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If I were to grade the characters according to my choice, then ...........

Sammy, Arwen & Samarth ............

Hey Arwen ................

skepy little later i will reply to ur povs...am at work srtuck....and samrath ur post too but i must add i am tempted to write what i would have shown in end so will do so too

Sorry Skep ... obviously i agree with what u have written ... and i'll try to come up with something also ... its just ... i ve alot of working coming up and am really bz .... i cant seem to just sit down and think write ... too preoccupied i guess but i'll try to come up with my own points

For most part we agree with the Skeptical's analysis, especially the manner of wrapping up the serial in such a hurried way, when so many threads were hanging loose. And this, when serial was generating high TRPs, so unlike our hard to remove overstretched soaps.

Arfeen is truly left unattended midway but we like to imagine that ultimate healing and reconciliation was already on the course … as hinted by director with relevant reminiscences of Sara. We would love to believe that Saba in Sara will ultimately prevail…and she was yet to know the entire past…grand mom's connivance, Arfeen's life long pain and Saba's last but one letter to Arfeen 20 years ago before disappearing. The Sara-Haider short interlude leaves much to be said but then the director was always rushed up on their track if we recall their courtship track.

But what I disagree is the 'lip service' forgiveness. For us, her forgiveness was complete, sincere and one of the most beautiful aspect of the tale. Only that kind of forgiveness could have infused such a peace, contentment and strength of character in her- fusing her to her Allah, ability to stay dethatched ('nisanga' ) and a state of sublime happiness unspoiled by any trace of bitterness.

The reasons to believe this are-

-When she forgave the main antagonist, the dialogue was… "Allah ke liye maine aapko maaf kiya." …with a very significant grasping of her tormentor's trembling fingers. And first word she used here was Allah…A word she was in love with even before Arfeen, a word she has not invoked even at the time of her worst crises. Besides she had come there on her own, with out an iota of interest in impressing or reclaiming anyone and all. And it was extremely painful for her to cross that road again but yet she came.

-Saba's concerns for Arfeen as described by the manager when returning from Sahibabibi's house as well as from Haider's recollections.

-Her last letter and last directive.

-Very powerful reminiscence of Sara where her mother beautifully explains the power of forgiveness…with simple dialogues… " Takleef?...wo to rehi hi nahi!" Speaking as one who was injured.

-And this must have ultimately saved/redeemed her family…Arfeen, Sara and Haider.

Our POV.

Originally posted by: skeptical

Sammy, Arwen & Samarth ............

I am going to write the concluding chapters of this story the way I would have liked to have seen it happen. Like MRD my way .......... only its not going to be that long. Just three chapters.

1. Introspection of Sara

2. Interlude betw Sara and Haider

3. Final Judgement

Oh and in case you wonder why.......... its because I want reprieve for Arfeen........

Now this is a bonus we will eagrly look forward to.👏

Originally posted by: skeptical

Hey Arwen ................

I write 6 long posts and what dyu write at the end of it? Three words...I can't wait.

Wah wah ........ a little unfair dont you think? Did you agree with what I said and if not what are yr views?

Originally posted by: samarth_050

I Second this.

Sami too.😆

kya karoon ..samrath ji a woman dropped her small dog down in a party on weekend,i have my hands full of that but i am going to come with biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig post soooooooooon..who knows may be even tonight,that would be ur morning......😆😆😆😆😉