
TOO FREAKING GOOD LOVE.
441240 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#70
loved it.. absolutely fantastic.... ⭐️

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